The New Target - Reboot

by mega14343

After comming back from the Demon Realm, Basara and the others were living their normal days. That is, until Basara was set as an extermination target by the Heroes. Basara must now power up and defeat them. This is the reboot, where I try to fix the mistakes I made on the original fanfic.

10. Note 1

This is the end of the first "bundle" of chapters. It ended on a cliffhanger of sorts (somewhat).

The ones that came from the original fanfic may have noticed that this first part was mostly just re-worked versions of chapters I posted back in the original fanfic (even the titles are the same). Well, I just want to say that the rest of this story won't be like this (but there are some chapters I want to bring here).

The villains didn't get much evolvement on this part heh. Well, that's going to change from the next "bundle" onwards. In all honesty I don't even know if I was able to convey the villains personalities on the short time they appeared (some may even have noticed that they changed from the original fanfic), but I'm sure I'll be able to later. Get used to seeing those guys for a while.

Let me think, what else happened? There was Chisato and Nanao's sex scene. I'd like your guys' thoughts on that and the ecchi scenes. Though it'll take a while for the next sex scene, there will be a little bit of ecchi on the next bundle.

Also, what Kurumi said during the date, that was a reference to myself. Basically, on the original story, I kinda gave the middle finger to the romance and stuff of the story and just focused on almost-sex ecchi scenes, take that as "I learned from my mistakes", ok.

I don't think I have anything else to comment on, so I'll be going now. Just a reminder, the chapters will come in "bundles" like this, but I don't have a specific date for them to come. I'll post them once I finish them and proof read through.