Review Responding Time
Mattafat- Oh god no. Please oh god no. Not Dave and Ella. I love Dave and I hate Ella. Also Scott and Max is god level awesome. Keep up the great work. Also Sugar with that one liner. "Hey that's what horses eat" classic Sugar line! Great job
Me- Well it's not 100% confirmed they'll be together, but we'll see. Yes EVIL ALLIANCE 4 ever. Thanks!, for some reason I find it really easy to write Sugar's lines.
AnonReviewer- Beardo going instead of someone who failed to conquer their fear? Not sure if Jo's more of a smart strategist or a potential antagonist instead of Scott (despite the earlier notice) as she does show some similarities to Heather in season 1 (mainly recruiting allies and trying to manipulate them). Either way, it was amusingly ironic how B hated mimes, and maybe we'll find out what Jo's fear actually is after all.
Me- Who knows?... Yeah I was hoping people would find it ironic. Maybe..?
Ethanrox- I can not stand Scott. Please make Dawn steal his idol and make him get voted out!
Me- A little too late for that considering she just got voted out last chapter
acl97gioia- Dawn eliminated early and not godplaying her way into the final two, like she does in more than a half of the fanfics around? That's SO refreshing. I'm glad you pulled that move with Scott, too iconic to miss.
Also, I'm sorry Amy but I do boat you and Rodney. Glad you're doing stuff with him!
Me- Do people really do that? I haven't read any terrible TD fanfics yet so... hmmm? Thanks!
FeartheDarknessInside- As much as I love Dawn she was just way to OP so i'm not really all that sad to see her go it gives the others an actual fighting chance. Max and Scott are hilarious together and i'm defiantly looking forward to the craziness there gonna cook up together.
Me- Thanks! Yeah I thought Max and Scott would get along if they were on the same season
" Last time on Total Drama! We sent our contestants to Boney Island to look for buried treasure, Dave saved Ella from drowning, and now she's in love with him or something. Shawn tried to convince Jasmine to leave Jo's alliance, but she refused. Rodney tried to bond with Amy, but that backfired on him. Scott and Max found the treasure quick but chose to hide it to sabotage their team. Resulting in The Screaming Gophers winning! Once arriving back at the island Scott was quick to pin the blame on Dawn, with most of their teammates agreeing with him. Dawn tried her best to convince people she was telling the truth but... she went home anyway, lol! Find out what happens this chapter on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!"
~ The Forest~
Rodney is preparing a picnic for a special someone
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" Today's the day I take my true love Amy on a date"
" I woke up super early this morning so we could do it before the challenge starts"
" Then if everything goes smoothly... I'm gonna ask her to be my girlfriend!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Rodney blindfolds Amy and brings her to the picnic
" Hey mumbles, why am I blindfolded?" Amy asked
" Hehe. I have surprise for you.." Rodney said
Rodney unties the blindfold
" What is that?!" Amy said pointing to Rodney's food
" I made you pancakes, eggs, and bacon. Here try some!" Rodney said before stuffing them into Amy's mouth
Amy spits the bacon out
" Ew how long did you cook that for?!" Amy asked
" Thirty seconds,?" Rodney said
" EW! I am a goddess, I refuse to eat this crap!" Amy said
" Sorry! I can make some new ones!" Rodney said
" Forget it... So any progress on making me some new allies?" Amy asked
" Um..." Rodney said
~ Flashback~
" Would any of you like to be in an alliance with me and my love Amy?" Rodney asked
" No" Mike said
" No thanks!" Zoey said
B gives a thumbs down
" Negative" Scarlett said
" What she said" Scott said
" Never!" Max said
" No" Cameron said
END FLASHBACK
" Funny thing um... I asked everyone and they kind of said... no" Rodney said
" No?! Did you tell them I was in the alliance?!" Amy said
" Yeah I did!" Rodney said'
CONFESSIONAL: AMY
" Great. Of all the freaking people in this team Rodney's the only one who wants to be in an alliance with me"
