Good job on the review, I usually don't count double reviews though, so now I'll answer your questions...
HEY! SUPER SMASHER GUESS WHAT NEW STORY AFTER THIS ONE! MAKE SURE YOU PM ME YOUR CHARACTER, I don't care if he sucks... cause I'll make him awesome, this is criterea... using example for character for my next book.
name: Blitz
age: 15
appearance: dark wavy hair that goes down to waist, light blue pikachu ear muffs, brown eyes, pretty, 5.7"
personality: likes parties, people, kicking butt, nice with a bad ass side, quirky
personality fault: Is too friendly (in the non whore way...)
how others in the flock describe her: fun person to be around, nice, comforting
special ability: to confuse people
role in flock: member
Quirks: stutters when nervous, trips when nervous, likes ear muffs (and Marceline the vampire queen)
Crush: TBA
DNA: avian human
b-day: 4/13/ 1995
HEY AEROTUNDRA (your name is awesome) CAN ECHO BE HER SISTER? PLEASES? I SYNCHRONIZED THEM! meaning I don't have room for her in this book but she can be in the next one...
Um... Archer will be waking up soon, hopefully, if I remember...
I made it so that Jack can hide his four extra arms and wolf ears so he can blend in public but only for short periods of time...:)
OKAY JACK X ARIELLA IT IS! *evil smile*
Oh and this chapter is romance... sorry for my suckish romance skills, I usually don't read them because it's socially unacceptable for boys to read it... sigh stupid society... WELL GUESS WHAT SOCIETY I THINK ROMANCE IS AWESOME! I LIKE CUTE THINGS! AND I BAKE CAKES CAUSE MY MOM WON'T! AND I'M STRAIGHT SO SUCK A BIG ONE!
moment over... I don't own MR here it is... enjoy?
Rhaksha POV
I opened my eyes, wincing at the brightness of the lights behind me, they must have accidentally lowered the drugs in my injection for the day, I'm usually not awake or this aware for this long... mistake number one.
I felt the warm relief as flames flickered from my hands, they knew I had power over water... but not fire, I elongated the flames just enough to catch the ropes that held my arms together on fire. They quickly disintegrated and I rolled quickly to put the flames out, finding myself able to sit up, I used my hands to tear through the puny ropes and jump to my feet.
I stood on the table surveying the room, no door... no window... no vents... no nothing.
I felt my mind go on hyper drive, no, no, no... I can't be stuck here, no, no, no... they'll do stuff to me, I began to hyperventilate, no, no, NO! I thrust both my hands out beside me and blasted everything I had out.
Red, heat, death, pain, destruction, flames, rebirth, constructive, Pheonix, light, life, home, , ,pheonix,lightlifehome. RED, HEAT, DEATH, PAIN, DESTRUCTION, FLAMES, REBIRTH, CONSTRUCTIVE, PHEONIX, LIGHT, HOME. PHEONIS LIGHT LIFE HOME!
Who was screaming... then I realized... the sound was coming... from my mouth... it was so hot.
Get me the Hell out of here...
nothing...
"Rhaksha..." a deep voice said, I tried to open my eyes but my body was unresponsive..." Rhaksha please..." the voice was so pretty, oooh, I like pretty things, like the ocean, purple... Whisper's eyes. Oopsies you weren't supposed to hear that... but I know you won't tell
Why? Because I'll rip out your damn eyes, feed them to a cat and make you listen, and shove your face into a paper shredder.
Aaaaaashtoooon Kuuuutttchhherrr, will you maaaaarrryyy meeee? Jjjjjoooooeee Jooonnnaaaas is a faaaag so whyyy can't I sttttooopp listening too himmmm? whhhy does my head feeeel so loopy?
I feel funny my tummy hurts... someone is carrying me! OMG SOME ONE IS CARRYING ME! I WONDER WHAT MALE HOOKERS WEAR? DO THEY WEAR FISHNETS, I wish I could wear fishnets... but you know, I'm not cool with getting raped...
GET THE BITCH OUT MY HEAD!
Ariella POV
I was walking home when Caden grabbed my hand and pulled me into him, "Sorry hun I gotta cancel my date today but can you do me a fave... and watch my brother, Hale" he said gesturing to the boy behind him, "He's in eighth grade so no worries about the potty," he said then took off. "YOU ASSHOLE!" I cried trying not to laugh, he turned to blow me a sarcastic kiss, "LUV YA!" he called out, running with the soccer team.
