Rise 'n' Shine chapter 9

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Okay! I've been thinking about it for a while and this is hopefully going to turn into a sequel! I'm only going to do 20 or so chapters on this then do a sequel. I'm having a vote for what it should be called.

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Love 'n' Tears

Flying 'n' Falling

Never 'n' Forever

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I'm also starting each chapter with a dream of Tris's! YAY!

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Tris pov

The wind is whipping the loose hair out of my face. I can feel the fields' grass skimming along my ankles. Tobias is sitting on a little mat in the middle of the field, dressed fully in black. He is holding something in his hand, something shiny. He stands up when he sees me. But not walking towards me. I try to run to him, my legs don't budge. I try call for him, my voice won't come out. All I can feel is the wind, the grass, and the tears falling down my cheeks. He holds up the shiny object, a knife. He holds it up to his chest a cuts his shirt in half. I'm trying so hard to scream now. Move. Trying to move anything. The knife goes to his chest and it sinks in an inch. The tears are falling onto the green grass now, the grass is turning into blood. He pushes the knife in and his body slumps to the floor. Everything turns to blood. Bright and red.

Tobias pov

~School the next day~

I haven't really gotten involved in anything today. School is nearly over. I'm going to visit Tris with Christina tonight; I can't wait to see her. I've tried to perk up and go back to how I was, but nothing is working, even cake.

The bell rings and I sprint out of my boring math class and to my locker. I enter the combination and stuff all my books and pens inside. Chris is waiting in the parking lot.

"Do you want to follow me? Or shall we take one car?" Christina asks.

"My car is out of petrol, we can take your car." We walk over to her silver Captiva 5 and slide into the passenger's seat. We drive to the Hospital in silence. We head up to Tris's room and I sit down next to her. She looks so peaceful. So beautiful. I let a tear drop down my face.

"Tris..." I stroke her hair. "Tris I need you." Christina puts a hand on my shoulder and sits on the bed next to me. "I need you more than anyone knows, more than anyone needs you. You know what? When you are back, we can go somewhere, anywhere, you can choose where. It'll just be us. You know how much I love you, and I know that that love is invisible and it's no use when you're not here because that's what people think. I'm never going to leave you alone. I'm never going to let anyone touch you. No one. Ever." I plant a kiss on her forehead before rushing out the door, past all the sick patients in their visitor-crammed rooms. Past the nurses rushing to their aid. Out into the lobby where a man in a wheel chair waits. Into the outside where the cars are parked. I run onto the road, the busy road. Cars honk and slam on the brakes but I keep running, into the construction site next to the Hospital. Builders walk past me. I keep running. I hear Christina call for me but I don't listen, just run...

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