" If I want to avoid getting voted off, I gotta convince some chumps that I'm worth keeping around"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Communal Washroom~
Brick is taking a shower. Scott and Max sneak in
" You ready?" Scott asked
" Yes, let's do this!" Max said
Scott flushed the toilet, then they ran away
" Ah! Cold, Cold!" Brick screamed
CONFESSIONAL: BRICK
" Can't a soldier enjoy a hot shower in peace?!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" My new alliance with that Max kid is going well"
" Luckily since were both douchebags, I don't have to hide my true colors around him"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Mess Hall~
The contestants are eating breakfast, well except for someone
" What are you doing, Dave?" Shawn asked
" Locking the door so Chris can't barge in and ruin our breakfast" Dave said
" Oh... carry on then" Shawn said
Chris tries entering the Mess Hall
" What the?.. Who locked the door?!" Chris said
Chris walked away and came back with a chainsaw and slashed the door open
"CHALLENGE TIME!" Chris yelled
" What's with the chainsaw?!" Scott asked
" Some comedian thought it was funny to lock the door. Luckily I have a supply of weapons in my trailer." Chris said
Dave whistles innocently
" Anyway meet me at the Forest for today's challenge!" Chris said
~ The Forest~
" Today's challenge is a mix between hunting and paintball. I've randomly assigned the hunters who will be given paintball guns, they must hunt the other team's deer. If I give you some antlers and a Rudolph nose that means your a deer, you must hide from the hunters for the duration of the challenge. First team to knock out all of the other team's deer wins!" Chris said
" So whose been assigned as a hunter?" Jasmine asked
" For the Gophers the hunters are... Jasmine, Shawn, Jo, and Brick! The hunters for the Bass are... Rodney, Zoey, Mike, and Scott!" Chris said
Chris handed them visors and paintball guns
He handed everyone else deer antlers a button nose
"The rest of you are deers!" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: MAX
" Me, A deer?!"
" My fellow comrade Scott will never let me hear the end of this"
END CONFESSIONAL
" The deer have a twenty minute head start to hide and that starts... NOW!" Chris said
The contestants run into different sections of the forest
~ Screaming Gopher Hunters~
" Listen up Gophers, we go after the weaker deer first and save the tougher ones for me" Jo said
" Sir- I mean yes ma' am!" Brick said
" Who do you mean by the tougher ones?" Shawn asked
" I've gotten a good look at the Bass. I'd say B, Mike, and Zoey are their strongest members, the rest are just fodder" Jo said
" I don't think it's wise to underestimate our opponents." Jasmine said
" Well it's my team and what I say goes" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" If everyone just did what I tell them to do, the world would be a better place"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Killer Bass Hunters~
" I've never played paintball before, does anyone know how to use this thing?" Zoey asked
" Oh it's easy, lemme show you" Mike said
Mike positioned Zoey's fingers to the trigger
" And... Shoot!" Mike said
Zoey pulls the trigger and ends up hitting Scott
" Ow!" Scott said
" Sorry!" Zoey said
" Well the Gophers aren't that hard to catch anyway, let's just take our time and-" Scott said before being interrupted
" Sorry! But I don't think that's a good idea" Zoey said
" What ever do you mean?" Scott asked
" Well I mean we did lose last time, so I don't think we should take our time" Zoey said
" Pfft. Whatever" Scott said
~ The Forest~
" Hunters! Their twenty minutes are up, GO GO GO!" Chris said
As for the hunters. Mike, Zoey, and Rodney searched together while Scott searched alone. All four hunters of The Gophers searched together
Group 1- Mike, Zoey, and Rodney
Group 2- Scott
Group 3- Jo, Jasmine, Brick, and Shawn
Group 4- Dakota
Group 5- Sugar
Group 6- Amy
Group 7- Max
Group 8- Cameron, Scarlett, and B
Group 9- Dave and Ella
~ Group 6~
CONFESSIONAL: AMY
" Normally I'd just have Samey take all the face shots for me.."