His brother was around my height, he was wearing tight black skinny jeans, flip flops, and a tight hot pink shirt, brown eyes were wider and more innocent, with lips that were coated with... lip gloss? My gaydar was wailing.
"Before you ask yes I am gay," he sighed expecting me to punch him or something, I ran up and hugged him, "You are my new best friend... we have to go shopping!" I hissed grabbing his hand. "Okay coolio," he said smiling.
To the mall we go.
Why was I in Victoria's Secrets? Because apparently Hale and I were thong shopping... awesomness of the epicness to the extreme! "Hey is pink my color?" he asked snapping his gum in an overly feminine way. "Damn dude hell yea it is," I said giggling, I picked up a lacey black one jokingly, "Yeah girl my bro would loooove that, you got the ass for it too," Hale said smiling.
"You just made it awkward..." I mumbled, "Just saying the truth," Hale said flipping his hair, "Oh geez let's go get something to eat," I said grabbing his arm, "Hold on I'm gonna buy the lacey thong," he said. "I DON'T WANNA WEAR IT!" I whined, "Who said it was for you?" Ah gay dudes are just cool...
"I wake up in the morning And immediately I start to think of you I decided to cut my bangs Just to hear you say, "What happened?" I sang quietly, walking through the aisles, "A pink skirt, and a flower barette And it's time to go I'm looking super cute today!" I sang louder, looking at the clips for hair, oooh music note. "Meeeeellllttt - I'm about to melt! I can't tell you that I like you... but... Meeeeeeelllllt - I can't let our eyes meet I'm not into love and all that... But I do... like you" I sang, my earphones were blaring the music and I was spinning through the aisles.
"The weather report lied, It's pouring down. My umbrella still folded in my bag won't do, So I gave a sigh,"I guess I'll have to let you in" Beside me you say, laughing, That was the sound that made me fall in love" I sang, oooh Doritos, I walked toward the checkout aisle. The music in my headphones blasting so loud that I was sure anyone close to me could hear it.
" Meeeeellllt - I can hardly breathe, My hand, touching yours, is trembling, My heart is racing under this half of the umbrella, If you should stretch out your hand to close the distance, what'll I do...? My feelings will reach you!" I warbled. Reality check, I looked around at the people staring, my face flushed and I smiled proudly, and they began to clap. Aaaaw people in Walmart are so nice. But... my stomach was doing butterflies so I left quickly. I don't think I could eat Doritos.
Why was I singing?
Anyway Caden came to pick Hale up, Hale and I did the French cheek kissing thingy and they left and I went back to the house, dragging my book bag along.
So I sat on the balcony swinging my feet and listening to the music, Did I have any homework? I reached into my bag, and to my surprise I pulled out a black lacey thong holding it close to my face, "WHAT THE HELL?" Jack gasped.
I squealed and almost fell of my perch on the railing until strong arms grabbed my wrist and pulled me upward until I slammed into his chest, "God you butt face," I whined, "Scaring little girls off rails, that wasn't very nice..." I sighed.
"Little girls don't wear things like this," he said gesturing to the article of clothing in my hand. I looked up at his face, green eyes behind dark oval rim glasses, grey curly hair, I slowly reached up to move the glasses from his face. I leaned up to kiss him gently on the mouth, wrapping my arms around his neck to pull him closer, my fingers playing with his curls.
Then I pulled away, and walked to the kitchen leaving him behind, "Don't get me wrong you have the butt for it," Jack called out, I shot him the bird.
Meeeeeelllllt - We've reached the station... We can't see each other anymore,
we're close yet so far away, so...
Meeeellllt - I want to walk hand in hand with you!
Must we say goodbye so soon?
Hold me tight right away! ...or something
Song Melt by Miku Hatsune... I love it so much it's adorable... and in japanese psssst. you should Youtube it! Unless you hate girls singing in japanese.
Yeah... you realize I had a lot of fun writing this right? I mean my new criteria is I must have a gay or lesbian in it, that was for you Sammy boy!
Ah... well no seriousness in that chapter... okay 85 reviews let's go!