GOOD OLD FASHION SCHOOL OF LOVERBOYS

Chapter Eleven: Wishing

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Twilight.

Night and Day at the same time.

The lonely, broken souls of the Sohmas that sat in Shigure's yard at the moment were not lonely, and were in fact whole. If at least for this time…

Momiji was humming while he ate dumplings.

Hiro and Kisa were laughing away like children. It was sometimes too easy to forget that those two were indeed just children.

Haru was staring up at nothing in particular, completely serene and tranquil.

Ritsu lay on the ground, looking up at the sky, breathing in the peace and happiness all around him.

Ayame, Shigure and Hatori were laughing, eating and talking as though the World was not only confusing Day with Night, but also time and place. The three men looked as though years had disappeared of their faces, leaving youth to reclaim its place from experienced misery.

Yuki, Tohru, Kyo ad Kagura sat together. They were all smiling and enjoying the company they all shared.

No one was fighting, or running away, or chasing anyone. No one was making sarcastic remarks, or apologizing or crying.

Everyone was happy.

"Ah! A shooting star!" Tohru exclaimed. She then quickly shut her eyes and concentrated fiercely.

"Look, another one!" Momiji pointed to a different part of the sky.

"And there!" Kagura pointed the opposite direction. Everyone stopped following the pointing fingers because shooting stars were now in every direction no matter where one turned.

Everyone stood up and watched the meteor shower. Tohru kept wishing on every shooting star she would see. She would close her eyes and concentrate, open her eyes and the very next moment when she saw a shooting she would close her eyes again and wish.

Yuki and Kyo stopped watching the shower and watched her instead. Both boys had peaceful smiles on their faces.

Ritsu scouted through the meteor shower, through dozens of shooting stars until he saw the one he was looking for. He wasn't quite sure if he would find one as special as he needed for his wish, but he did. It was slightly bigger than most of the other falling stars and when Ritsu decided it was the one, it was positioned just right that the sky around it made it look as though it was glowing pink.

Perfect.

He shut his eyes and wished hard. His lips were moving and his brows scrunched. When he opened his eyes, he took a deep breath and walked over to Tohru with determination. She was still wishing on every star she could and both Yuki and Kyo were still watching her as if she were a miracle meteor shower.

"Tohru?"

Tohru turned and opened her eyes. She had just finished her 13th wish.

"Yes, Ritsu?"

"Would you go on a date with me this Friday night?"

Everyone's attention was drawn immediately to Ritsu and Tohru. Tohru was struck dumbfounded for a moment, then her face eased into her warm smile and she nodded.

"Of-course." She bowed and so did he. Then he turned his attention back to the shower as did Tohru who immediately started back on her wishing rampage.

Everyone slowly regained him or herself and looked back up to the miracle above them.

Yuki and Kyo exchanged worried glances and watched Tohru again, this time with an air of almost desperate worry.

They didn't even realize they shared that exchange.

Kagura, however, didn't miss a thing.

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SHORT, RIGHT?! I KNOW, BUT I WANTED TO UPDATE FOR SOME REASON, AND YEAH. THANKS!

NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE A DATE WITH OUR WONDERFUL RITSU! AND WHAT ELSE COULD BE IN STORE FOR OUR HEROES?

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