It's A Wild Cruise Ride
The Ultimate Chapter!
Alright folks, as promised. I have 100 reviews for this story. So in celebration. I hereby present to you all, this. THE ULTIMATE CHAPTER!
I know that this is going to be a big deal, so I'm actually eating popcorn while I'm typing this!
So here is how I wrote this chapter for anyone who is interested. I sat down, got my fingers positioned on my keyboard, imagined what I wanted this chapter to look like, then I just started typing what I imagined. So if it is great, I blame my imagination, if it is terrible, I blame my imagination. But this is the same imagination that got me 103 reviews, so I'm not complaining either way.
I re-present to you. THE DISCLAIMERINATOR! I'm re-presenting this inator to you because I feel like I should. No questions asked.
Disclaimer made by the Disclaimerinator: Myron Greenleaf does not in any: way, shape, or form, own anything including characters (with the exception of Lucas and Lily), any originally thought of ideas by other fanfiction writers or Dan Povenmire or Jeff "Swampy" Marsh, or songs written in this fanfiction story. All copyrights go to their respective owners.
*cricket* *cricket* Wow. That was a long disclaimer. I'm glad I didn't have to write all that out…
Yeah, I had a review by a certain person saying that I need to write in more detail, so seeing as that this is the ultimate chapter, I plan to put the most detail I'll probably ever do in this story right here. :)
ONTO THE ULTIMATE CHAPTER!
A Norm-Bot comes up wearing an apron and a tray. "It's muffin time sir."
Begin Transmission:
Hello, Phineas Flynn here, with my new girlfriend Isabella Garcia-Shapiro. We are here to tell you how we became boyfriend and girlfriend. We are recording this so if we ever want to tell our grandchildren how we became a couple, we will just play them this. But where to begin... OH! I know...
Phineas's Point of View:
I woke up in my room on board the swaying Cruise boat that I've been more or less living on for about a week and a half. So far, we'd gone from New York City to London, to Bordeaux, to Cadiz. Which reminds me, I still don't remember what happened when the boat docked in Cadiz. But, it was too late to go re-explore the city. We'd left the city yesterday and with the current and winds finally in our favor, the ship picked up speed and we practically glided from Cadiz around the Iberian Peninsula towards Marseille.
I had spent much of my own thoughts trying in vain to remember what had happened so far on this trip that I couldn't remember. So, I'm trying to figure out what happened in Cadiz. And I'm pretty sure that people say that we had entered Paris while up in the English Channel, but I don't remember any of it at all. All I remember is preparing to go into Paris, and getting a reward for winning a contest. But I don't remember anything in between that.
But back to my room. I just decided to stay in bed for a few seconds and stare out the porthole that was in the side of the wall, two inches above the waves that are painted on my wall. So. I started using my brain to get it fired up for the day. If the walls are nine feet high, and the waves painted on the wall are three feet high, then that means that the porthole must be around the four foot mark. I mentally applauded myself on my quick calculations. I then decided I've kept Isabella waiting long enough.
I tore off, not literally, the blue sheets that made up the dressings of the bed, refolded them neatly so that the bed was already made, ran over to my suitcase and got out my signature orange and white striped t-shirt, new jean shorts, and an undergarment. I changed out of my orange pj's and threw them messily into my suitcase, and threw on my signature look and checked myself in the mirror before walking out my sea green door into our living room.
"Morning Isabella," I said merrily while walking over to the tray of food that is brought every morning at Isabella's call. I looked over today's options for a breakfast, an orange, a green apple, a banana, frosted flakes cereal, 2% milk... don't ask on how I know it is 2% milk, a couple chocolate coated granola bars, or an egg and cheese omelet. "Geez, did you go overboard on breakfast ordering this morning?"
"Nah," Isabella disagreed. "I was just hungry today." Isabella got up and began loading up her bowl with another serving of cereal and her plate with another couple chocolate coated granola bars. (Remember in Cadiz that they hadn't eaten anything, Phineas skipped breakfast and went straight to looking for Isabella. Isabella was never fed anything, so they are both a little hungry, hence the big breakfast.)
"Well the hungry part was obvious," I noted. I got my plate and took the omelet and dug in once I got to the couch.
It took a little more than half an hour for us to finish off the large meal. I held open the door for Isabella as she wheeled the trolley out of the room and left it where we usually did, where you know what happens already.
