Still not mine.
So...here's the conclusion of error. Sorry for those of you who were hoping for some big jealousy scene. This was...well, the only thing my hand would put on the paper. (stupid hand!) Hope you enjoy anyway. (K will be awesome! I hope...)
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Percy's eyes were masked as he held out his hand to Jason, but the blonde boy's eyes were a solid cloud of uneasiness as he took Percy's hand.
It was another test, fingers trying to crush bone, each again trying the other's strength. If one of them won, Reyna didn't know who.
At last they released eachother, hands swinging back to their sides, fingers flexing as though to make sure that they all still worked. Reyna squeezed Percy's shoulder, felt him shrug ever so slightly under her hand. Then Jason caught her eye.
He nodded his head ever so slightly, a silent, if unhappy acceptance, as though in testing himself against Percy he had found justification for his appointment as praetor.
Reyna returned his nod, pleased that he approved of his replacement; judging by the actions of the Camp Half-Blood group as they clustered around him, they certainly approved of theirs.
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Hmmm...I'm thinking of taking this, Error, and Compare, and re-writing them as their own one-shot using the scenes and key phrasings from these. Whatcha think? I'd really appreciate your imput.
Now reveiw! And be nice...Thanx to all my amazing reveiwers from previous chapters! ~Seeker