Sorry for being so direct but I need to do something RIGHT NOW
Viate
Butterflies
I'm about to call the police
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So now ... hello here is you dear friend the Doctor Corvus Griffin Strange specialized in the extermination of mostly any thing that can exist (apart from God ... he is a nice guy, oh and Sama- I mean Lucifer too)
First thing first I know this chapter is REALLY short and ... well here is another review which will complete this sentence
ichika aono
Ok I dont have much to say much about this chapter. Though I do hope at some point they give him some bullets for his gun. Now for the costume I'm thinking basically what his normal villain suit is. Vest, button up and slacks maybe a blazer. But it be made of something like Kevlar and is cut and blast resistant. Also a mask that covers his eye region and points down the nose. It also produces green mist/gas to hide his face a bit more. Now for the Flash thing. I didnt know you were talking about intro to an episode. I have seen things like that with the show Supernatural I thought you were saying like at the end of a show where they give kinda previews of whats to come in the next episode. I look forward to reading more. Till the next one.
It's fine if you doesn't have anything to say about the chapter, beside I'm always happy to answer the cra- I mean the wonderful review they send me or the question they ask. When it comes to the costume ... okay for the Kevlar, okay for the full mask (I wanted something like this anyway) but the green mist ... nip sorry no green in this story, I will take black and ... well purple and dark blue are fine (I love purple :D)
AND HERE COMES THE INTERESTING PART ! The Flash intro ... yes I meant an intro not a preview and that's great you talk about of preview because since this chapter is relatively short I will give you a preview
(It's short mostly because I back at school and it God I'm being flooded with their exams ... my chemistry teacher is great but damn his test are kinda hard)
Logargon
Holy shit ... this moment where I just realized what I've been missing all my life
Haven't read this chap yet but I just need some time to internalize some of this stuff
BEST STORY, just the concept of using the first my hero aca villain as a semi good guy was just inspired and I love having eri in the story so early. Also I love how I can't tell in all for one is chaotic good/natural or just evil and I love how eri and Tomura are gonna be disintegration siblings
Welcome to the wonderful world of fanfiction where ... well almost nothing is impossible (trust me I saw horrors humanity shall never discover) and no all fanfiction aren't about Yaoi (No racist or homophobia HERE AGAIN I'M NOT THIS KIND OF PERSON !)
Internalize as much as you want (most of my stories are fucked up any way)
Glad to hear you enjoy reading it so far ! And about All for One ... well being "evil" has a price but hey no one is always completely heartless (I said never completely it doesn't mean there aren't douchbags in the post ... sadly)
"A-All mi-might ?"
Inko was, to say in a simple way, shocked ... she didn't manage immediately process what All might said about Izuku since he revealed himself to be the skeleton which stood in front of her a few seconds ago ... but how ?
"H-how ? Is-is this a joke ? Y-you can't be All Might i-it's a transformation quirk r-right ?!" She asked as she regained her composure
"No ... I am All Might but ... not the one you used to know" All Might explained "How he ended up with his scar and why it is currently weakening him" without revealing anything about All for One or One for All of course ... and then when Inko digested all those informations she finally asked.
"How did you meet Izuku ?"
"... I will tell you everything this time ... I was looking for a villain with a quirk that makes him able to steal other people's body, I was directed toward this "sludge villain and when I though I cornered him I accidentally attacked young Izuku instead, I stayed with him until he recovered but then he wanted to ask me something and I was already in the air ... we stopped on a roof and he saw my true form ... I have him the same explanation and then I answered his question-"
"He asked you if he could still be a hero without a quirk right ? ... tell me All Might I have to know"
All Might took his breath and continued
"You are right ... and ... I didn't think much about this, I considered what I knew about heroes and my experience in the profession ... there was just-"
"Y-you ... you said no ... YOU SAID NO YOU HEARTLESS BASTARD ?! How could you ?" Inko stood up and picked up her chair to throw it at All Might but she just ended up missing and falling in tears on the ground.
