Chapter Eleven – You make me wanna die

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VPOV

I'll never forget those eyes, fiery red with a hunger than the devil himself couldn't contain. His original aim, to turn me into a monster like him looked extremely unlikely as he looked so dammed hungry, like a man who'd been starved for several weeks and was barley living.
He used his nail as a cutting instrument and slit the skin at my wrist, I squealed in pain,

"Shush" he held his finger to his lips examining my blood. He again dabbed his finger at my wrist where the blood had started to spurt out in a fountain like manor.

He began to write a message in my blood, his writing was scruffy and because of the shall we say…material it was only just legible. It read,

Sam, Embry, Jared, Quil, Seth and other wolves that I may not know about.

I assume by now you must all know who I am and what intentions I have and by finding her body you know I have completed this dance.

And to you Paul, this is revenge a dish I find best served cold, vampire cold, good luck, she say farewell

Jack

He smiled at me frantically, the lust for blood was getting to him.

"This revenge is not all about you, you killed my creator, I loved her you know, so I find it's only fair I kill you."

And with a hiss so feline only a cat could produce it Jack pierced my neck. I could feel my blood being drained from my body, my body ached for him to stop, I tried nudging him in an attempt to make him stop but he only fed quicker.

The world started to spin around me, the sky once so pretty now looked deep with sorrow and pity. I prayed to the god's and thought of Paul, replaying every moment that we'd spent together, wishing I could have just one more minute with him.

It's then that I saw him, at first I believed it was my imagination, after all I was practically dead hallucinations are probably quite common at this stage. But after a mere second I felt a weight being lifted from my body as Jack was hurtled through the air at rollercoaster speed. Paul flew to my side talking to me,

"It's ok, everything's going to be ok, we're going to get you to a hospital, can you talk to me?" I was too weak to respond, my eyes heaved shut with every blink, "keep fighting Vanessa, oh god please don't do this, Vanessa look at me." I tried to concentrate on his eyes but I lost focus and fell into a pit of despair as I blacked out, I tried…

PPOV

I ripped off my t-shirt and wrapped it around her neck where the majority of the bleeding was coming from and it instantaneously turned deep scarlet red.

I felt splinters of wood hit my back as Seth lay on the ground unconscious from being thrown onto the woodland floor and being knocked out.

Seth had tried to fend Jack off as I attended to Vanessa however it was all up to me now. At that time I knew that Sam and the others were on their way but they weren't quite enough. I had to decide to grab Vanessa and make a run for it even though Jack could catch up with us, or leave her for now and kill Jack.

I looked deep into his eyes, into the depth of his soul; I saw nothing but a pit of despair. I looked upon his face where he wore a perfect mask of control his mouth turned into a smirk, so assured of himself, arrogant git.

I phased quicker than I ever had before and leapt at him with everything I had. He flitted backwards and forth trying to get around me, trying to reach Vanessa and finish off what he'd started.

But I was quicker than him and his perfectly controlled mask soon wore off as he began to see the amount of power that I was capable of.

I bit hard sinking my teeth into his body and tearing for all that it was worth. Eventually his arm detached from his ever so confident body and I threw it backwards into the forest. He screeched in pain and anger going for my face with his bare hands, he hit hard and I holed as I felt the bones in my nose break.

Out of the corner of my eye I saw Vanessa stand up with the very last ounce of her strength.

"It's me you want Jack…" she muttered before falling to the ground heavily. Jack licked his lips and whilst he was distracted BAM I ripped and shredded his entire body until he was nothing but chunks of flesh.

I felt footsteps pounding behind me and Sam appeared with a lighter in which he threw with perfect aim at the chunks of meat that Embry had gathered into a pile.

They blew into a heap of flames and each terrifying flame reminded me of Jack, but he was dead now and that was something he couldn't change. I spun around and leaped to my girls side in a nanosecond if that were humanly possible…it's a good thing I'm a wolf then isn't it.

"We need to get her to hospital quick…and you too Jared said peering at my nose." I carried her the entire way running as quick as my legs could take me but still carefully so I didn't hurt her.

One at A and E the doctors rushed her off into theater and I waited outside impatiently. I paced the floor furiously, I needed to see her.

Every now and again nurses would come past and look at me sympathetically, but they didn't know how it felt, like my world was falling apart before my eyes and I couldn't do anything to stop it.

The leaning tower of Pisa crumbled drastically and the Eiffel tower smashed into the ground. The New York state building fell into the sea causing a huge wave to cover the people of New York. They're screaming cries called out pitifully but I only strived to save one person, Vanessa.

After a couple of hours of waiting a doctor came out of the surgery room I gulped,

"Is she dead?"

"No; but she's lost a great deal of blood we've stabilized her. I'm afraid she's gone into a coma" he paused for a minute "though we are baffled as to why, her body just seems to have given up, you may see her now though."

I waited until a nurse found me and directed me to a room where Vanessa was, she lay on the bed peaceful, silent, her hair fanned out like an angel. She looked serene, almost happy…

I sat beside her for an hour thinking,

"Oh Vanessa. The first time I saw you I was blown away, the sheer beauty and presence of you makes any passing guy practically pass out. I loved you from the very first time I saw you, all part of the imprint they told me, but it wasn't just that, we are connected, like puzzle. You need to wake up Vanessa; I don't know…I don't know what I'd do without you. I'd swim the ocean just to be with you, I'd eat…" I shuddered "pickled onions for you, I'd cry for you, die for you, sing for you, kill for you. Oh Vanessa you make me wanna die…like the song." I began fumbling with my I-pod and put the track on,

'You make me wanna die…'

"Do you remember us listening to this?"

Suddenly her eyes started blinking rapidly as if trying to open,

"Nurses!" I shouted "its ok babe it's me Paul, please open your eyes" I prayed with every religion I could think of and god behold it she opened her eyes!

"Paul I love you, I'll keep fighting for you" she smiled weakly as the nurses fussed around her checking her pulse and the machines but she just kept grinning up at me.

"I love you too" I whispered as I kissed her softly.

It was over, we had won.

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