Author's Note
Sorry that this chapter isn't an update, but I'm probably not going to update for about a week...Or rather I won't be putting up new chapters.
Rather, I am re-editing the first arc now that I've finished it because now that I got the basic thought down I can get the better character development done as well as lengthen my chapters.
What I mean is that most of my chapters I try to get at least ten pages (Calibri 11 point font when writing) and some of my chapters fall short of that. My first chapter for instance is only three pages long.
So, with that mind I plan to lengthen parts, increase character interaction and improve what I've written (everything's always better in hindsight after all). I plan to write out certain parts I only really glossed over to hurry the plot along.
When I initially wrote it I also didn't have everything completely figured out as it was now so I can improve those things to avoid plot holes.
The fight at Technus' Lab needs A LOT of rewriting as well, so as I said I won't be adding a new chapter for maybe a week but my old ones should be worth re-reading soon.
COMPLETED EDITS:
Chapter One
Chapter Two
