Hi I' am new to this so I hope you guys like it. If I made a few errors I apologize because this is my first time doing this and am not really good at this but if you guys like it.
I will be glad to get your opinion about my fanfiction and that's about it.
btw the characters are not mines, they're cartoon networks except water prince because he's my Original Character (OC) but the rest of the story is mines also i added 2 new characters but these 2 characters are my original characters (OC) they're called
Ice Prince and Water Prince Also the characters I'm doing it on are out of characters so the Fionna that I'm doing the story about I'm making her in a different way from her original version So I apologize If you guys think she's too girly It's because I made her like that so she's ( OOC )
anyways lets continue :
Last time on Adventure Time with Fionna and Cake : Fionna asked FP out on a date he said yes and now Fionna is getting
ready for their date well lets continue ,
...Later at Fionna's Tree house were Fionna and Cake were...
" OH MY GLOB CAKE MY DATE WITH FP IS IN 1 HOUR WHAT DO I DO? "
...Fionna starts freaking out but cake calms her down...
" Honey calm down Everything is going to be okay now the first thing you should do is take a bath now go and take your bath sweety
while I make your dress "
...Fionna calms down...
" Okay thanks Cake "
" No problem Honey "
...Fionna opens the bathroom door locks it and turns the hot water on...
" There that should do it "
...Fionna takes her clothes off when suddenly she realizes that someone is starring at her and tells that person to show himself...
" OKAY WHOEVER YOU ARE CO-COME OUT OF THERE OR ELSE! "
...Fionna stutters...
" HE HE Well If you say so my cute Little bunny "
...That person reveals himself to Fionna and Fionna gets surprised at the person that was starring at her naked...
" HOLY GLOB IT'S YOU! "
" Well I do Have a name FI "
." MA-MARSHALL LEE! "
...Fionna stutters nervously...
" Yep that's me so FI last time I saw you naked was when you were 5 remember "
" Shut it you know I was very little and innocent so I didn't have anyone to take a bath with well besides Cake and
you were my first friend and besides It was only because I didn't wanna take my bath alone and you took a bath with me
but this time is different because I'm 17 and your 113 anyways get out I'm gonna take my bath alone in peace and quiet
NOW GET Y-YOU PERVERTED VAMPIRE! "
...Marshall Lee gets near Fionna making Fionna's face get completely red and making her get nervous with her body
completely naked showing him her upper area and lower area...
" Come on FI haven't you ever wonder what TIER 15 is huh well do you wanna know what It Is , well do you? "
" NO WAY DUDE YOU'RE ALREADY CREEPING ME OUT SO PLEASE GET OUT BEFORE I CALL CAKE "
...Marshall Lee nods his head...
" NOPE , I'M STAYING HERE TO SEE THE SHOW I EVEN BROUGHT A FEW STRAWBERRY TO CHEW ON "
...Fionna punches Marshall Lee into the ground...
" GET THE GLOB OUT OF HERE MAR-MARSHALL LEE! "
...Fionna stutters...
" Come on FI you know we could do tier 15 here just the two of us "
...Marshall Lee gets so close to Fionna that his chest squeezes Fionna's Upper area...
" I-I-I SAID G-GET OUT OF HE-HERE YOU PERVERT! "
...Fionna stutters at the point that her whole face turns completely RED...
" FI don't be like that now come here I wanna hug you my little cuddle bunny "
...Marshall Lee takes his shirt off , grabs Fionnas arm and pulls her naked and soft skin towards his cold bare chest...
" YOU PERVERT GET OFF ME! "
...Marshall Lee starts licking Fionna's neck and goes down towards her soft bare boobs making Fionna blush all red...
" ST-STOP THIS MA-MARSHALL! "
" NEVER! "
...Fionna starts moaning and from outside cake hears a noise coming from Fionna's bathroom and knocks the door...
" ST-STOP MA-MARSHALL LEE "
...Cake knocks the door...
" Sweety are you okay you sound a bit strange is everything okay in there? "
...Fionna covers Marshall Lee's mouth...
" Yeah I'm okay I'm drying myself I'll be outside in a minute "
" Okay honey and hurry up because I have 2 surprises for you "
" Really what is it? "
" both Gumball and FP are here they wanna see you "
...Fionna punches ML into the floor and finishes her bath right next to the perverted vampire...
" Hey Fi wanna do it? "
" Stop that ML let me finish my bath please "
" Aww fine but next time we'll do it! "
" Sure whatever you say ML oh and one more thing I wanted to tell you "
" And what would that be FI? "
...Fionna opens the door , throws ML outside her bathroom and tells Cake loudly that ML spied on her
and tried doing tier 15 with her...
" CAKE , FP AND PG MARSHALL LEE SPIED ON ME AND TRIED DOING TIER 15 ON ME! "
...PG, FP and Cake run all the way to were Fionna and ML were seeying Fionna in her bath towel
all wrapped up half naked...
