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MiraculousDragonmaster: Whoops. But now, I have a feeling I know what's coming next. Why and how Simon is gray.

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Cwoods97: Slade is alive if you were following

The movie Trolls? If it's your story you can have a twist if want to.

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"Hey what are you guys doing?"

Judy was getting up to see the Critters outside of their cage.

"Run!" Amy cried as everyone panicked and ran off in different directions.

Alvin ran up to Judy's face and sneezed glitter into her eyes. "Ah! My eyes!"

Rubbing her eyes, Judy turned around as she started to try and grab the escaping Chipmunks.

"Get back in your cage," Judy said turning to see Big running, "Chef's going to be so mad!"

Just as she was about to grab Theodore, Simon got in front of them and used a spoon as a weapon.

Judy grabs a large Frying pan just as She and Simon were about to fight, Jeanette cried,

"Judy stop!"

Surprised at one of the Chipmunks knowing her name, Judy turned to stare at Jeanette.

"You're in love with King Nick!" she said pointing.

Judy gasped as her secret was revealed. "Umm I don't know what you're talking about?"

Jeanette shook her head as she pulled back the curtain of all the pictures of heart covered Nick's

Judy rushed over there and covered it up. "Umm that's not mine!" she fibbed.

Jeanette pulled another cover, to show Judy's face and Nick face taped to a married couple.

Although most thought it was not possible, Judy was fully capable of blushing.

Judy sighed, "What's the use? He doesn't even know I exist."

"I can help you. What if there's a way we could both get what we want?" Jeanette asked.

Judy got into Jeanette's face. "You like King Nick

too!" she pulled back, "You better back off girlfriend." she made a hissing thing as a Predator.

Jeanette stood there with a disgusted expression. "No. No. Eww no." she said as she took a picture of Slade out, "That Chipmunk, King Nick took. That's Slade. I would do anything to save him."

"The only problem is, is that we can't get anywhere near him without him eating us."

Judynodded her head. "But you can walk right up to him and tell you him how you feel." Jeanette said.

Judy smiled but it disappeared as she said, "As if. I can't just walk right up to him. as if he would just want to talk to a scullery maid."

"What if he didn't know you were a scullery maid? What if you were a total babe?" Jeanette said.

"What type of total babe would be dressed in rag clothes?" Judy questioned.

"What if we got you a new outfit?" Charlene said. "Like a jumpsuit!" Brittany added. "I was thinking the same thing!" Charlene replied.

"What type a total babe could be wearing a jumpsuit if I still have this hair?" Judy said mentioning her short grey hair.

"We can help!" Dale and Chip said.

"But what's the point of a new outfit and new hair if I don't even know what to say to him?" Sally said twiddling her thumbs.

"We can help with that too!" Jeanette chirped.

"Really?" Judy said.

"What do you say Judy? You get us Slade back and we'll get you a date with the King." Jeanette said putting her hand on Judy's.

Judy had a big smile on her face, as she looked for Jeanette to the snack pack and then back at her pictures of King Nick

Looking at them she said, "Let's do it." Judy said.

The Chipmunks cheered as Jeanette said, "A five, six, seven, eight!"

"Let it disappear! All your insecurities!" they started to sing.

"Wait!" Judy said, "Why isn't this one singing?"

Judy was pointing at Simon who was leaning against the wall. Simon looked as he realized they were talking about him.

"Come on Simon sing with us!" Dale said.

"Yeah come on it'll be fun." Brittany and Charlene said.

"Oh no that's okay." Simon said.

"Why? You don't think it'll work?" Judy said in a worried tone.

"No, it's just I don't sing." he said. "Simon!" Jeanette said.

"No he's right this will never work!" Judy cried as she started to cry in her bed again.

The snack pack went to her side and started to comfort her saying words of encouragement. " There, There let it all out. Just go for it girl!" Theodore said.

She cried even louder as Theodore said, "Good, good now reel it in."

Simon rolled his eyes as started to walk away. "Simon! What are you doing? You have to sing." Jeanette said following him.

"I told you before I don't sing." Simon said as he continued to climb the curtain.

"Well you have to this time!" Jeanette said. "I'm sorry I can't." Simon said heading to a window.

"No it's not that you can't it's just you won't!" Jeanette said becoming irritated.

"Fine I won't sing." Simon said becoming aggravated.

"You have to!" Jeanette said.

"No!"

"Yes!"

"No!"

"No? Come on why won't you sing?" Jeanette shouted.

"Because singing killed my mom okay!" Simon yelled back. He frowned, tears stream down his face with rage "Leave me alone."

As he went to go sit down in the corner, Jeanette looked at him with a shocked and confused face.

Cautiously going towards him Amy said, "How did singing kill your Mom? What song was she singing?"

Simon looked up with sad eyes, "I was the one who was the one singing."

Jeanette gasped as Simon's memory went back to when he was just a young kid.

He was holding a rose as he sang, "And I Need You Now tonight. And I need you more than ever. And you'll be holding me tight."

That day I was so lost into singing that I didn't even hear my mother warning me.

"And we'll be going on forever."

