Ch 10: Her Valentines day gift
This is Crona x Maka if you don't like it don't read it Ok so this is the last chapter Omg! Its over!! Noes! Well its ok because I love this couple too much to just leave em alone so expect another fan fiction soon! In fact I've already started to write one by hand on paper in my free time! So like I said expect a new fan fiction Soon!! Oh! And! WARNING THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS SEXUAL MOMENTS THIS CHAPTER IS RATED M!!!!
Message form the beta reader Amy: I really enjoyed proof-reading this story, and I hope you all enjoyed it just as much~! Three cheers to Girl—Gaara/ Ra n of Sand for writing it.
The first week of February was here all too soon and I wasn't sure I was ready just quite yet. I knew my gift would be a big deal and so I was afraid that I wouldn't be ready in time or that Maka wouldn't accept it. Being so worried also caused me to space out even more than I usually did, constantly playing out the night that it would happen, all the possible scenarios. Sometimes it all went perfectly, like a wonderful dream. Maka would be so happy she'd tell me she could burst from it, and she'd immediately accept my gift, showering me with affection... But of course, there were also the less fortunate outcomes, in which Maka just stared at me unhappily, even disgusted. She'd be outraged by such an awful gift, and then she'd kick me out, and then I'd never-!
"Crona?"
"Huh?" I was startled out of my little nightmare when Maka called my name, looking at me with concern.
"You've been a little, well... out of it lately. Is everything all right?"
I smiled nervously. "Y-yes! I-I'm just…excited f-for Valentines day, th-that's all."
Maka looked surprised, but it was quickly replaced with a bright smile.
"I didn't know you knew about Valentines day! That's great! We can celebrate together!"
She was so excited she was practically bouncing with every word. I smiled a timid little smile, more to my self than anyone else... I hope she's at least this excited when she sees my gift to her.
"Yeah, we should."
A few moments of silence passed, only to be broken by a gentle sigh. I looked to Maka questioningly, only to be met by an unreadable expression upon her face.
"You really had me worried the other week…"
I looked to the ground, suddenly feeling ashamed.
"I promise never to do anything like that again…"
Maka nodded, dismissing the issue in favor of a smile and put her hand on mine. I looked up with a light blush on my cheeks. She looked deeply into my eyes and I returned the gaze, unable to help allow a ghost of a smile on my face. No words were necessary, as we both understood exactly what was silently being said. Maka loved me, everything was fine now, and I was just glad to call her mine.
"I love you so much. Some times it scares me…I think I might go insane if I loved you any more then I already do."
Maka blushed and squeezed my hand affectionately. I could tell she wanted to kiss me, but we were in class and nether of us liked to make a spectacle of our relationship.
After class Maka asked to talk to me alone, so we met at the place where we first kissed each other, the ledge. The location had become so special to us, so we often went there to be alone, to just enjoy each others company.
"Crona… I talked to Soul about Valentines day and he agreed to go over to Black * Star's house for the night. He said something about having an all night video game thing or something. Blair is going to be out all night as well."
I let a little smile show my thoughts. That was really good news because now we would be totally alone for my present for Maka.
"That's great…we can be alone!" I said cheerily. I would have been embarrassed if I had to give Maka my gift while Soul and Blair were home. Maka giggled and held my hand, smiling with a certain kind of slyness I couldn't quite put my finger on.
"Yes, we can…"
She moved closer and kissed me. Of course I blushed, a reaction I couldn't seem to get over, but I kissed back as best as I could, pressing a little more than I usually do. I even got brave and slipped a hand around her neck, tangling my hands in her silky hair and pulling her even deeper into the kiss. My heart was fluttering; it was amazing how much Maka's kisses affected me. Soon we parted and Maka was blushing more than normal, and she was breathing a bit heavier as well. I blinked.
"Maka?"
She touched her lips lightly and looked down, blushing more. I almost fell over because of how cute she was.
"Your…getting really good at this, Crona…"
My jaw dropped. Did...Did she really just...?
"R-really?"
"Yes." She responded immediately, laughing a bit.
It was my turn to go bright red. I was good at it? 'Maka said I was good at it and she's blushing like crazy!' Maka moved to hold me again and I moved to hold her back. We sat there in silence for a bit until Ragnarok came out of my back.
"Eh? Ah, Crona, that's not how your suppose to do it!"
"Huh? Do what?"
"When the atmosphere is like this your not suppose to just put your arm around her!"
Maka glared at Ragnarok and he grunted.
"What am I suppose to do?" I asked, genuinely confused. Maka stayed silent; perhaps she was as curious as I was. Ragnarok Sighed.
"Geeze, I gotta do every thing for you, don't I!"