"Miss Midoriya ... Inko please-"
"C-c-coul-dn-t you c-co uhhh come u-up with some- some-some ahhuhuh l-less viole-ent ?" Inko tried hard to speak correctly under the shock All Might's deed
"I- ... I tried to talk with him but ... he wasn't listening, I was weak, powerless he just walked toward the edge of the rooftop and jumped ... I only saw him the next day in this alley with the villain ... but it was too late and I lost him ... this is all my fault that's why I'm focusing in finding him"
"... and you still call yourself a hero ?" Asked coldly Inko "if we ever find Izuku I will make sure to ruin your image, you hear m-" suddendly the door of the interrogation room opened and All Might quickly reverted to his normal appearance. It was Naomasa, he had the time to briefly see All Might in his true form, he could only wonder about what happened in here but there were more important things going on right now.
"We have the results, it's due to a bomb, it's criminal, Toshinori I need you-"
"I'm coming with you" said Inko
"Miss Midoriya you can't-"
"I can ... after all I'm protected by the number one "hero" right ?" Inko specifically expressed her disgust when she pronounced the word but she wasn't blinded by hate, after all All Might was still the strongest person she knew so far.
"... alright ... but don't try anything reckless ... please"
"I'm sorry for this-" After putting back the Nomu in his "cage" All for One went back to his new protégés and he found them hugging each others ... he never stall any psychic quirks, he thought it would just drive him mad combined with All for One ... ohhh how he would have liked to have one and actually understand what was wrong. It was just stupid to think something like this, ofbcoirse something was wrong, this little girl was rescued from a psychopath which experimented days and nights in her just because of her quirk and the next day she is rescued she is attacked by a true monster, a mindless, savage and unstoppable monster "-incident" he finally finished
"There is one last question I have before I leave" said Izuku "How many people received One for All so far ?"
" ... eight ... and soon there will be nine"
"You couldn't defeat them before ?"
"I'm not god, and I believe even the old man can't see everything ... beside ... there is still a part of my brother living in this quirk ... I defeated one of them, All Might's master to be exact, she was called "Nana Shimura" but she already gave One for All to him so I couldn't take it ... still during this brief moment when she let down her guard I saw something ... my brother and ... others pushing me away, like if it was alive ... you ... you should just go, I'm calling Kurogiri I'm reaching my limits ... if you ever need to talk again ask Tomura ... he will understand or at least I hope so" All for One almost tripped when he reached his chair, he couldn't stand up anymore ... in only a few seconds the most powerful person Izuku had ever seen was defenceless.
A black portal opened, Izuku carried Eri in his arms and steppes inside. When he got back into the bar Tomura almost ran toward him.
"What happened ?"
"Eri met a Nomu"
Kurogiri let out a small gasp, so he knew about that too ? Tomura didn't seem so concerned ... maybe he expected Izuku to know one day ? Right now he kept looking at Eri
"... are you both okay ? What happened ?"
"We were talking with All for- I mean Sensei and then he asked Eri to stay outside so he could ask me some question but then a few minutes latter Eri was attacked by the Nomu ... she is fine or at least she isn't physically hurt"
Tomura sat back on his chair "good ... I asked Giran to bring us some ammo for your pistol, tomorrow we will start training a bit right ?"
"H-uh oh yes, I mean it's necessary at this point" Izuku looked again at Eri "I'm gonna drop Eri into our room I'll be right back" Izuku went upstairs still carrying Eri in his arms.
...
"Say Kurogiri ... what do you think they talked about ?"
"Ideology ? Sensei is a powerful man when it comes to words"
"... I wonder how this Nomu escaped don't you ?"
"It wouldn't be the first one Tomura"
"And it wouldn't be the last then ? ... I don't suspect Sensei planned something this reckless considering his state. And beside using a decoy just for a recruit isn't that great ... I just hope the girl is fine"
Izuku came back and sat on Tomura's right side
"She is asleep now ... I'm confused, she seems so tired most of the time ... do you have a doctor here ?"
"Sensei does ... it's true she is very white and pretty skinny. I heard you teaching her how to read, you are good at this"
"T-thank"
"Have you considered teaching her how tu use her quirk ?"
"No ... or at least not yet, I don't think it would be such a good idea to put her throught this right now"
"Well that's your choice but it would really help her to be less afraid of her quirk ... But now to change the subject, let's talk about your training, you are ... physically weak"
"No offence taken"
"None intended, and also ... I don't think you know how to use your weapon and you might want to use something else than a pistol"
"Like ?"
