Lisa: Oh my gosh! We are at Chapter 10 and have over fifty reviews! -does fan girl squeal and hops around with Vanessa-
Vanessa: Oh yeah! We rock!
Michelle: What the? Where'd she come from?
Vanessa: -stops hopping- I'm in this chapter.
Lisa: -still hopping around- Guess what? We're not in this one too!
Michelle and Neko: WTF?!?! -tackles Lisa down- Why the hell not?
Lisa: This chapter is an event occurring about two minutes after we got sucked into the game.
Annie: Oh yeah... I still laugh at Michelle calling the fat man Don Vito.
Neko: Oh yeah! And she just had to spray paint the wall!
Daxter: And threw broccoli at my face!
Michelle: How about I shove it up somewhere instead?
Daxter: -scoots away-
Lisa: Alright! Enough! Let's just get this show on the road!
Vanessa: Alright! Time to see me in action!
Okay, Vanessa will tell you what has happened so far... well mostly the important parts.
Hey, Vanessa here! I guess we should backtrack for a few minutes before getting on with the show here. First off, the girls are sent to Haven City and are separated from Lisa, the one who hosted the sleepover. Then she is saved by Jak and is taken to Torn who puts her under the care of Mina. Meanwhile, Michelle, Annie, and Neko get sent to another part of Haven City and begin working for Krew then later on meet Jak and Daxter. Then after a while, Lisa gets kidnapped by a man named Markus and is now living as Princess Sara. Neko quit work with Annie and Michelle after an argument and is now a delivery girl for Duo.
But I bet some of you are wondering what's going on back at our world. Well, let's ask me! Or better yet, read what happens!
Chapter 10
Two Minutes Later
About two minutes after the girls were sucked into the game, the front door of Lisa's house slowly opened as Vanessa entered the large house. She quietly closed the door, remembering it was quite late now at night.
"Hey guys! Are you here?" Vanessa called as she closed the door and started walking around the house. "My mom said I could sleep over but she didn't stop the car so I just jumped out."
She waited for a reply, which she didn't get any.
"Oh! I get it!" she said as she punched her fist into her palm. "This is hide and go seek! You knew I was coming didn't you? Well, ready or not! Here I come!"
She started to search around the bottom level of the house since she knew she wasn't allowed upstairs. As she looked through the living room, she thought up of a very sad idea. She took a long, deep breath and then shouted, "Marco!" She stayed silent, expecting for an answer, but none came.
"What the hell?" she said. "Michelle is not that good at playing hide and go seek!"
Michelle: WTF?!
Lisa: Michy, calm down.
Neko: Ha!
Annie: -smirks-
Markus: -stays stoic-
She then shrugged, giving up as she headed toward the area where Lisa said the group would be sleeping at which was the gaming/other living room. (A/N: I seriously don't know what we call that area!) She glanced at the TV and noticed that the Playstation 2 was on. She smiled as she quickly jumped on to the bed, grabbed the controller and pressed "Start".
"Michelle and Lisa shouldn't mind me starting the game already," she said to herself. "They saw, played this game probably like about a billion times and maybe even beaten it already."
She watched as the ring appeared and then mechanically open, revealing the main menu. She then clicked on New Game and saw a character creation screen. Vanessa beamed and said, "Sweet! You can create your own character on this game? Why the hell didn't those two say this before? I would have gotten this way back when it came out!"
She typed in her name, age, and a small biography similar to her own. After pressing Continue, the screen changed to a character description screen. As she went through making her character, she found the outfit that she dreamed of wearing, almost the same facial description, and her hair style which was really long.
Lisa: No, seriously! It is long! I tripped over it when Michelle pulled it in front of me.
Michelle: Ha! You tripped over hair!
After making sure that everything was okay, she pressed the Play button and watched through the intro of Jak 2. Remembering that this scene was the almost the longest out of all the cut scenes in the game, according to Lisa and Michelle, she placed the controller next to her and got comfortable to watch the scene.
As soon as it got to the end of the rift scene, the screen stayed bright. Vanessa cocked her head sideways in confusion as she then grabbed the controller and pressed the triangular button.
Nothing happened...
She pressed the Start button.
Nothing happened...
"What the hell?" she exclaimed, standing up and walked toward the game system. "Is the disk scratched or something?"
She was just about to open the cover of the disk when she noticed that the TV was starting to get brighter. She turned her head, seeing as she was close to the screen and saw that the rift reappeared on the screen, only there was no rift rider or those elf people that first appeared in the game.
Everything then white out.
