Firstly!
All right... I admit it... i did the stupidest mistake of my life! and If you didn't say anything i would have never realize what i just did!
In my last chapter i did the retardest thing ever! i said that Rashel was blond! OMG!
***Mental slap!*** Im such an idiot!
I'm really sorry guys! I didn't realize before coz i think that i was so into the story that i just didn't see it!
Again I'm really sorry!
Secondly!
A lot of you guys have been sending me this private messages saying that another person was "apparently copying my story"... well people... I already talked to THAT person and no worries! she is not copying my story so chilax! Everything is alright I'm not going to murder anyone!... so go and read her story as well ;) It's funny... and we have a different format for the story... ;) So It's NOT the same... anyways Thanks a lot for those who warmed me to protect my story ;) thanks from my heart!
Thirdly... BookVampire! YOU HAVEN'T UPDATE YOUR STORY! THE ONE WHERE MARE IS PREGNANT! =/... I'M STILL WAITING!
Now... this new chapter! is dedicate to... Cha-cha-123-cha-cha, Meghan23, xXPurpleMidnightXx, LoveTheNight, danielle-redfern, Vampireacademyrox and my-heart-is-torn coz i haven't forgotten what you asked me for all this time! Here you go!
=D
hope you like it! =)
Name: Maggie Neely
Age: 16
City: Las Vegas
Interest in: Circle daybreak
Friends:45674657456736547345634563465
Family: Miles Neely (brother)
Maggie Neely:is in a relationship with Delos Redfern
Write down what are you thinking:
It doesn't matter. You're stronger than me; we both know that. But whatever you do, you can't make me your prey. You don't have that power. You can't control me.
Delos Redfern
I still thinking that this whole Facebook thingy is not a good idea.
Maggie Neely
Why not? Facebook is awesome!
Delos Redfern
I just don't like it… I have no idea how to use it… and I take ages answering back because you write way to fast.
Jez Redfern
I think we already figure THAT out Delos
Delos Redfern
Jez!
Jez Redfern
I know who I am… there is no need of telling me ;)
Maggie Neely
Hey Jez! Why did you hit Ash last night?
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Jez Redfern
Because…
Hannah Snow
Because…
Jez Redfern
Because he was annoying me with his inferiority intellectual…
Thierry Descouedres
Really Jez? Really?
Jez Redfern
Come on Thierry! He was pissing the hell out of me with his stupid questions!
Delos Redfern
Maggie… what does "pissing the hell out of me" means…
Jez Redfern
Speaking of another idiot that is winning a slap…
Maggie Neely
Hey! If you touch him! I'll start war Redfern!
Thierry Descouedres
Not the point… and if you start a war you'll do it outside MY house! Now… Jez! Why did you exactly hit Ash?
Jez Redfern
Coz he came to me and asked me… "Jez, if Barbie is so popular, why do we have to buy her friends?"
Morgead Blackthorn
Good question… I never got it.
John Quinn
It's only because she thinks that she is popular but the reality is another one!
Maggie Neely
People! Barbie is popular! The whole world knows her!
John Quinn
Thierry… do you know Barbie?
Thierry Descouedres
Of course I do! Is an ugly representation of a dinosaur that humans have for their kids…
John Quinn
No idiot! Not BARNIE! I MEANT BARBIE!
Thierry Descouedres
Who is that?
John Quinn
Exactly! This probes that she is not THAT popular!
Jez Redfern
You all have issues… I mean it…
Poppy North
And that's coming from you Jez… wow!
Jez Redfern
Do not even start Poppy
Ash Redfern
Well I'll do it then! You are one with more issues in this mad house!
Hannah Snow
This house is not a mad house Ash Redfern! =/
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Ash Redfern
Admit it Hannah… it is…
Jez Redfern
You know Ash… when we argue there are three sides to any argument: your side, my side and the right side.
Poppy North
I couldn't agree more! =D
Ash Redfern
Poppy shut up!
James Rasmussen
Ash…
Ash Redfern
She started!
James Rasmussen
Yes… but she is not the one that pisses the hell out of me!
Delos Redfern
Maggie! You see! Everybody uses the stupid sentence! What does it mean?
James Rasmussen
What does it mean what?
Delos Redfern
"Piss the hell out of me"
Mary-Lynnette Carter
Is what Ash does every single day to every single person in this mansion.
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Ash Redfern
That was not funny Mare -_-
Gillian Lenox
It's all right Ash… I like you! =)
Ash Redfern
At least someone cares!
Rowan Redfern
Me too!
Ash Redfern
Two people! =)
Kestrel Redfern
I don't so leave with it…
Ash Redfern
Not funny
Thea Harman
Ash… sometimes you are sooo stupid!
Ash Redfern
Ouch! That hurts! Thanks!
Thea Harman
I mean… you asked Jez the stupidest question ever! That makes you look stupid!
Blaise Harman
Ash is not stupid…otherwise he would get caught in everything he does by Mare or Thierry…
Mary-Lynnette Carter
O.o WHAT?
Thierry Descoudres
O.o oh God… what kind of people is living in my house?
Ash Redfern
Blaise… quite you look prettier…
Maggie Neely
In a few words… SHUT UP BEFORE I GET IN TROUBLE! =)
Mary-Lynnette Carter
Ash… do not get mad because they are calling you stupid… we already discuss that issue last week…didn't we?
Ash Redfern
Yeah… =)
Maggie Neely
What did you do?
Mary-Lynnette Carter
I explain him in what the word "stupid" could possible stand for…
Maggie Neely
And the result…
Mary-Lynnette Carter
STUPID = Smart Talented Unique Person In Demand
Raksha Keller
Hahahahahah that is brilliant! =D
Delos Redfern
My dear cousin… you are L A M E
Ash Redfern
My dear cousin… you are a P A I N I N M Y A S S T H A T P I S S E S T H E H E L L O U T O F M E
Delos Redfern
MAGGIE!
Maggie Neely
Ash stop it! You know he cannot read like that! And you know he doesn't know what THAT means anyways!
Ash Redfern
Exactly… that's the point B)
Maggie Neely
MARE!
Mary-Lynnette Carter
Ash…if you keep annoying people in this mansion…especially Delos I swear for my parents that I'll stop kicking you in the shin and instead I'll kick you somewhere else…!
Ash Redfern
O.o
Morgead Blackthorn
I want to see that! =D
John Quinn
Good luck… you'll need it …ouch!
Thierry Descouedres
Mare… I'm not saying that you shouldn't kick him or anything… but come on… that is painful
James Rasmussen
Mare… I agree with Thierry… think in your future generations!
Galen Drache
I agree with Thierry and James Mare… if you kick Ash in THERE… he won't be able to not even talk…
Timmy
Miss Mare… are you going to kick Ash where the sun doesn't shine?
Mary-Lynnette Carter
MY GOD PEOPLE! I didn't mean it like "in the area!" I meant in his face or his chest… but not in "THERE"!
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Miles Neely
Maggie…sometimes I really wonder about your friend's mental health
Maggie Neely
So do I…
So... Any reviews today? minimum 30! and i will update sooner!
pleassseeee ;)
next chapter will be Poppy...then Thierry...and then Blaise...
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you know you love me
xoxo
Sweet. Night