Heya….
Thanks to all who reviewed.
Vaiba;you r r8 its crazy!...n thnks for review…..;)
Neha;thsnks for reviewing…
Krissane;even m not a Punjabi…but I have watched it for about 20 times and I remember a liitle words of Punjabi…and if I don't add them then wo baat na rehti so…hope you understand but if you need any help..then….m here!
So here is the next update…..
Next day
Trio were busy in their room,like kavin playing with a tennis ball,dushyant with his guitar and vivek with his English learning book!
Vivek got a phone call. He smiled seeing the caller id.
Vivek excitedly;hello tshsa ji!
Tasha said something to him.
Vivek;ary ap fikar mat karo me bas abhi ata houn..
Kavin and dushu were confusedly looking him.
Vivek cut the call.
He excitedly jumped on the bed.
Vivek;oye me kya karoun?
Kavin;kya?kya hua?
Dushyant;itna khush kyun ha?
Vivek;ary yaar(and he hugged them) me me kya btaoun….wo tum angarezo(English people0 ka kya hota ha…wo…wo…
Dushyant;kya?
Vivek;ary wo…d..d
Kavin;date?
Vivek;haan haan date?(he said while changing his shirt)
Kavin;ary wah kya baat ha!
dushyant;haan..bhai kamal ho gaya….
Kavin;acha ik baat bta vivey tujhy jeep chalani ati ha?
Vivek;nahi!
Kavin;bike?
Vivek;nahi!
Kavin(while hands on waist);to kya tasha ko rikshaw(auto)py ly k jaye ga!
Vivek;mujhy to ik hi gari(vehicle)chalani ati ha!
Scene shift
Now see what vehicle, our vivek is able to drive?
And here is he..or I would say it!
The tractor!
Vivek was driving a tractor on the rush road,and tasha was sitting on it while setting her hair.
Vivek stopped the so called date vehicle, and jumped.
He extended his hand to tasha amd she too get down.
Vivek;haan ji tshasa ji kesa rha safar(journey).
Tasha while making faces;yeah!it was fun!
Vivek;haan ji…to phir chlay andar?
Tasha confused; kyun tumhy bhuk lagi ha?
Vivek smiled;nahi tshasa ji..wo kya ha na …hum yaha kharay ho k to baat nahi kar sakty na!
Tasha;oh am so sorry vivek but meray pas tum say baat karny ka time nahi ha!
Vivek confused;kya matlab?
Tasha while blushing slightly;wo kya ha na me yaha..yaha…."Suraj"sy milnay ayi houn?
Vivek;suraj?
Tasha;haan! Me us sy bohat baar mil chuki houn…..or mujhy lagta ha k I Like him a lot…or aj humari pehli official date ha….
Vivek hurted;to phir me idhar kya kar rha houn?
Tasha;kya kar rha houn? Ary meri car kharab ho gait hi or me late ho rhi thi to me nay tumhay call kar di ..or wesy bhi me nay pehly jitney bhi kaam tumhay kahey tum nay wo khushi khushi kar diye…to me nay socha k aj bhi kar do gay(while setting her hair)
Vivek;magar aj mujhy laga k ap nay mujhy kisi kaam k liye nahi bulaya!
Tasha;what?to phir kya laga tumhy?
Vivek kept quite.
Tasha;Oh My God!yeh tum larko ki kya problem ha?haan? menay do baar hans(smile) kar baat kya kar li! Tumhay lagak me tum me interested houn? Omg! Akhir tumhara or mera match hi kya ha? Haan? Me Canada tak gai houn..or tum..tum..to kabhi Delhi tak bhi nahi gaye…huh….actually tumhara kad(height) bhi mujh sy chota ha….just..just..get lost!
And she went inside, while vivek stood there in shock!
He returned to his hostel.
Kavin and dushyant were desperately waiting for him. Vivek entered the room.
Kavin and dushyant excitedly;haan b hai maar aya maarka(win)?
Vivek just wept silently.
And kavin and dushyant were shocked. Vivek tell them all and went outside.
Till that day vivek changed. He was looking at tasha nad she..she just turned her head.