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"Listen to me, Jak," Daxter began to say as they were heading back to the Stadium after nailing the course with a perfect score. "You have to focus your mind on the more important things like... how the hell are we going to get back home?"
"Daxter, we have to do this job," the blonde replied. "It's the only way for me to get back at the Baron for turning me into this... monster."
He glanced down at his hand as if it was now in Dark Mode, seeing the pale skin and the dark nails in his mind along with the fearful look in the girl's eyes. He closed his hand into a fist as it shook in either anger or fear.
"Jak..." the Ottsel muttered, seeing a dark expression on his friend's face. He then heard a low sound like a moan as he turned his head to his left. There he saw a small girl with really long hair. "Oh yeah, baby!" he exclaimed, pulling on Jak's ear to make him go toward the girl.
"What the hell, Daxter?" Jak growled as pain kept going through his left ear.
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"What happened?" Vanessa thought as she shook her head, feeling like she just had a hang over. "I guess I drank too much soda." She slowly stood up and dusted off any dirt that got on to her clothing and then realized what she was wearing. It was the outfit she chose for her character from the game.
"Oh man!" she mentally cheered, her face gleaming with joy. "This is getting better and better!"
As she checked out her outfit, she was suddenly surprised as a high and annoying voice came out of nowhere.
"Hey sweetness, did you just wake up?"
She looked up to see a tall man with blonde hair standing before her, rubbing his long ear. She was about to ask him if he just talked to her when a large orange face popped in front of her with a cheesy grin.
"You know, if you were having your beauty sleep, you don't need it," he flirted as the man rolled his eyes at this. "Because you had just probably woken up from a thousand-year old sleep."
Vanessa just stared at the creature with a blank expression before narrowing her eyes and said, "Dude that was the weakest hit I have ever received in my whole entire teenage life." She then grabbed his long furry ears, pulled him away from her body and threw him at the blonde.
"Put that thing in pound," she suggested as she folded her arms and put her left foot forward. "I think he still needs to get his shots."
The creature growled as he quickly jumped on to the man's shoulder and shouted, "Well you are just some girl who could probably trip on her own hair!"
Vanessa was about to retaliate when she suddenly thought up of a great idea. She cupped her own chin and said, "You're right."
"What?" the creature said as the man looked at the girl with surprise.
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Jak couldn't believe it. Some stranger was agreeing with Daxter on an insult that was thrown toward them.
Daxter just took this as a good thing and smirked. "Oh! Now you show me respect. Well, it's too late, honey! I'm not taking it back!"
The girl just smiled and folded arms again and just agreed with him. Jak felt that something was not right.
Neko: OMG! She isn't, is she?
Lisa: I think she is.
He suddenly noticed that girl started to leave and took three steps away from them. She suddenly stopped, turned around and said, "Well you're stupid like your father."
Then she walked away from them, leaving them with just blank expressions. Jak just glanced at his friend, seeing as the Ottsel was trying to understand why she had said that. Knowing that his friend might forget about it soon, he then headed toward back to his original destination.
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Vanessa looked over her shoulder to see the man and the creature walk in the opposite direction and she smirked. "It'll probably take around forty minutes to three days till he figures out."
As she kept walking, she suddenly felt like she was being watched. She soon stopped walking and noticed that there was a group of rough looking guards coming toward her with some weapons. She narrowed her eyes as she placed her right hand on her hip and let her left arm dangle on her side. The guards soon got close enough for her to get a good look at them and vice versa. Then her attention turned to the long metal sticks in their hands. She didn't feel cautious and slowly let her guard down and just waited for something to happen.
Suddenly, the one directly in front of her pulled out a small device that seemed to be scanning her. As she watched the device, she suddenly heard gun shots, or something similar to the sound, from behind her. Quickly jerking to the source, she saw a man with dreadlocks running toward her along with a man that vaguely had a familiar appearance to Lalo.
"Get away from them! They're the Krimzon Guard!" the Lalo look-alike shouted at her.
At first, she was confused until she remembered something that Lisa and Michelle joked about.
It was near the end of the school day as Lisa, Michelle, Annie, and Vanessa were heading to the after school hang out. As they began to talk what all game and anime crazed fan girls talk about, they heard a loud police siren from the distance as three cop cars quickly drove by. After a long moment of silence, Lisa glanced to Michelle and gave her a mock glare.
The Mexican noticed the look and acted a bit wary. "What's with the look, Lisa?" she asked.
"What the hell did you do now, Michy?" she joked, putting a bit of a mad tone in her voice.