I decided to not follow Isabella as she went to hang out with Lucas and Lily for the day. Instead I went to the inventors symposium store where I glanced around at anything and everything. They had everything you needed to build anything. I wondered what I wanted to build when I began remembering. I didn't remember several parts of this cruise, or that one day... Phineas I thought to myself. I know what I'm gonna do today.
It took relatively little time after that in order to get everything I needed. I had spent maybe $300 of my $2000 allowance. Leaving me with roughly $1600. I had spent around $100 on stuff from the various ports we entered.
I got to work on the top deck (still don't know what that is called) and began building my machine. I was kind of sad that Ferb wasn't here to work on it with me, but I was also kind of happy trying to think of the end results of this.
It took me roughly three hours to work on it and complete it myself. It looks like a square box on four legs with a hollow tube on one end, and a keyboard on the other. Also by the keyboard was a cup holder. I had painted it a sea blue in honor of being out at sea.
Of course Isabella decided to bring Lucas and Lily just as I finished.
"Hey Phineas," Isabella said in a dreamy sort of voice, like she was day dreaming about something while half-consciously talking to me. "What'cha doin'?"
"Impeccable timing Isabella," I noted with approval. "So you remember those days that no matter how hard you try, you just can't remember it?" All three of them nodded. Isabella seemed to have snapped out of whatever she was daydreaming about. "Well, I built a machine that can make you remember anything you've ever forgotten."
"That sounds cool," Lucas said. Lily nodded her head.
"Great," I said. "I knew you guys would like it. So ladies first, you two can battle it out to see who goes first."
"Lily," Isabella said immediately. Lily nodded and went to stand where I motioned for her to stand. I pushed several buttons and a beam of light hit Lily.
Her pupils slowly adjusted back to normal from the bright flash that she had forced her eyes to endure.
"So," Lucas asked going up to his sister. "How do you feel sis?"
"I just remembered that you owe me like fifty dollars Lucas," Lily accused.
"Hehe," Lucas laughed nervously. "Right, I'll pay you back when we get home."
"Uh-huh," Lily said not believing him. "Alright Lucas, your turn."
Lucas went up to where Lily was standing and braced himself. I pushed the buttons again and another bright flash appeared. Lucas staggered back a little and his eyes slowly readjusted. "HEY! LILY! YOU LITTLE SNEAK! GIVE ME BACK MY BASEBALL STUFF!" (Ah, sibling rivalry. They love each other, but they're still siblings, which says a lot.)
Lily facepalmed herself thinking that Lucas would've left it alone the moment he remembered in favor of something bigger. "As soon as you pay me back my fifty dollars."
"Fine," Lucas replied.
"Cool, Isabella you want to go next?" I asked.
"Okay," Isabella said while walking over to where the twins stood and took a step back from the machine.
"Smart," I said as I pressed the same sequence again and fired off the machine. Another bright flash signaled that it had worked again.
Isabella was about to open her mouth when she slapper her hand over it really quickly to keep herself from saying anything. Lily and Lucas looked slightly disappointed. They were obviously hoping for something hilarious to come out that she'd forgotten.
"Alright, my turn," I announced. I started pressing random buttons and gave myself a thirty second countdown timer before the machine would activate itself and fire off another burst of light. I ran over to where Isabella was standing and took another step back, which put me right at the pools edge.
"So, what do you think Phineas is going to remember first that he is going to say?" Lucas asked.
"I don't know," Isabella admitted. "It really could be anything. I mean, there is a HUGE amount of things that go through his brain, and he doesn't remember all of it." *flash* collapse* *splash*
"Phineas!" Isabella shouted. I faded slowly into unconsciousness. As I fell into the pool.
Hello, Isabella here. So, Phineas fell into a pool, well, right now he is going to the bathroom, so I'll tell you what happened from my point of view until he gets back to tell you all from his point of view again.
Isabella's Point of View:
I had dived into the pool after Phineas, pulled him up to the surface, and with Lucas and Lily's help, dragged him out of the water. I got out, and helped the two of them bring an unconscious Phineas back to our room. I took several towels. One for me, and four for Phineas and to put underneath him so the couch doesn't get soaked.
"I wonder if I can kiss him while he is still asleep," I asked out loud to Lucas and Lily who were muffling laughter at my comment.
"Go ahead," Lucas said mischievously. Lily smacked him on the back of his head with her hand.
"You really shouldn't take advantage of him like that Isabella," Lily said more wisely. "But if you think it might help him wake up, I'm all for it."
