Hello Harry,
Guess who? It's Lacey again, thank you for your suggestions and I've taken them into consideration. Now, the concept of the story is I guess you'd call same to the first and the title is different, so basically I've changed the whole story.
Title: Obsession
Summary: The bottle was filled with the medication she was required to take, but not one pill was gone from the bottle he no longer thought she was obessive over him, he knew she was obessive over him and it wouldn't stop.
The girl is another OC and she is Tanner Lacey Ericson, she has no relations to you expect that she's obessive over you. She suffers from Schizophrenia a mental disorderthat makes it difficult to: Tell the difference between real and unreal experiences; Think logically; Have normal emotional responses, Behave normally in social situations.
Is this idea better? Worse? Your ideas, suggestions, and support is appreciated. It's not published yet, but I will send a link since you're not familiar with the interent.
Love, Lacey Evans
Hello again, Lacey. You must have loads of time; you can write to me so often, but I've got hardly any time at all to respond to everything!
Either way, I'm glad to hear from you again. You're quite welcome for the feedback before and I'm glad to hear you've used it. So let's see what you've done here. Well, I think this is a much better idea than the first. It makes loads of sense, though it kind of creeps me out, thinking about someone that obsessive over me. Still, it works better and it's an interesting concept, so I say go with it. The Schizophrenia is a bit, er, well, crazy, of course, and so it would work either way. You might want to make sure that you're positive about all the stuff you use for that disorder just so you don't stereotype it too badly or anything. Could be a dangerous subject. Besides, you definitely don't have to have a disorder to be obsessive over someone. Of course, the disorder is completely up to you.
All-in-all, it's a really good idea and I hope you can take it somewhere. Thanks for keeping me updated! Good luck!
Your friend,
Harry Potter