Divergent: Training Initiates: A Short

by Divergent Everything

Imagine if the war never happened and Jeanine was a nice lady. . Imagine if Tris turned seventeen and begin to administer the tests, and train initiates with Tobias. Imagine if the factionless children were allowed to take the test. Imagine if the cohort was bigger because its unrealistic there is so little people in the cohort. Well, I've done those things for you.

10. Chapter 10

Thank you for so many follows and favourites! Thank you to the two people who reviewed. To the guest that reviewed, yes, I will try to update more often, and I'm sorry I did not update yesterday. Continue to review, favourite and follow this story!

RENELLA'S POV

"Renella," I hear. I know I am in a dream. It's my mother. I lean forward to kiss her. I miss her and I want to see her face one more time, even if its just a dream. Just then, the dream ends and I wake up.

I move towards the same boxing room as I did yesterday and I peer at the blackboard.

Darren VS Marthy

James VS Johanna

Patinaurus VS Ivan

Mickey VS Valtor

Nightshade VS Mila

Elwira VS Jessica

Renella VS Edward

Ruth VS Constance

Justin VS

Edward? Whatever. I'll fight him. Our fight is second to last, so I have to wait six matches before my turn. The first two initiates, Darren and Marthy, step into the boxing ring.

TRIS' POV

"You may start!" I shout.

Darren and Marthy stand close to each other. I start timing. I wonder who will win.

The fight between Darren and Marthy took thirty-four minutes, nearly reaching 35. I record their score down.

RENELLA'S POV

I wince as Four announces that it is my turn to fight. I kick Edward in the shoulder and he falls to the ground and goes unconscious. What?! Just one kick!? It has only been five minutes. Four announces that I have won and I leave the boxing ring.

During lunch, I just grab two muffins and then I go towards the infirmary. Good. No one. I walk to Edward's side. He has awoken already. I apologize to him, with tears streaming down my eyes. I hate to see people unconscious. Fortunately, he forgives me.

I head down the corridors of the Dauntless compound when suddenly I hear a voice calling my name.

"Renella," says the voice. "You've been crying."

I turn around to see an initiate, a Dauntless born. Brudus.

"Hi," I say, casually.

"Hi, Renella," he replies. "Why were you crying?"

"I knocked someone out during initiation today. Unconscious bodies make me cry. Oh, and, how's your initiation doing?"

"It's great."

"What's your rank?"

"24 out of 41."

"2 out of 18."

Although I scored higher than him, I bet I cannot take down him, nor any other Dauntless born. I was born in Abnegation. Before Dauntless, I am not allowed ot fight unless it is really, really needed.

And in our utopia, it is never really, really needed.

Brudus leads me down another Dauntless corridor. I laugh. He brings me to the entrance of the Dauntless compound. I see a girl older than me, who looks like me, with tattoos all over her body. Annette. I hardly recognize her.

"Annilla wants to see you," says Brudus. Annilla. So she got a new Dauntless name.

"Renee," says Annette, or Annilla, my sister. (Author's Note: Remember her from Chapter Five?)

"Renella," I correct.

"How's initiation?" she asks.

"I was ranked second out of eighteen initiates," I say.

"Well, we'll see each other again," she says, then she turns away.

"So, you know her," says Brudus.

"Yes, why?"

"She was ranked first in Dauntless initiation. I nearly vomit. Annette? The kind and gentle Abnegation girl? First in Dauntless initiation? I hardly believe that. Just then the bell rings.

TRIS' POV

(Time Laspe: After shooting for that day ends, only a few hours time laspe)

It's dinner time. The initiates pile out of the training room, and Tobias instructs them to come back later to view the results. I calculate the scores. This is not easy.

After their fights, the initiates were tasked with shooting and throwing of butterknives. It is not easy, but it is even harder trying to calculate the results. I frown as I scribble those numbers on my piece of paper. I didn't know Dauntless can have Erudite activities.

RENELLA'S POV

When I first chose Dauntless, I could feel the joy and excitement feel me. Finally, I could leave Abnegation. I had spent the entire night drawing on a piece of paper the advanrages and the disadvantages of three factions, Abnegation, my faction of origin and birth, Candor, one of the factions on my Aptitude Test and Dauntless, the other faction on the Aptitude Test. Dauntless had the most advantages and the least disadvantages so I chose Dauntless. And I don't seem to regret.

I take a hamburger and gobble it up. From the corner of my eye, I see Annette, I see Annilla, my sister. I nearly cry. But I don't.

Tris said the results will come out ten minutes after training for today. I look at my watch. Nine minutes. I follow my friends, Jessica, Patinaurus and Ivan to the training room. A lot of initiates are already there. Tris walks in and hangs a blackboard into the front wall.

The first person to look at the results is Elwira. She runs of crying. I have no idea why. When it reaches my turn, I look at the results eagerly.

1. Renella

2. Justin

3. Nightshade

4. Ruth

5. Patinaurus

6. Ivan

7. Valtor

8. Jessica

9. Johanna

10. Marthy

11. Mila

12. Darren

13. Constance

14. James

15. Mickey

16. Edward

17. Elwira

First? How can I be first? I scroll down to the bottom of the list to see Elwira's name at the bottom. No wonder.

Sorry for so many author's notes, but it was needed. Thank you all for reading this story! Can we get to 20 follows, 13 favourites, 13 reviews and 3000 views by the time I post my next chapter? I will announce my 20th follow, 13th favourite, 13th review and 3000th view if I do! Meanwhile please contact me in any of these forms:

Fanfiction: Divergent Everything

Kik: royalflames123

Instagram: infinitymagic123

Gmail: dmathaj