Hey all, so this is me procrastinating wrapping present and making my mom her angels. I'm too lazy but you all should be happy cause it means more story for you.

This is in Frankie's point of view. I'm not too sure what a comatose can or can't do as I never been in one and I don't think I knew anyone who has but Frankie is alive still.

I think a comatose can hear and feel and stuff they just can't respond. This one was more Nick/Frankie centered anyway so he'll break her free.

Joe: So were actually getting her back?

Me: Duh Joseph, my gosh I'm not that evil

Nick: No you're just turning into a less evil Chibi clone

Me: Well Chibi is awesome and has a great writing style but then so does my friend Snoupy

Nick: Her I like, she makes me with Macy

Macy: yeah she is cool, now come on boys lets let the author fix your sister

Kevin: Yeah just don't let her near my guitars

Me: *steals one*

Kevin: Hey

Me: enjoy *runs away*

Frankie's POV.

My eyelids feel so heavy. I can hear them though. I so badly want to wake but I can't. I feel like I'm in a maze and I can't find my way out.

They left again and I'm surrounded in darkness. I'm so scared. It was just supposed to be fun. Become a cute cheerleader and get to be the most popular kid in school. Hey I wanted my own popularity, not easy being known as just princess in school.

I just wish I hadn't acted dumb. I didn't get a spotter which on day one we were told was important. Just like in swimming, you need a friend there to help out.

I thought I could achieve it all on my own though. Now I just hope I can get out of this maze and back home.

I think a few hours have passed maybe longer but my door opens finally. I can't tell who it is but I bet it's my brother Nicky. I think he blames himself for this.

It wasn't him though. Not all of him. I already wanted to be perfect. I always wanted to be like him, Kevy and Joey.

I can feel him take my hand and for a second I can move it. Nick seems to jump away but the nurse says it was nothing. After all I am still alive just unconscious.

Stupid nurse. I can't seem to move again though not till he touches me.

"I'm sorry Franks, please wake up, please don't die because of me"

It pains me to hear him talk like this. I guess it is a little his fault but mostly mine. All he did was advice me to make my moves as perfect as I could and I overdid it.

"There you are Nick"

More voices. It's Joey and probably Kevy is here too. "Mike says he saw you race out after school" Kevy says.

"She's still so still" Nicky answers. That's our bro, no apology whatsoever.

"She took a hard fall but its not your fault Nick, she's nine and so very smart, she just got too crazy, remember you done that before?" Kevin asks.

I perk up. I don't remember Nick crashing like me. It's quiet a second before Nick talks but luckily he still holds my hand.

"Yeah, it was three years ago, you three were all at sleepovers and mom and dad were out on a date so it was me alone" Nick was saying.

He sighs. "Mom and dad were skeptic with leaving me alone as I was only fourteen but soon I was alone and I remember I never even slept more than an hour and then when you all came home I missed the pole being so tired and broke my arm in three places" he adds.

I remember that now. Nick seemed to be always in a hospital with first diabetes and then he got music crazy.

"Exactly and I know it's a little different but I know our sister, Frankie is alive and will wake up when she is ready, you know how stubborn she is when she is tired" Joey says.

Nicky nods and my hand is released. NO! I was so close to the end but now I'm back in darkness.

Joe comes over and squeezes my hand. Weird I feel a little tingle but not enough to break free. He kisses my head but he can't give me enough light to help me.

Same goes with Kevin as he does the same as Joe and then they leave me.

I hope Nicky returns soon. I think with his help I can return tomorrow. I go back to the darkness and curl up in my maze. Please hurry big brothers.