this one's not from the episode, random reviewer, so it is original (did i sound offended?)
"Shit, I got here too late." The hoarse voice sounded off in the stillness of the dark. The woman's head snapped up. In front of her stood a young girl— she couldn't be older than 16. Her blonde hair was matted and hanging in her face like a dirty curtain and her strange blue-gray eyes were filled with sadness. To the woman she looked like an angel from heaven. She ran to the fallen woman, her shoes crushing the glass. "Wait just a second." The girl dragged her jacket off her cut and bruised shoulders. Using it as a broom, she swept the glass as best as she could, trying to clear a path for the fallen woman.
After she'd done that, she ran back to the woman, brushing off the glass from her body as gently as she could. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry" she whispered every time the woman cried out in pain. "Here, you need these more than I do." The girl sat before her, yanking off her shoes. "What's your name?" she asked, trying to distract her from the pain.
"Maggie." She groaned back. Maggie winced as the shoes were somewhat shoved on her feet. They were way too small, but the girl must've had experience because in no time at all, she'd used the laces to secure them on her feet.
"Maggie. That's a pretty name. Come on, Maggie let's get up now." The girl pulled on Maggie's arms, wincing as her own wounds groaned in protest. "We gotta keep moving, come on."
Gritting her teeth past the pain, Maggie glanced at her savior who was practically carrying her the rest of the way through the glass room. Her blue-gray eyes blazed with determination, but for what Maggie didn't know. She thanked her lucky stars that this girl was here to help.
"Here, rest for a bit—you'll need your strength." The girl gently let Maggie slide down the wall, trying to ignore her own aching body. She knew that if she sat down, she'd never get up again.
ha - take that!
don't worry, this train wreck is almost over, only a few more chapters to go and i'll be done with this monstrosity of a 'story'