"Currently it's your primary and a pistol won't beat an SMG every time ... unless you keep relying on your teammates"
"As I said I'm not really in the "killing people" thing"
"Yes ... so here is my idea ... do you know what's a guardian angel ?"
"... as military talking ?"
"Yes"
"Uh ... it's a sniper hidden somewhere to support and cover his teammates right ?"
"Correct, you will get one but for now we will train you in using a pistol and getting some muscle and fighting skills"
"F-fine thank you Tomura"
Tomura raised his hand and Kurogiri gave him a glass filled with a purple liquid which Izuku assumed was some kind of fruit juice since it didn't smell like alcohol.
"... oh and Eri will get some too when she is ready" stated Tomura as he rotated his glass in the air
Izuku frowned at Tomura, this was the last thing he tough when it came to taking care of Eri.
"Excuse me ?"
"Here is my point, she lives with villains, she might not want to become one but it doesn't she will always be under our protection ... this place could turn into a battleground at any time and villains just likes heroes wouldn't hesitate to hurt her"
"She is not- ... she can't fight yet ! You said it yourself earlier that her physical state wasn't that great and now you say it is necessary to train her ?" Yelled Izuku as a protective father
"Calm down would you ? I didn't said I would turn her into the perfect warrior ... WHEN she will be ready we will start helping her mastering her quirk alright ? And then we will discuss what we could teach her"
"... you really care about her, do you ?" Asked Izuku which made Tomura use his quirk on the glass he was holding
"... oupsy ... uh ... do I look like I care for some bloody little girl ?"
"You really are bad at lying-"
"SO WHAT ?" Tomura stood up and punched the counter "DOES IT MATTERS ?"
"... that's you who should tell me this"
"If only you weren't so useful-"
"I would already be dead ?"
"Mostly" Izuku mentally laughed, Tomura didn't look so motivated to kill him even if he didn't need his talent. His mixed personality was interesting ... Izuku felt good around him, his child temper was clear but the good in him was something else, he had his own vision of justice and even if it sounded like a twisted one his was right.
"... anyway, since you don't have anything to do right now ... how about a game ?" Kurogiri looked surprised when Tomura asked this ... he never asked him such a thing, did he trust Izuku enough or did he just found weird to play with his bartender/transporter/handyman ? ... well he was way older than him and Tomura never considered him as a simple friend, not even a relative.
"Uh ... sure ?"
"Great, meet me in 5 minutes in my room" Tomura stood up and went upstairs, Izuku looked at Kurogiri in an interogative way.
Kurogiri sighed "yes you can win against him and if it's uh ... coop make sure to win most of the time, and when you will be in his bedroom don't make any comment about the global state and/or the odor"
"For real ?"
"I don't remember the last time he cleaned it ... and he never let me in"
"And how long does he plan to play ?"
"Good luck"
"Miss Midoriya stay in the car once we get here"
"Alright ..." Inko accepted after all she had already pushed the line far enough to stay with Naomasa, she was curious to see how exactly he worked on her son's case. She looked by the window ... the sky was grey, it wasn't raining yet but it would definitely.
Naomasa noticed this fact too and they had to hurry, the rain was definitely the last thing he needed, time was against him today.
Toshinori suspected it was a part of "the consequences" Nighteye talked about, something suddendly happens to Inko's house and the rain comes ruining a crime scene full of evidence.
Finally they arrived, not only the house was burnt to the ground by a big crater appeared in the middle of where the house once stood.
"Oh god ..." said Inko fearful as she look throught the window
"... I'm sorry miss Midoriya" Naomasa kept looking at the debris, he parked his car a few meters away and got out, Toshinori was still inside the car with Inko.
Naomasa was quickly contacted by a policeman which had already arrived on the scene
"We were the only ones living here ... at least it's not that bad right ?" Asked Inko
"... Pro heroes never know what they will face, sometimes we can't even be here on time ... it would be foolish to think we can save everyone, even I can't be at two place at the same time ... that's why I keep smiling"
"... how old are you ?"