Ragnarok pushed my head toward Maka so forcefully that my head collided with hers in a would-be kiss, if it hadn't been so rough. The impact caused us both to lose our balance and fall off of the ledge, thankfully backwards.
I put my arms around her and cradled Maka's head so she wouldn't get hurt when we hit the floor and it worked, but before I had time to even open my eyes I felt Ragnarok control my arm and hand. I opened my eyes, realizing I had fallen on top of Maka. We stared awkwardly at each other suddenly I felt something soft and tender beneath my palm. We both looked down, and I gasped as I saw my hand was groping her breast. We both blushed and I let go and got off of Maka as fast as my body could move.
"Oh my God, I'm-I'm-I'm so sorry! Maka I didn't mean too! I-i-i-i-i-i……"
Maka put her finger over my mouth and I stopped right away. She was still blushing heavily.
"Its okay, it was Ragnarok, after all...Not you."
That night I laid in my bed staring at my hand and thinking about how Maka had felt…how nice and soft it was…and how much I liked it. I looked down at my own chest and sighed. I was as flat as a board, and about as interesting as one, too. I rolled over and stared off into nothing.
"Are you going to do it? It's only a few more days until Valentines day now." I heard Ragnarok ask, prodding at me as he did. I sighed, hesitating a moment before responding;
"That's why you did that…right, Ragnarok?"
"What do you mean?"
"You made me touch Maka to help me get ready for that night."
Ragnarok played at being a bully, but I knew the truth.
"Well... I don't want you to chicken out! The only person that could ever love dumb Crona is that she-pig, so you two should at least be together."
I smiled at the darkness of the room. He was crude, mean, and aggressive... But he had his moments.
"Thank you, Ragnarok…I think I'm ready now."
"Are you sure?"
I bit my lip, closing my eyes.
"As ready as I'll ever be."
Two days before that night I was on my way back to my room from the washroom when I heard Maka's voice. I smiled but stopped when I heard another. It was Black * Star and they were talking about something. I knew eavesdropping was wrong, but my curiosity got the best of me, as it usually did when it concerned Maka.
"So, how far have you gotten with Crona?"
"Black * Star!"
"What? It's just a question."
Maka sounded embarrassed.
"We've made out a few times. That's about it."
Black * Star laughed a little.
"You've been together this long and that's it? No touching or-"
"MAKA CHOP!"
"OW! God damn it!"
"Shut up"
"Well, how come you guys haven't gone farther? Don't hit me!"
Maka sighed.
"I don't want to push Crona into doing something she's not ready for. I mean, she's really shy and sensitive, so I don't want to go too fast for her."
Black * Star laughed again. Maka fumed.
"MAKA CHOP!"
I
walked away, feeling like I'd heard too much already. 'So Maka wants to go further, but she holding back because of
me?
It was Valentines day and I was more nervous than I thought possible. It was also the weekend, so Maka and I had the entire day to be together. She came to my room rather early in the day and told me to pack up all my stuff in bags or boxes, then when I was done to meet her at our usual spot.
I spotted Maka, who was smiling brightly.
"Well, Crona, are you ready for our date?"
"Y-yes…"
I tried to hide the fact I was nervous enough to be trembling, but Maka didn't seem to mind, she only smiled and grabbed my hand cheerfully.
We went to the library where Maka and I sat together reading for a while. Maka with her huge three hundred paged novel and me with five yuri manga I was unable to buy due to lack of funds. I wasn't sure why Maka wanted to come here to read when we could have easily taken out the books and gone some were else but it didn't matter were or what we were doing, so long as I was with Maka I was happy.
We were sitting on a couch in a very open and public area of the library, and Maka was snuggling rather close to me, not that I minded. Our time at the library was followed up by a movie Maka had really wanted to see. It was a romance and had both of us holding each other and crying a bit by the end. Then we went to eat. The entire day was full of held hands and shared sly little kisses in public and then far deeper and more passionate after the movie.
At around dinner time Maka flashed me a large smile and asked if we could go back to her apartment now. I smiled back and we were off.
As promised, Blair and Soul were nowhere to be seen. We had the entire apartment to our selves. I was still nervous about giving Maka my gift but I was sure that this was it… I'd give it to her no matter what happened, unless of course…she didn't want it. Maka made some tea for us to drink as we relaxed in the living room, chatting comfortable, merely enjoying each others presence. It was around 9:00PM when Maka looked over at the clock, her level of excitement rising suddenly.
"Crona?"
"Hm?" I made, peering at her over the rim of my tea cup as I took a sip.
"It's already nine. Would you like to exchange gifts now?"
I choked on my tea, startling Maka who began patting me on the back, apologizing uncertainly as she did.