Annie decided to join in as she stood beside the small Filipino girl. "What the hell did you do?" she asked as she placed her hands on her hips.
Michelle put up her hands in defense and stated, "Hey! That Krimzon Guard was unconscious when I got there and then I had to defend myself!"
Vanessa just shook her head as the two girls began to pester her about messing with the Krimzon Guard is bad and could get you sent to prison.
"Prison?" Vanessa mentally shouted as she was about to make a break for it. She then felt something shock her back as pain began to flow all through her body, immobilizing all her body systems, causing her to fall unconscious.
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Mango kept shooting at the KG as he tried his best to get toward the girl, but it was too late. He watched as the poor teenager was shocked and pulled toward a KG zoomer.
"No!" he shouted as he ran toward the vehicle, seeing it about to take off.
"Mango, stop!" his leader ordered as he passed by him. Torn watched as his comrade ran after the zoomer and made an attempt to jump.
Everything started to go in slow motion, and Torn couldn't do anything to stop it. He watched as he saw a Krimzon Guard take out a crossbow and shot it at Mango, hitting his back. He saw a pink smoke go all over his body as if it was tendrils grabbing his body, causing the boy to fall forward to the dirt.
"Mango!" he called as he raced toward his fallen friend. As he ran toward Mango, he slightly noticed that the KG were pulling away from the scene along with the girl. Once he reached his friend, he knelt and flipped him so he would be facing him. Mango had his eyes closed and moaned like he was in pain.
He then noticed that the pink smoke was still encircling his body. Torn narrowed his eyes as he carried the boy on his back and headed toward the lair.
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Six hours later...
Vanessa slowly opened her eyes, feeling her body being dragged against the cold cement floor. Her eyes were a bit drowsy as her head was facing downward, unable to move from the shock from earlier. Someone was pulling her across the floor with her left arm, but at the moment she didn't really seem to care.
She suddenly herself placed on yet another cold platform, only she then felt something wrapping around her wrists and ankles. Reality snapped back to her mind as she quickly started to struggle out of the straps that were holding her down. She then fell silent as she heard something starting to power up. Looking up, there was a rod pointing straight down at her chest. Purple sparks began to slow emit out of the rod as she slowly felt something being forced into her body.
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The Baron and Errol watched as the young girl began to scream in pain as the Dark Warrior Program started.
"Looks like she's a good one sire," Errol stated as the girl's vital signs were near the top but didn't show anywhere close to the fatal zones. Praxis nodded his head in agreement as they waited for the five minute long injection began.
To be continued...
Vanessa: WTF? Lisa! Why did you do that?
Lisa: You get kick ass powers anyways!
Vanessa: But one of the lines just sounded weird!
Neko: AHAHAH! You did a Dane Cook line!
Lisa: I wonder how long Daxter is going to realize what that meant.
Neko: Probably thirty minutes...
Michelle: Or five days...
Michelle: I give it the end of the next chapter...
Vanessa: Let me reply the reviews! Please?
Lisa: Sigh... Fine then.
Vanessa: Yeah! Time for review reply!
0xjessix0: LOL! Spaghetti! Yeah... darn it! I knew something was up when Michelle didn't say "Polo!" Thanks for the review!
liz: ... um... thanks for the review... even it was kind of out of subject...
Tech E. Coyote: Ahaha! Yeah, we so rock! Don't worry! We all have different excuses for our weirdness.
Pyro Madz: What? You got a problem with more OCs? You wanna piece of me? -gets smacked- Ow! Sorry about that... LOL! Random stuff again! I love this writer!
pheonixral: You hate snow? Yeah, our weather is getting wonky lately... Thanks for the review... Wait... YOU HAVEN'T REVIEWED SINCE CHAPTER 5?
Darkecogir: Hey! That's all Lisa is revealing! Stop pulling info outta her! JK, but we can't tell you... you'll just start learning the plot...
Lady Elyn the druid of Serria: Wow... you got a really long name... yeah; we got a lot of funny stuff to put in this story! Just you wait until I get back with others.
Now for a preview of the next chapter!
"So you want me to help you spy on Michelle, even though I hate you so much that I want to kill you after that comment you said back there?" Neko said the Asian. She just nodded her head and waited for a reply. Neko just shrugged and agreed.
Annie then started to laugh evilly, causing Kato to flinch at the sudden noise. "I'm surrounded by freaks," he stated to himself as he carried the box into the back of the shop.
See you all next week! Oh yeah! One week left before Christmas break!