I am going to Re Wright this story, I have made some errors and I am not talking the Grammar (cause we all know I suck there.) there are different twists I wanted to take with this story and there are thing's I wanted to explore that would make it more interesting along the way.
I hope you will like the new story but first I must finish my other story as it is good to get into the habit of finishing what I start.
Your uncanny and unreliable Writer
Twisted Novelist