"Ah…" I coughed a few times, breathing deeply.
"Are you okay?" Maka asked, her pats slowing into smooth strokes up and down my back.
I cleared my throat, attempting a reply.
"YES!" It came out as a squeak, which embarrassed me greatly, but Maka only smiled.
"There's no need to be so nervous, Crona. I'm sure what ever your going to give me will be perfect! If its from you it doesn't really matter what it is."
Maka said, nuzzling my shoulder. I calmed down a little.
"Okay…You first." I said, admittedly buying time to gather a little more courage.
Maka laughed, humoring my anticipation. She grabbed my hand pulled me along.
"Follow me!"
I got up and did as she asked, immediately feeling my stomach drop to the floor when we walked into her dark bed room. She flicked on the light, let go of my hand and threw her arms up into the air in a fluid motion, shouting "Tadaa!"
I looked around, feeling totally lost.
"Um…"
Maka laughed at my obliviousness.
"Look, see there's two dressers and two desks? The second bed hasn't arrived yet, but that's fine, we can share until it arrives." She told me, standing in the middle of the room.
"I…I don't understand…"
Maka held my hands, looking like she was preparing her next words. She was also blushing lightly and I almost kissed her because of how cute she was.
"I've already had all your things moved…you're going to share my room with me from now on, and live here!" My eyes grew wide as dinner plates, and my jaw falling slack.
"R-Really!!??" I stuttered in disbelief.
"Yup!"
I hugged her suddenly. I could tell she was a little surprised, but she hugged back just as tightly.
"Thank you…" I whispered, willing myself not to tear up.
"You're welcome!"
After letting her go she smiled at me, fidgeting with anticipation.
"So…what do I get?"
I tried to swallow the lump that formed in my throat; I tried to ignore how my tongue turned to lead. This was it…this was what I had day dreamed and planed for, for an entire month. I gathered up every last tiny bit of courage I could find within myself, and then shut my eyes so tightly I saw white. I threw my arms open, saying with as much confidence as I could, "Me!"
It was quiet for what seemed like an hour until Maka finally said something.
"I don't get it…don't I already have you?"
Oh GOD! This was what I was afraid of…Maka not understanding what I meant. I forced my eyes open but all I could do was look at the floor as I explained. I reached for the white caller of my dress and undid the buttons as I mumbled,
"All of me…"
Maka's eyes grew wider then I'd ever seen and she became as red as I knew I was. I panicked, letting my undone caller go and waving my arms in the air in front of me.
"I-i-i-it's o-okay if-if you don't wha-want t-to! I-I-I j-just…well…I-I wanted y-you t-to…well…y-you know…"
I couldn't say it, I already felt like I failed. Maka walked up to me and lightly kissed me. I inhaled deeply through my nose, calming down as I melted into the kiss. When she moved away she looked concerned, but she was still blushing.
"Crona… You don't need to force your self to do any thing you're not ready too, I can wait."
I looked into her eyes, those gorgeous green eyes that, through some miracle of fate, loved me. For the first time in my life I wasn't nervous, unsure or scared at all, not even a little bit. Maka's beauty, love, kindness, everything about her gave me strength. I lightly caressed the side of Maka's face. She looked at me with what I could only call surprise, perhaps at the confidence and determination of my touch.
I slid one arm around her waist, and placed the other just below her jaw line, using my thumb to gently stroke her cheek as I pressed my lips strongly against hers, kissing her as deeply and passionately as I possibly could, feeling as though I was pouring every ounce of my overflowing love into her. I wanted to make Maka feel everything I was, I wanted it to pass through me and into her, like an eternal energy, cycling through us both. An endless love. Soon she pulled me off and I felt a rock drop into my stomach, hoping I hadn't done something wrong.
"Maka?"
"Ah! Crona…wow…"
She was breathing heavy and there was a heavy blush on her cheeks.
"I had no clue you could even do that!"
"I'm sorry?"
"No…no don't be…"
She gently pulled me over to her bed after flicking the lights back off.
"That was amazing…"
I could feel the heat in my face getting worse as Maka sat me down on the bed with her.
"I'm ready, Crona. I can feel it in my heart, and I know it…but…are you sure you are?"
I held her tighter than ever in the course of our relationship and she made a small sound of surprise. I leaned down, brushing my lips ever so lightly against her earlobe before whispering;
"Maka…I... I see you dancing in my dreams every night, and when you're not with me I see you in everything anyways, and always feel you like you're right there. The sight of you, the FEEL of you ignites this fire burning deep inside of me that's more intense than anything I've ever felt. I want to... No, I need to be yours and only yours for the rest of my life, as I can't even comprehend the idea of life without you. Please, make me…all of me, yours."