" But since she's not here I'll have to rely on Rodney"
END CONFESSIONAL
Amy clears her throat
" ROOOODDDDDDNNNNNEEEEEEEEYY!" Amy screamed
~ Group 1~
" I'm coming Amy!" Rodney said
" Rodney wait we have a challenge to do!" Zoey said
" Love is more important than any challenge" Rodney said before running off
" Aww... Wait Amy?!" Zoey said
Mike shrugged his shoulders
" I mean if you don't consider her horrible personality she's pretty hot" Mike said
" Mike!" Zoey said
" I'm just saying.." Mike said
~ Group 6~
Rodney runs at sonic speed to find Amy, then eventually tips on his feet and lands where Amy is hiding
" Took you long enough!" Amy said
" Is something wrong?" Rodney asked
" Yes! I need you to protect me till the challenge is over" Amy said
" But... I'm a hunter" Rodney said
" Relax, there's like three other hunters they can do it by themselves" Amy said
" Okay... Well since were both here do you wanna continue where our date left off?" Rodney asked
" NO. But you can go and get me some chips. I'm starving." Amy said
While this is going on Scott is eavesdropping
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" So that's why the doofus was asking about alliances"
" I may be a jerk, but I'd have to be crazy to team up with Amy"
" Plus there's only room for one villain on this team"
END CONFESSIONAL
Rodney is running to go get Amy's chips and runs into Cameron
" Oh sorry Cam!" Rodney said
CONFESSIONAL: CAMERON
" These types of challenges are exactly when I could use someone like Rodney to protect me"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Hey if your not busy, could you protect me from the other team?" Cameron asked
" Sure lil buddy, but I gotta head back to the Mess Hall to get Amy's chips" Rodney said
" I'll come with!" Cameron said
Rodney and Cameron walk to the Mess Hall, but unknown to them Scott is following them
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Those two doofuses, just gave me an idea how to sabotage this challenge"
" Hehe..."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 4~
Dakota is taking selfies, the Gopher hunters walk up on her
" Hey there's a deer- wait it's just Dakota" Jo said
" Why aren't you hiding?" Jasmine asked
" Gotta update my Instagram, twitter, facebook, and snapchat first!" Dakota said
" Why do you still have your cell phone?! Sam and Staci got disqualified for that!" Jo asked
" Remember I'm rich so I can do whatever the hell I want" Dakota said
Mike and Zoey fire their paintball guns at Dakota
" Ow! Not the hair I just got it done!" Dakota said
Score: Bass- 1, Gophers- 0
" Sorry!" Zoey said
" Great..." Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" I feel like Dakota is outliving her usefulness"
" Maybe I should ditch her soon"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 1~
" You did it! See, I told you it wasn't hard" Mike said
" Yeah, I just feel a little bit bad for Dakota" Zoey said
CONFESSIONAL: MIKE
" Zoey's awesome and all, but sometimes I feel like she's a little too nice"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Zoey you don't need to feel bad for everybody all the time, sometimes they deserve it" Mike said
" I guess.." Zoey said
Mike while running stops and trips on a rock
" Ow-" Mike said
"GASP""
" You dang kids leaving rocks everywhere!" Chester said
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" Ugh, why does he have to say something so cool then ruin it with his "characters"
" Not cool Mike.."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 5~
While running Mike and Zoey encounter a wild Sugar
" Hey there's a deer!" Zoey said
" And a fat one at that." Chester said
" EXCUSE ME?!" Sugar yelled
Sugar tackled Chester to the ground and started slapping him, Zoey tried to fire but didn't want to hit Mike
" Stop standing there and help me ya hussy!" Chester said
Sugar and Zoey gasp
" Okay Mike your "characters" were funny for a while but now your just acting like a jerk!" Zoey said
Zoey hits Mike and Sugar with the paintballs
Score: Bass-2, Gophers- 1 "because friendly fire counts"
~ Group 3~
Jasmine, Jo, Brick, and Shawn are running looking for deer
" You'd think it'd be easier to catch one of these chumps" Jo said out of breath
" That's why I said not to underestimate them" Jasmine said
" Yeah, yeah..." Jo said
" Look, it's a deer!" Shawn said
Shawn points to Max nibbling on some berries
" Fire at will!" Jo said
Jo fires at Max but he dodges
" What the?" Jo said
Jo fires again and Max dodges once more
" I don't remember this guy being so graceful" Jo said
" Wait a minute" Jasmine said
Jasmine walked over to Max, who was holding some suspicious berries
" He's not graceful he just ate some poisonous berries" Jasmine said
" Well whatever they are, if they can make you move like that, I want some!" Jo said
Jo grabbed the berries from Max's hand and ate them, not even lasting five seconds she went over to vomit
" BLRGHGH!" Jo vomited
" Great now she's sick" Shawn said sarcastically
" Brick, you take Jo to the infirmary" Jasmine ordered
" Yes ma' am!" Brick said
Brick carried Jo the infirmary
" Sorry Max but..." Jasmine said
Jasmine fired at Max close range,
"Owie" Max said before falling over
CONFESSIONAL: CHRIS
" Attention viewers, I am not liable for the contestants eating poisonous berries."
