A Sting in The Tail

by AACripwell

Twelve months after Ed's surprise proposal Winry is looking forward to seeing him, but their reunion is not what she had first imagined. And when she gets a job at the same military base that he has been stationed at she finds him to be cold and distant. Just why is Edward so cold towards her and what secrets is Fortress 53 holding?

10. Interlude

Authors Note:

I wanted to post something this evening as, despite my 18 hour working day and not really wanting to post chapter 10 without giving it a few more once overs, I wanted to post something.

Firstly, I wanted to share my playlist that I listened to religiously whilst writing this. There is, as you would imagine, quite a lot of angst in there, but it might be fun for you guys to listen while reading, might get you to where I was when writing.

Evanescence - Hello

Evanescence - October

Evanescence - You

Sia - Big girls cry

Sia - Elastic Heart

Rihanna - Stay

Labrinth - Jealous

Callum Scott - Dancing on my own

A Great Big World - Say something (I'm giving up on you)

John Legend - All of Me

Jeff Buckley - Hallelujah

Sarah McLachlan - Elsewhere

Sarah McLachlan - Fear

Sarah McLachlan - Ice

Sarah McLachlan - Possession

Sarah McLachlan - Good Enough

Sarah McLachlan - Hold On

Sarah McLachlan - Do what you have to do

James Blunt - Goodbye my Lover

Damien Rice - Canonball

Damien Rice - 9 Crimes

Bruno Mars - Just the way you are

Secondly I wanted to say that I spent hours writing this. Literal hours of my life, sat at my Mac, writing. I've posted my writing online because I wanted to get feedback on it. I'm a bit saddened that it is getting so few responses as I know that people ate taking the time to read, I can see the stats. Please. If you want me to continue with this story then take the time to leave a comment. Even if it's just a couple of words. Tell me if you love it. Tell me if you hate it! Is it unrealistic? Is it not descriptive enough? Is it toe-curling angsty? Does it make you want smack Ed and Winry's heads together because he's such an idiot and she's such a doormat?! Whatever it is that it makes you think, please, comment at the end? I genuinely want the feedback. I can handle criticism, in fact I'd actually like to hear it. I would like to get better with my writing and therefore your comments will help! Seriously folks, as a writer it is so disheartening just to get no feedback - more disheartening than having lots of negative comments. It makes you not really want to continue writing. So I hope that if you are enjoying this story and would like to see it continue, you will review.

Thanks.