Simon was singing on a branch, as his mom listened with a smile. When he turned he saw a human evil eyes . His mom gasped as he cried out, "Simon! Son look out!"

"And we can only be making it right! Cause I need you more than ever-"

Little Simon stopped as he turned to see a giant hand, coming to grab him. His mom, lucky reached him in time and pushed him away.

As Simon fell from the branch, he saw his mom get caught by a hand. As he safely landed on the floor, he turned to look up and see his beloved mother taken away crying out for help.

"Mommy!" Simon cried as the human lady took her away.

Simon sat there as tears came out of his eyes as his blue colors slowly started to drain from him. He was no longer blue, for now he was a grey sad Chipmunk.

Back to the present, Simon laid his hand on the window looking out with a sad gaze. Jeanette stood there with sad eyes as the rest of the pack sing,

"Once Upon a Time there was light in his life. But now there's only love in the dark. Nothing he could say."

"A total eclipse of the heart." Judy finished.

Simon looked down. "I Never sung another note since."

Jeanette put an arm on her shoulder. "Simon, I'm so sorry that this happened. I just always assume you had a terrible voice."

"No, no. It was like an angel's voice at least that's what mom used to say." he said as he turned to finally look at her.

Jeanette had a smile as she gave him a warm hug. "Woah, what are you doing?" Simon said confused, "It's not hug time."

"I know." she replied, "I just thought you needed one."

She continued as the rest of the Chipmunks pulled in for a group hug. Judy hugged the group as well making Simon break away.

"Okay, okay! I'll help but I'm still not singing!" he said.

Jeanette smiled. "Okay people. Hair we go!"

The Chipmunks were all sitting on Judy's head, warming up their voices.

"You gotta let it show." Jeanette started.

Judy let out an excited gasp as all the Chipmunks used their tails, hair (etc) to transform her normal, short hair to long beautiful colorful hair. With a long Tail resembled as a fox tail.

"I'm coming out. I'm coming out."

Simon sat next to Jeanette as the Snack Pack sang. Judy put on her new clothes as she went outside.

" I'm coming out. I'm coming out."

Judy got determination as she started to sing,

"I'm Comin Yo! I'm Coming out like the sun after rain ready to shine no time to be a flame. Feeling good gonna get get. What I what i want gonna show every every body. c'mon. Look at me now my company is so-soarin'. Dudes be impress with the points of and I just don't quit why'd you can't drop a show while I'm shaking my hips and saying!She's coming out!"

Jeanette hive-fived Judy as she heard growling. Realizing she was on top of Sticks the badger who growls ready, but she gave her the sandwich she had.

"No, no, no, no,no this isn't right!" came King Nick's voice, "I'm the King who is bringing back Chipmunkfest and I need something to match!"

King Nick ripped off his napkin bib. "I look like a baby in this! I need a mans bib."

Judy sighed through the window. "Oh he's so beautiful."

"And so are you." Jeanette said. "Oh no what am I doing here I'm just a scullery maid. I gotta get out of here." Judy worried.

"Don't worry Judy," Jeanette said, "We're going to be right here by your side."

"And you tell me what to say?" Judy asked.

"Of course I will!" she confirmed.

"Of course I will." Judy repeated. "Just wait till we get inside."

Nick folded his arms as the Silver said, "Sir I think I have the perfect bib for you!"

"You better. Critterest is tomorrow night!" he said.

He went over to a glass box and opened it. He took out a bib that had red in it and in the middle was an image of a duck.

He put it on over his other bib and squealed. "It even has a little wing!"

"Don't you look like a big boy now!" the Silver said.

"I love it!" he said as he styled himself in the mirror.

"I think you look fat."

Nick scowled as he said, "What?"

Everyone looked at Judy who stood there. "Fat in the p h way. Then strike that pose." Jeanette whispered.

"P H at." Judy said making a pose. Nick's green eyes widened as he glided over to her.

"Woah... Total honesty from a total babe." he said taking her hand, "And who might you be?"

"Uhh." she said waiting for guidance. "Umm she's." Jeanette said looking at her friends.

"Lady." Theodore said.

"Glitter." Alvin added.

"Sparkle!" Eleanor smiled.

"Seriously?" Simon ended.

"My name is Lady Glitter Sparkles seriously." Judy said.

Nick looked at her before bowing, "Well my Lady Glitter Sparkle. Would you care to dine tonight at Charlie's Pizza Rink and Arcade?"

"Would I!" Judy said before saying, "Would I?"

"Yes you'd be delighted." Jeanette said.

"Yes you'd be delighted." Judy said

"Huh, indeed I would." Nick said.

"When are you going to ask him about Slade?" Simon asked.

"Well we got to warm him up first. Don't you know anything about Romance?" Jeanette asked.

"Of course I'm passionate about it." he sarcastically said.

"Really?" Jeanette said.

"Don't you know anything about sarcasm?" Simon said.

"I think I had sarcasm once." Dale winked.

Taking her by the arm Nick said, "I'll take everything. Cause things are going to get messy!" as he closed the door.

Here you go!

I might do a trolls fanfic or the next Generation

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I might finished my I love you a broppy story. if you check it out? if you want?

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