" Parents, please don't sue!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: MAX
" That wasn't my greatest performance today but I'll make up for it"
"Evil never rests, but I really need a nap"
END CONFESSIONAL
Score: Bass-2, Gophers- 1
~ Group 8~
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
"I've noticed there's been a lot of alliances going around on my team. To name a few, Max and Scott's alliance, Amy and Rodney's alliance and I suspect Mike and Zoey have an alliance but I'll have to do further analysis"
" Were getting closer and closer to the merge so I feel it's appropriate for me to make some allies"
" I was hoping to include Cameron but he wandered off somewhere, B will have to suffice"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Question, would you like a temporary alliance with me?" Scarlett asked
B gave a thumbs up
" Good. I require nothing from you but your vote" Scarlett
B took out his notebook and scribbled down, "who do you want me to vote for?"
" Patience, I'll tell you if we lose this challenge" Scarlett said
~ Group 9~
Dave and Ella are hiding together in a bush
" La, La, La!" Ella sang
" You think you could sing a little more quietly?" Dave asked
" Anything for you my prince" Ella said
" Wait did you just call me your prince?" Dave asked
" Well of course, you saved from that dreadful fall back at the canoes!" Ella said
" Your true love!" Ella said
CONFESSIONAL: ELLA
" Yes!"
" I finally told Sir Dave how I feel!"
" Nothing but fairytale endings from here!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" Ella's nice I guess but I want a million dollars not a girlfriend"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Sorry but I don't feel the same way" Dave said
" GASP" Ella said
" I understand" Ella said with sadness in her voice
" I'll go now" Ella said before walking away
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" Aw geez, I didn't meant to make her cry"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Mess Hall~
We cut back to Rodney and Cameron getting chips from the kitchen
" Well that was easy!" Rodney said
" I'm not one to believe in the supernatural, but I think you just jinxed us" Cameron said
Chef breaks down the door
" DEM CHEF'S FUNYUNS, GIVE EM BACK!" Chef yelled
Rodney and Cameron frantically ran out of the mess hall, Rodney squeezed the chip bag so hard it left a hole open and the chips started pouring out leaving a trail
~ The Forest~
With the chip trail following into the forest, Scott put his plan into action
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" While those losers were playing paintball, I managed to trap me a bear"
" Now all I need to do is release it on that dweeb, Cameron"
" Then we lose and it's bye bye bubble boy"
END CONFESSIONAL
" I think we lost Chef" Cameron said
" Good, now if you excuse me I gotta deliver these chips to Amy!" Rodney said before running off
" Rodney wait you forgot the chips!" Cameron said
Rodney was too far ahead, so he went the other way
" Oh well, more funyuns for me!" Cameron said with delight
Scott then released the bear from his trap, the bear followed the chip trail and stood behind Cameron
" Hm.. Is that you Scott? You smell worser than usual." Cameron asked
He then turned around and saw the bear
"GULP" Cameron said
The bear then proceeded to attack Cameron off screen cuz showing a kid get mauled on live tv is messed up
~ Editing Room~
Chris and Chef watch Cameron get mauled by the bear
" Dang that's messed up. My funyuns..." Chef said
" At least it will make some killer ratings!" Chris said
A mailman enters the Editing Room
" Package for Chris Mclean!" Mailman said
" Right here!" Chris said
Chris then signed the papers and opened the box
" OHMYGOSH! Stop the challenge immediately!" Chris said
~ Mess Hall~
Chris calls all the competitors back to the Mess Hall
" Due to unfortunate events we had to stop the challenge. But thanks to sheer luck the Killer Bass win! Gophers, I'll see you at elimination" Chris said
The Killer Bass cheered while the Screaming Gophers groaned in defeat
~ Screaming Gophers Girls Cabin~
Jo is having a chat with her alliance, Sugar is asleep and Ella is crying loudly
" Would you stop?!" Jo asked
" I'm sorry my friends but I can't" Ella said before crying some more
" What got you in the dumps?" Jasmine asked
" Well.. I've had a crush on Dave for a while now but... he didn't feel the same way" Ella said
" Hey that's who we should vote for!" Dakota said
" Hold on a minute, not all relationships work out we shouldn't pin all the blame on Dave" Jasmine said
" Nah, I'm with Dakota on this one. Never really liked the guy anyway" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" Wow were really voting someone out all because they said no to a girl?"