Back ground music(if possible na listen this song you will definitely cry )
Inna Hanjuan da Ki kariye Inna Hanjuan da Ki kariye
Inna Hanjuan da Ki kariye
Jo Pani Ban Vehnde Ne han
Vehnde Ne han - Vehnde Ne
He was walking in the college corridor all alone, no one else with him. Tutte Dillan Da Ki Kariye Sun Mere Yaara Sahan Jhallyan da Ki Kariye
Tutte Dillan Da Ki Kariye
Jo Ghum Shehnde ne han
Shehnde ne han - Shehnde ne
Main Tutya Tara
Main Tutya Tara
Han Sahan Jhallyan da Ki Kariye
Jo Tere Naa Lainde ne Han
Lainde ne Han -Lainde ne
He was looking at tasha and she..she just turned her head.
Mere Mahi da Mere Mahi da.. Mere Mahi da Mere Mahi da.. Tere Te Chann
Mahi da...4x
Mahi da...4x
Baddal V shann
Gawah Uss Mulakat de
Tere Toh Bin
Naina Di Neend
Bhent Uss
Chad Gyi raat De ...2x
Kavin and dushyant were sitting alone thinking about their best friend vivek. Sun Mere Yaara Inha Bulan da Ki Kariye
Main Tutya Tara
Main Tutya Tara
Han Inha Bulan da Ki Kariye
Jo Baat Teri Han Kehnde ne han
Kehnde ne han - Kehnde na
Trio were sitting alone!
Mere Mahi da Mere Mahi da.. Mere Mahi da Mere Mahi da…..
Mahi da...4x
Mahi da...4x
Kavin was sitting alone on bench, purvi saw him,came and sat beside him.
Kavin didn't notice her.
Purvi;kv!kya hua?akelay kyun bethay ho?or dushu or vivey kaha ha? Kuch hua ha kyat um teeno k beech?
Kavin;ary nahi purvi! Hum teeno me kuch nhai hua!bas wo vivey…
Purvi;vivey?kya hua us ko?
Kavin;pyar kar betha…or larki chali gai…
Purvi;kon?
Kavin;tasha!
Purvi;tasha?
Kavin sad+angrily;haan wohi….kehti ha k vivey me koi interest nahi ha or suraj ko like karti ha!
Purvi shocked;kya?suraj?
Kavin confused;haan kyun?
Purvi;ary wo..suraj..to meri room mate Ropali ko like karta ha!
Kavin shocked;kya?
Purvi;haan…ropali nay mujhy boht baar bataya ha k suraj nay usy yah gift ly kar diya wo diya..
All this while kavin was looking at her, and idea came in his mind,and he smiled.
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.kya khatam!bas!
Guys last chapter pay sirf 3 reviews, us sy pehly waly par 2…
Yaar kya ho rha ha?haan?
Achi nahi lag rhi kya story? To bolo to sahi….delete kar doun gi!
Magar please batoun to sahi k kesi ha…..agar mujhy hi nai pta ho ga to..how would I know that my readers are satisfied or not?hmm?
Look I will you an example;
Suppose a girl or a boy has to attend a party, and she/he chose a dress, took at least 1 hour to get ready, and when she/he reached the party…."NO ONE COMPLIMENTED"…how would she/he feel?
You have written something,like some essay assigned by your teacher, and when you take it to the teacher. She just read that appreciate you in heart, where no one knows that what's going on except God, and returned it to you. She didn't write anything on the notebook and just simply returned to you. Just tell me one thing 'HOW WILL YOU FEEL?"
So in the end the conclusion drawn is "please do tell me how was the chapter!"
Because this story will ended after 4-5 chapters that's it!
And one more thing
"ALL BEYOND YOUR THOUGHTS" par bhi sirf 2 reviews!hayyee!
"Love is friendship" ko parha itnay logo nay par review sirf 9!
Birthday gift was for you priya and I guess you didn't read it!well ok koi baat nahi baad me parh lena….. ok?
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..although I remember divya's advice but still yaar am not comfortable!
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.kya ?
Abhi baat nahi khatam hui!
Me nay suggestions mangay thay right?
Mujhy or confuse kar diya sab nay…equal votes thy…
Then I thought k second wala pehly or phir first wala..ok?
Take care of yourself and be good to othere because
'do good have good" right?
Love yaa
Zaineb