" FIONNA OH MY GLOB DID MARSHALL LEE SPIED ON YOU? "
" BABY IS WHAT FP SAYING TRUE DID ML SPIED ON YOU? "
...Fionna nods her head and throws Marshall Lee in front of her...
" HE HE OH HEY PG , FP AND CAKE :) "
...CAKE GRABS ML BY THE NECK AND THROWS HIM OUT OF THE WINDOW...
" OUCH THE SUN IT BURNSSSSS "
...CAKE THROWS AN UMBRELLA AT ML...
" HERE GET THIS AND GET OUT OF HERE! "
" OKAY THANKS CAKE AND FI SEE YOU LATER BABY BUNNY "
...3 hours Later after everyone Left and only Cake , Fionna and FP were alone...
" Fionna Are you ready for our date? "
" Yeah I'm coming "
...Fionna Appears with a beautiful white dress with yellow sunflowers that Cake made for Fionna...
" Well what do you think FP ( Flame Prince)? "
" WOW Fionna you look beautiful "
" Umm thanks FP "
...Fionna blushes...
" No problem Fionna shall we go? "
...Fionna nods her head...
" Yeah Let's go "
" Bye honey have fun "
" Bye Cake I will "
...Later on in the park were Fionna and Flame Prince were...
" Flame Prince I brought some sandwiches want some? "
" Yeah sure give me one "
" Okay here "
...Fionna gives FP a sandwich...
" yum this is delicious did you make this Fionna? "
...Fionna nods her head...
" Yeah I made it Last night "
" Nice I like it your good at cooking? "
" Yeah I've always been a fan of cooking I think If I remember The first thing I made when I was Little was
chocolate chip cookies and strawberry cookies 4 for me and the ones with strawberry I gave them to ML "
" So Marshall Lee was your first friend besides Cake? "
...Fionna nods her head...
" Yeah Marshall Lee was my first best friend he was my best bud whenever I had nightmares I would usually
sneak out of my house and go to his house and sleep next to him while he sings me a lullaby which It usually used to
put me to sleep but not anymore then after Marshall Lee I met Prince Gumball ( PG ) and to me he was
my First Crush even thought every time I tried confessing my love for him he would just either laugh or reject me
in a serious tone "
...Flame Prince Looks at Fionna...
" WOW FIONNA I NEVER KNEW THIS PART OF YOU "
" FP DON'T MENTION THIS TO MARSHALL BECAUSE I NEVER TOLD HIM THIS AND EVEN IF I DID HE WOULD JUST
LAUGHT AT THAT ANYWAYS PLEASE KEEP IT A SECRET BETWEEN US YOU KNOW AS FRIENDS "
...FP gets sad...
" OH just friends? "
" Yeah why FP you thought we were going to be more than friends? "
...Flame Prince nods his head...
" Well yeah but I guess I was a bit too foolish thinking we were going to be more than friends "
" Wait a second FP you're not a fool or a bad person I just wanted a simple date that's all "
" Oh okay Fionna "
...2 hours Later when it was dark already...
" Well Fionna I better be going anyways thanks for today "
" No problem FP oh and one more thing FP come here "
" Sure Fionna "
...FP get's near Fionna and Fionna gives FP a kiss on the lips for at least 1 minute...
" Umm that was for uh today FP "
...both Fionna and Flame Prince blush at the kiss they gave each other...
" Umm okay well uh bye Fionna "
" Bye FP "
...Suddenly Marshall Lee appears in back of Fionna...
" HEY FI "
...Fionna turns around and sees Marshall Lee...
" OH MY GLOB MARSHALL LEE DIDN'T YOU LEARN YOUR LESSON AFTER WHAT HAPPENED IN THE BATHROOM "
" To be honest I came back to tell you I'm sorry I didn't mean to see you naked and to scare you and too act all
perverted so that's about it well uh Bye FI "
...Fionna Grabs Marshall Lee's t-shirt...
" Wait don't go "
" Why not? "
" Because I wanted to Ask you something? "
...Marshall Lee looks at Fionna with a cocky smirk on his face...
" Well what is it .. hold on don't tell me you changed your mind and you want me to show you
what tier 15 is "
...Fionna get's mad...
" WHAT THE GLOB IS WRONG WITH YOU ML YOU USED TO BE SO KIND AND GENTLE NOT A PERVERT! "
" I'm still the same Marshall you met and anyways I'm a guy I have needs and right now my needs is you as in tier 15 you "
" YOU'RE A PERVERT! "
...Marshall Lee starts laughing his ass off...
" Well you're a scared little bunny that still doesn't want to learn what tier 15 is "
" You know what I don't even wanna know so good bye Marshall "
" Wait Fi don't go "
...To be continued...