"It's not a question of age but time now ... I have to find a successor and-"
"A successor ?" All Might made yet another mistake ... maybe he could correct if without doing too much damages
"Yes ... when I will retreat ..." Toshinori sighed "Other pros will try to take my place and fight for it ... especially Endeavor, I don't think he is the kind of hero people should aspire to become ... he is too violent too reckless, he doesn't care about saving people but he has too"
"... of Izuku had a quirk ... do you think he could be a hero ?" Inko waited for an answer but it never came ... she though All Might made the right choice ... if he had said anything that would only have been worse
"... I wonder how is this little girl he talked about, I'm sure that no matter where they are she is in she hands" said Inko slightly smiling as she obersved the smoke coming out from her now burned home.
"Is it okay with you ? I mean ... Tomura seems really motivated about this kind of training"
"Tomura is gonna train me ?" To his surprise Eri was rather happy to hear that
"N-not yet ! But ... he thinks you should be able to defend yourself and mastering your quirk seems to be a good start"
"I'm so excited about this !" Said the little girl jumping up and down on the bed
"Are you even listening ?" Izuku said with a posture clearly showing he had given trying to get Eri's attention
"Yes I am, it's just that I think Tomura is nice"
"I really wonder how you two became friend so quickly ... hum ... since you seem so impatient ... how about we try ?"
"I can ?" She asked with sparkle in her eyes
"Yes ! Let's see" Izuku looked around him and took an apple spice which had not been ate completely "can you try to rewind it into a full apple ?"
"I think so" Eri took the slice from Izuku's hand and focused ... the slice moved in different direction and grew somehow chaoticaly but in the end it was almost a full apple, the only problem seemed to be the fact that the apple wasn't completely round.
"I- ... I DID IT ! LOOK LOOK !" Yelled joyfully Eri as she brought the apple closer and closer from Izuku's face
"That's incredible ! You don't even need to the rest of the apple to rewind it to this state ... or do teleport the rest of it ? ... that's breakingallthelawsofphsyicand-"
"I-Iz-Izuku you are scary"
"SO SORRY ... it's an habit I never really lose ... let's try something else" Izuku took a sheet of paper and divided it in two, he put one part on his desk and gave the other to Eri "I guess you know what to do" she nodded with a smile
She focused again but then something very strange happen, the paper sheet disappeared form her hands, Eri was ... Izuku couldn't tell if she was deceive because she failed or if she was scared again
"I ... I ... I'm so sorry"
"It's fine Eri, you can't always-" then Izuku heard a sound of paper behind him, he looked back and saw the sheet complete again. "Eri ! LOOK ! You made it !"
"B-but, I don't understand"
"You know what it means ?! You can probably rewind things just by looking at them ! That's fantastic, just imagine everything you could do !"
"... Izuku ... can I shown you something ?" Eri's behaviour was strange now
"Yes ... of course, you can tell me everything"
Eri stood up and crawled under the bed, she got out with a paper sheet in her hands
"I saw what you wrote about Tomura ... and ... and I made something for Kurogiri too" she quickly showed a small drawing of Kurogiri which looked very detailed and Izuku was really impressed considering Eri had probably never touched a pen in her life ... but ... then did it mean she WROTE ?
"Eri that's ... that's great ! Can I read it ?"
"Y-yes ... please !"
Kurogi-ri
Quirc : Black misst, can crate- portals with his on- body
Apperance- : seem cOmposed completli of his quirk mist howeve- his neck look uncomplite- and he wears metol- plate probaboy- to protect a aeak point
Izuku didn't cared about all the mistakes in the words, right now he was too proud of Eri to think about anything else, he was crying
"D-did I hurt you ?" Eri asked fearful
"No Eri, you made me happy"
"Is this bad ?"
Izuku hugged Eri
"You are wonderful"
And here is the preview I promised !
in the next chapter :
Izuku starts his training with Tomura and this one asks about the costume Izuku would like
Eri is making progress in mastering her powers ... and also in orthography ... and grammar ... and other things
Inko is about to be in a really weird situation ... (It might completely be out of character here)
And finally Izuku is about to find a helpful friend ... and maybe a bunch of other