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Chapter 10
Darth Bane smiled. Everything was going according plan. Kenobi was a challenge, he never expected it to be easy. However, the Jedi had been no match for the darkside, such was a fact. Bane turned to Plagueious. "Bring him to me, it is time." Plagueious nodded. "As you wish my Lord."
Obi wan was dreaming, dreaming of darkness. It seeped around him, in him, through him. He wanted to cry, he wanted the darkness to leave him alone. He saw Memories flash by, ripping bigger holes in his already riddled heart. Choking on his tears, he felt himself fall to his knees. "Why is the force doing this to me? What did I do to deserve this? I serve the Jedi, I would give my life for them. I live of the light, I repent the dark. I've served the light so faithfully, after everything I still sought refuge with it. Why now is the force abandoning me? Why?" Obi wan couldn't help the tears that cascaded down his cheeks. He hurt, he felt alone.
Plagueious walked into the room, and immediately saw the Jedi's distress. Grabbing the mans shoulders, Plagueious shook the Jedi awake. "Get up! You're coming with me." Plagueious deactivated the binders that had held Obi wan for so long. Obi wan felt straight to the floor, his legs unable to take the sudden strain. Plagueious sighed, stooped down, and picked the Jedi up. He shoved Obi wan forward, causing him to stumble on the way back to the cavern.
Bane, surrounded by the other Sith, sneered at the Jedi who now fell at his feet. "Well Kenobi, have you changed your mind yet?" Obi wan looked up. "No." His voice sounded hoarse, unsteady and weak, and he knew it. "Ah but it doesn't matter. You're mine now. Why do you even fight it Obi wan. That twit Skywalker left you for dead. He let go of you on purpose, he let you fall." Obi wan shook his head, "No, he didn't! The grip failed, he didn't let go on purpose." Bane looked down and tutted. "Oh my dear Kenobi, he did. Do you think they're even looking for you. You died on that planet, they don't even care." Obi wan looked down, he had lost, he knew it. He tried so hard, he really did. He couldn't help the sigh that escaped his lips. "Very well Bane, do your worst." His voice sounded flat, as if accepting his fate. Bane just smiled wider.
"Oh I will. But first, I have a few things to clarify. You will have no memory of your previous life. Everything you ever remember of the Jedi will be forgotten. You will retain your skills, we need those. Blatantly put, you will never remember being a Jedi. And there is no fighting it." Obi wan stared in horror. They couldn't do that, could they. "I am your Master now Kenobi, and you will serve the darkside." Sidious, watched with interest, let's see how wonderful his Master's plan fails. Then perhaps he would be able to kill Kenobi once and for all. Bane raised his hand and held it before Obi wan's head. Bane smiled again. "Say goodbye to your past Kenobi, and embrace your future." Obi wan smiled briefly, taking in his predicament. And before Bane touched his forehead, he whispered into the force. "I'm so sorry Anakin." Bane's hand touched, and his world went black. Obi wan's head snapped back at the force of the darkside. His body crumpled forward and he lay on his elbows at Bane's feet. Sensing a shift in the force, Bane asked once more. "Who do you serve?" Obi wan pushed himself to his knees. He slowly looked up at Bane, his once pure blue eyes now rimmed with yellow and red streaks along the edges. "I serve you my Lord." Bane laughed out loud. "Good, now rise my apprentice. Rise Darth Severous." Sidious looked surprised, it had worked, well, we shall see what happens now. Obi wan's light aura faded, blinked out. And instead, a swirling black mass of pure darkness suffocated the space.
On Corruscant, in the room of a Thousand fountains, Anakin Skywalker screamed.
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