I finished, breathing softly as I allowed the soft, gentle scent of her body overwhelm and intoxicate me. She held me tightly and gently moved us so she was lying on top of me. I blushed and let my hands slowly move from her back to explore the alluring curves of her perfect body. I kissed Maka lightly and she made and odd sound I didn't recognize, so began to pull back, but Maka stopped me by biting my bottom lip and setting a fire in my very soul. The same type of sound escaped my lips and I put my hands over my mouth, both confused and startled. Maka smirked and I was left speechless.
"Crona… That was a moan. It... It's a good sound. It means you're enjoying yourself. " I made a soft "oh" sound, and then suddenly I realized, 'Maka is enjoying herself too, then!"
I blushed while Maka moved closer and started kissing down my neck. At first it felt really good, and my head and body got really fuzzy. She then bit down a little and I moaned so load she stopped and looked at me. I was so hot, my body was lost in this new burning desire that only Maka could make me feel. I was starting to breathe heavy when Maka moaned and I realized my hands were doing things with out me even thinking. They were groping Maka's breast. It felt so perfect in my palm, like a fitting puzzle piece. I squeezed gently, kneading the sensitive area. She moaned again and her back arched, pressing need fully against my hand. I kissed her neck and she moaned again.
Between hot, passionate kisses and exploring hands we removed our clothing bit by bit. Maka's body was beyond perfection. Nothing I could've ever imagined in a thousand years could have ever compared. I copied every thing she did to me; every place her hand went on my body, mine went on hers and so on. I was so hot and could barley breathe at a normal pace.
"M-Maka…why…why isn't it as…bad with you? Were doing…all the s-same things…"
Maka took in a bit of a deep breath before she answered.
"I-it's because…you're…you're more sensitive then I am…Crona."
Maka's soft and gentle hand glided down my body from my chest all the way to the only area she hadn't touched already. My back arched and I moaned as she gently and softly explored further, massaging the most sensitive area yet.
It felt so unbelievably good, my head and mind were far gone. Nothing but this unbelievable sensation remained. My body was burning, and it felt like something was building up deep inside of me. Almost as if the fire was going to grow and over flow out of me.
"Can I…can I put my finger inside?"
I shook and moaned, griping Maka's shoulders. I was so consumed by passion and desire, so utterly lost in this indescribable moment nothing else mattered.
"Y-yes b-but M-Maka…it feels like-like something's…building up inside…"
Maka smiled and kissed down my chest to my nipple, ware she started to use her tongue. I cried out and griped at the bed sheets almost ripping them. The build up was getting worse fast.
"It's okay, Crona, that's normal…let it happen."
I trembled, feeling Maka's other hand move around between my legs then she suddenly stopped.
"Please…Please do it, Maka…" I begged, and she readily complied.
A bolt of raw lightning shot through my entire body. The fire overcame me and I felt it spill out of me, causing me to scream out, completely over taken by everything. It was like a powerful wave of sheer pleasure washed over me, a feeling to intense that every muscle in my body seized up. I laid still, simply letting the moment take me, breathing deeply as it slowly faded from my body, which was left feeling weak and useless. I breathed so heavily I thought I'd pass out. Feeling light headed I decided that I had to make Maka feel the same amazing feeling! I used all of my left other strength to flip my self on top on her.
She squeaked a little out of surprise,
"Crona?"
"I need to make you feel that too…I need to make you feel what you made me feel!"
She blushed deeply as I kissed down her neck and down her body.
"C-Crona what are you-AH!"
I kissed her very core, wrapping an arm around one of her legs to steady her. After a few soft kisses I began to lick, electing a wonderful response from her as she bucked unintentionally. I greedily lapped up the juices flowing from her, surprised by how delicious she tasted. She reached down and intertwined her fingered in my messy hair. I licked with more force and she moaned even loader. I licked up all of the sweet nectar spilling from her, and wanting more I slowly slid my finger inside her and licked around it. She arched her back and almost screamed as I picked up a steady rhythm. I continued circling her with my tongue, and I could feel it as she started trembling and digging her fingers into my scalp, pulling on my hair. I could feel the hot insides of her move and contract. She screamed my name and trembled so violently; I wondered if my reaction had been this amazing.
Afterwards she went limp and weak, just as I had. I wiped my face a bit before crawling up to hold her. I kissed Maka's cheek and she smiled at me, her lips half closed as she snuggled up to be.
"I want to spend the rest of my life with you." I told her, stroking her hair.
Maka smiled, and I felt her nod. She wrapped her arms around my mid-section.
"We will…I swear."
"I love you, Maka."
"I love you, too, Crona."
