I'm sorry that I'm putting up an authors note rather than a chap, I just wanted to say:
Oh fucken Jesus Christ this is total shite.
I'm so sorry I haven't updated in so long, I just got all caught up in my GCSE's and my other fic, and so I totally forgot about this one. But honestly, It doesn't flow, it's a bad story line, I have no idea where its going, I'm considering just dropping it.
If anyone wants to take up this story, just click the little review button and tell me how I transfer it all to you, lol. I will also give you 8 cookies and a muffin