My Little Pony Friendship is Magic : The Fall of Equestria

by The Gungan

What if Twilight had another brother, One older then Shining Armor? What if he discovered a threat to Equestria, one that would bring endless chaos? What if our world and Equestria were connected, by Twilight's oldest brother being here, and the new threat originating from here? This is "The Fall of Equestria." Book 1 of The Rise of Equestria series.

10. Chapter 8

Authors Notes

Hey guys. Welcome back. Time for another great chapter. Please enjoy.

Chapter 8

"We have to stop him!" Twilight said, sternly. "Yes, but how?" Cutler replied. Twilight and Cutler both knew the answer to that question. They would have to teleport to Equestria, and stop Darkstar.

"Everypony hold hands." Twilight orders. She and all the others form a chain of people. "Ok, big brother, you ready?"

Cutler nods, and together, he and Twilight start to cast the interdimensional travel spell. The building lit with a pink and red hue. Before it teleports them away, Cutler grabs Jordan and Dorian, who have their eyes closed in fear. In a flash, they all disappear.

When Jordan and Dorian open their eyes, they notice that they aren't in the Archive Building anymore. Looking down at a puddle on the ground, Dorian screams. He could not believe his eyes. Instead of his normal reflection, he looks at a pony. Looking over at Jordan, his jaw dropped. Instead of his normal body, Jordan was a pony. He had a magenta mane and tail, a medium purple coat and wings, purple hooves, blue eyes, and his earring on his flank.

Jordan looked into the puddle, admiring himself, and then he looked at Dorian. Instead of his normal body, Dorian was a pony with a light blue mane and tail, a blue coat, light blue hooves, green eyes, and his earring on his flank.

"Yes, you're ponies. Jordan's a Pegasus, and Dorian's an earth pony." Cutler said, from behind them. He was a unicorn. He had a white and light pink spiraled horn, a red with magenta and pink highlights mane and tail, a white coat, pink hooves, blue eyes, and his earring on his rump.

Dorian could not believe his eyes. He was sure this was a dream. He tried hitting himself with his hoof, trying to wake up. When he didn't, he gave up fighting it. Maybe Cutler wasn't crazy.

Then out of nowhere, a shadow appears overhead. It was in the shape of an alicorn. "Princess…" Twilight cries, then realizing that it wasn't the Princess. The alicorn landed in front of them. It had a black and dark gray spiraled horn, a dark gray mane and tail, a jet black coat and wings, dark gray hooves, and red eyes. Cutler recognizes the cutie mark on his rump. "Darkstar." He said, sternly.

"That's right, Cutler. Yes, I know who you are. And welcome to your new home." Darkstar said, laughing evilly. He moves out of the way and reveals Equestria. It looked like a ghost world. It was dark, and gloomy, fire was everywhere, and in the sky, Discord flew, distributing chaos everywhere.

Without warning Darkstar's horn starts glowing green. The ponies start feeling drowsy. One by one they fell, unconscious. The last thing Twilight saw before she fainted was Darkstar laughing.

Authors Review:

What ya think. A nice twist. What's gonna happen to Twilight, Cutler, and their friends. Stay Tuned.