I'm up to chapter ten! Woot! And I still haven't told you who the commander is! But Nino does in Nino in Sky High. He isn't as mean as me. To get the most out of this story you should read his if you aren't already
Chapter 10
"RELEASE US!!" Kelton screamed
"Let me think about it… umm… ye- no" The commander teased.
"RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" some shouted, bursting through the door.
"Ryan!" Fox said.
Every shadow Ryan tapped fell to the floor. They weren't defeated because they were still intact but they didn't move.
"I brought back-up" Ryan said after dispatching them all, then Ryan looked up, "So it's you… how could you…"
"Hey, I'm Andy" A girl said. She put away her bow an arrow and it just disappeared. Then she flew to the cage.
"We don't need help," Kelton said, bashing against the cage door, trying to get out.
"There's another shadow!" Jake pointed out.
"Don't worry," Andy, said, "its just Elektra. She looks like a ghost"
"Oh, sorry Elektra" Jake apologized.
"You will never escape" The commander said, and all the doors closed.
"Then we will just have to kill you" Kelton said, still bashing against the cage door.
"Here is a deal. I will open the door. If you defeat all the shadows one of you can battle me" The commander said.
"Ok, we will do it" everyone agreed.
The door and they rushed out, doing anything to the shadows. Half an hour later they were all defeated.
"You defeated them all, I am a man of my word, you may battle me," The commander said.
They were escorted to the arena by bigger shadows to the arena where the commander was waiting.
"One person may battle me," the commander said.
Mr. Stronghold said he would do it. He walked into the ring and a shadow shield to stop the other people coming. Mr. Stronghold flew up and punched the commander right in the face before he even saw him coming. He flew back and hit the wall. But now he was fired up. The commander flew straight towards Mr. Stronghold and bit him on the arm. He fell down, holding where he bit him. The both fought like it was for their lives and it most probably was. Mr. Stronghold punched the commander, the commander bit and scratched Mr. Stronghold. Eventually they were both bleeding all over. The commander sent something out of his hands and possessed Mr. Stronghold. He made himself punch himself and that. Mr. Stronghold wanted to win to save the kids lives and freedom. He eventually got out of it.
"How could you do that?" The commander screamed.
Mr. Stronghold did the final attack and the commander flew back and cracked the wall.
"I… am… free…" Nino said
"He probably needed to be defeated for the shadow possessing him to escape" Arznea'l said.
"Whatever, I bet he's faking it" Kelton said.
"What has gotten into you Kelton?" Maddi said, confused
"Anyway, we should escape before anymore comes" Jake said, picking up Mr. Stronghold.
They slowly walked through the school and outside. The wall was still up and they decided to leave it there as a memory. They closed the hole and got on the bus they left up there and went to the secret place.
"What… the… hell… happened… here?" Ryan said as they walked in.
ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER!!!11oneoneI am so ebil.