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Heeyy!! I'm back!(unfortunaly) Thank you soooo much for your reviews! They really mean a lot to me... and I wanna know opinions and ideas please. Criticism is welcome as well. I won't bother you anymore, on with the fic.Diclamer:
I don't own Kingdom HeartsFinding you
Chapter 10:
ExploringI ran through the corridors of Disney Castle, looking for Raven to give her the good news. I ran as fast as I could in those huge passageways, until I bumped into someone and lost my balance. I fell on my back, hitting with my head on the floor. As I scratch my head because of the pain someone complains.
"Hey! Watch where you step!" She screamed with her voice echoing through the corridors, but then her voice softened. "Oh… in a rush, are we Kairi?" I lift my head and saw Raven in front of me, extending her hand to help me up. I accepted her help and stood up and I breathed very hard for the running.
"I knew… there was something…" I said trying to catch my breath
"Huh… what are you talking about?" She asked with a confused look in her face.
"You know perfectly what I'm talking about." I said happily and annoyed at the same time. She was always running from the subject.
"No, I don't." She said harshly and annoyed.
"Aw come on! Don't pretend you don't know what I'm talking about!" I insisted. I could see she was a little mad but as soon as my last words left my mouth, her expression became even more annoyed. "You know perfectly that I'm talking about Riku."
"You just can't keep your nose out of that subject can you?" I answered with a negative nod with a grin in my face. She sighs and turned her back at me, walking away.
"Hey where are you going?" I asked
"Somewhere far away from you."
"Come on, I need to tell you something." She continued to walk and ignored me. I stopped following her and said. "Riku's awake…" And she froze the moment I let out those words. I smiled as she turned around and said with an unconcerned look on her face.
"He is?"
"Yes… are you going to see him?" I asked cheerfully.
"Hmm… yes… maybe later." And she turned around walking away. "Why is she always like this? Urgh! Irritating!" I thought slightly annoyed. My frown turned into a smirk when I said.
"You know… when I talked to him, he asked for you." And she hesitated again, and remained in the same place. "Well… are you going or not?" She didn't make any move and I knew she was considering her answer, so I decided to give her a little push. "He asked me to tell you that he was awake, and wanted to see you…" She turned around with a defeated smile in her face, though she didn't notice I saw her and I was smiling at her reaction. "Yep… she likes him alright." I knew my thoughts seemed childish but it was the truth. When she noticed the look on my face, she cleared her throat and her expression changed to her normal self.
"What are you smiling about?"
"Oh nothing, nothing." I answered quickly. She walked on my direction and when she reached me she whispered to my ear.
"Open your mouth, and you'll die." I let out a small giggle with her last statement and said.
"Don't worry, I won't." And after that, she left me alone in the passageway. I sat on the cold floor, resting for my long run until I found Raven and smiled. "Ah ah… I knew it was something like this… she's so stubborn sometimes… maybe always. Well… at least she has someone." And with that thought my smile turned into a frown. I couldn't think of him because every time I did, that dream would always invade my mind. But who else could I thought of? "Don't worry… I'll find you." And with this last thought, I stood up and walked away. "Well… since everything here is new to me, why not explore a little?" I thought trying to ignore those deadly flashes of Sora.
I walked through the long white corridors with blue doors which reminded me of his eyes. His beautiful blue eyes that every time I stare at them I'd melt like butter in an oven. God… how I love him… it seems that I'm so near to get him, but at the same time so distant. I couldn't help but let tears flow freely down my face… as it always had been. Every time I thought of him I would cry… why do you bring me so much torment? How can a simple person change the other's life completely? Amazing how everyone depends on everyone.
As I continue to walk I noticed a dark corridor, completely isolated from the light. As curious as I always was, had to see what was beyond that dark corridor. I look around me to see if there's someone watching, but I find the passageway completely empty. I took and deep breathe and entered the corridor. Just after the darkness covered me, I felt cold… and slightly frightened. "How could such a dark place could be in this Castle?" I said out loud. I continued to walk and reached the corridor's end and it seemed… familiar. There was a black old door made of wood. It seemed very old… like it was from the 17th century.
I wasn't sure of what I should do… it was way too familiar and I didn't want to see what lied beyond that door, but at the same time I wanted to enter… to seek what was behind that door… would it be… him?
A/N:
Small chap I know but I had no choice: / this writer's block is really getting me… god I have blocks even when I'm answering reviews! I know it's stupid but I just don't know what to say! I'll try to update faster but it will be hard… on with the special thanks:Juzlovnsora:
Well actually I'm really happy that you review my fic! You're known by your SK fics, and a vast imagination. And I'm glad you're making a sequel to Torture Love I'm looking forward to it! I already got an idea from a friend of mine (FFOzmA thank you!!) he's the one! Lol. I hope your strep test wasn't that yuckky lol I'm glad that my fic cheered you even if it was only a little. Thank you so much for your reviews since the first chap, I'm really grateful that such a great writer like you is reading this.Lvkishugs:
Hey you reviewed again!! Yay! (I know I sound crazy but I'm not the only one lol) I'm glad you liked it! I think you already managed to do italics and bolds didn't you? To get bolds and italics I use FrontPage it there is another way could you tell me? And you'll be R&R always? Oohh thanks;; thank you for everything!Daniela Ponce:
Kairi on action lol. I'm glad you liked it, and she's kinda the new keyblade master lol. I have my plans for her ::grins evilly:: anyway thank you so much for your review!Slayergaer:
lol you read my bio… I think you're the first one lol. I think the best thing I wrote until now was my description on my bio… its sooo… realistic! Lol, anyway I think your fic is cool too I don't know why people don't read it. Oh well what can we do? It took me too much time to receive my reviews too. Anyway, thank you so much for liking this fic and for reviewing!Misau:
eh pa és mm xata lol acreditas k em 15 perguntas acertei 6 e TIVE SUF!? Incrivel!!lol tens k ter calma eu vou tentar inserir isso... isto ta sp no pov ta kairi por isso... caga nisso tento na mmFinally! I never got so much reviews in one chap. I sooo happy! ::grins:: well next chap will be late because of my writer's block but I won't leave you with anything. I'm writing a sk oneshot, so I hope you read it! And please keep reviewing they brighten my day as my math test that I've received… in 15 questions I answered 6 and I got a positive grade… unbelievable. Anyway thank you for your reviews and keep reviewing!!