" I feel bad for Dave and Ella, but if this helps me get further in the game then so be it"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Campfire~
The Screaming Gophers and Killer Bass "Except for Cameron" gather at the elimination ceremony
" Someone please tell me why we've been summoned here" Max said
" In all due time. Bass shut your traps till the elimination's done. Gophers! You all sucked big time at paintball, let's go over why. Dave stomped on the love of an innocent girl" Chris said
" What?! No I didn't!" Dave said
" Jo ate poisonous berries and had to be carried to the hospital. And Dakota cares more about her Instagram followers than the competition" Chris said
" You'd care too if you had 2 million followers" Dakota said
" But I don't. Gophers you may now cast your votes" Chris said
One by one the Gophers go to cast their votes
" If I call your name, you've earned another day at the island and a marshmallow" Chris said
" Jo!"
"Jasmine!"
"Shawn!"
"Brick!"
"Ella!"
"and Sugar!"
" Dave and Dakota you've both received votes against but the person going home is..." Chris said
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... Cameron"
" Phew" Dave said
" Why Cameron?! He doesn't even have a phone!" Rodney said
" Oh he's not being disqualified for that reason, I'm not sure if you all know but Cameron got seriously injured from a bear attack. Apparently he had some chips on him and the bear smelt it. We were gonna let him continue, but his mom actually gave us all of her savings just to bring her son, home" Chris said
" But we needed Cameron for something so we sent him to somewhere else instead" Chris said
The Killer Bass were all shocked at this news except for one
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Do I feel like I went to far with my scheme?"
" Nope!, One less competitor to worry about"
" If you can even call Cameron a competitor"
" Hehehe.."
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" Aw man, I was so focused on Amy I forgot to help my buddy Cam!"
" And now he's gone... I'll avenge you Cameron!"
END CONFESSIONAL
GOODBYE CAMERON, "even though he already left, lol"
The Killer Bass and Screaming Gophers head back to their respective cabins
" Well that's nine losers down and sixteen to go! Will Dakota ever get off her phone? Will Dave ever apologize to Ella? And what will I do with all this money I got from Cameron's mom! Well I'm about to got buy a hot tub but I'll see you next time on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Ten! Like I say in every chapter if you enjoyed my work please favorite and review
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination, Cameron: Sorry Cameron fans but I figured him going out almost the same way as Cody did made sense. Plus add in fact he's a finalist, bye...
Note: Just three more chapters and then it's merge time! Who do you think is gonna make the cut?
Elimination Order: Leonard- 26th, Sky- 25th, Lightning- 24th, Samey- 23rd, Staci- 22nd, Sam- 21st, Anne Maria- 20th, Beardo- 19th, Dawn- 18th, Cameron- 17th
Also Note:" If Cameron wasn't injured, Dave would be going home. So count yourself lucky any Dave fans out there :)"
Votes for Dakota
Dave- Dakota
Ella- Dakota
Shawn- Dakota
Votes for Dave
Brick- Dave
Jo- Dave
Sugar- Dave
Jasmine- Dave
Dakota- Dave