"Alright," I said. "Here goes nothing." I went up to Phineas, knelt down beside him, and slowly gave him a kiss. I saw in my peripheral vision, Lucas and Lily's jaws dropped open. My guess is that they didn't believe I would do it. I pulled back and put my head against his chest to see if I could hear his heart beating.
Phineas then choked up water and spit it out. It went pretty far. Right into Lucas' face. Lily fell to the floor laughing. (Don't ask, it was funny to put that in and I know usually someone would've drowned by this point, but it was only a little bit of water, so I don't believe he would've drowned yet.)
"So how many times does that make you've kissed me?" Phineas asked as he slowly got up into a sitting position.
"I don't know," I said grinning. "Three now?"
ISABELLA! You continued the story without telling me? Alright. Where did you leave off? Oh there? Alright. Now let's see...
Phineas's Point of View:
"Yeah, that would be my guess too," I said as I wrapped a spare towel around me and laid back down.
"So what did you remember?" Lily asked curiously after regaining her composure.
"Isabella is in love with me," I began listing. "Perry is a secret agent, Isabella was kidnapped." I then went into explaining that day that Lucas and Lily weren't there. Paris and the events in the other dimension.
"Wow," was all Lucas could say after hearing everything I've done that I've ever forgotten.
"Yeah," Lily replied. "Wow."
"And now," I said getting up. "I want to change out of these soggy clothes." I got to my feet, and walked into my room with a towel around me. I managed to get out of my soggy clothes, dry off with a towel, and put on some clean dry clothes. I had put my suitcase in front of the heater, so the heater warmed up my clothes so it felt like I was putting on clothes that had just come out of the dryer.
I put on a spare pair of shoes and put my other soaked shoes in front of the heater to start drying out. I threw the towels in the laundry bin and walked out of my room once again. The only thing still wet was my hair, but even that was being closed to being completely dry.
"So now what?" I asked yawning.
"Well," Isabella began. "We can always set up a live video chat with home."
"Oh yeah," I said blushing. "I completely hung up on them last time they called."
"When did they call?" Isabella asked.
"During the Cadiz fiasco," I replied.
"Oh," Isabella said. "Well come on! Let's not waste a moment."
"Yeah," I said with enthusiasm. "Lucas, go the inventors symposium store and get this stuff for us." I handed him a note. "Lily, go online and see if you can't find a satellite signal that goes to this ship. Isabella, help me clear off this table." Everyone got to work preparing for the video conference.
Twenty minutes later, we were all set to go.
"You know," Isabella wondered out loud. "How does it take so short of a time to do this stuff?"
"Easy," I explain. "We defy all logic and quantum physics."
"How is that easy to understand?" Lily asks.
"You need to be around me for a long time to understand," I say quickly. "Now to dial home."
I turn to the machine. Isabella closed the blinds while Lily turns off all the lights and closes all the doors. The machine was about three feet by three feet in a circular bottom, it was shaped like a cone and at the top was a small sphere of glass. I pulled out my phone and hooked it up to the blue-tooth which connected the phone and the machine.
"So if all goes well," I said. "We can see them while they can see us and what we are touching, nothing else though. "So like, they'll see the floor, any furniture we are sitting in, but they won't see things like outside the window or the walls."
"Cool," Isabella said. "Now lets get this going!" I nodded and started dialing the number for home. In a few seconds we could see my mom picking up the phone and dropping it in surprise at seeing us in the kitchen.
"Phineas?" she asked.
"Hey mom," I said waving. "Pretty cool huh?"
Linda fainted... Ferb and Candace came running into the room to see what had happened. Ferb understood what I had done immediately and went to the kitchen phone and putting it on speaker. Then he turned and waved.
"Lily, Lucas, meet my step-brother Ferb. Ferb, the twins Lily and Lucas," I introduce. "Oh, hi Candace!"
Candace sits down in a chair. "CAN'T YOU EVER BE NORMAL? IS IT TOO HARD TO JUST CALL ON A REGULAR PHONE OR USE YOUR COMPUTERS VIDEO CHAT?"
Everyone stared at Candace.
"Well I could," I said grinning. "But this was much more fun to make." Ferb nodded at Candace as well. I saw my dad walk in at that point.
"What's all the commotion going on about?" he asked. That was when he had noticed us. "Whoa, now that is impressive."
"Hi dad," I said waving.
"Uh," Isabella said. "Mr. Fletcher, is it possible you could get my mom in this call also?"
"Hm? Oh hello Isabella," he said. "I'll go get her at once." Lawrence walked out of the screen. We heard the front door open and close.
"So Ferb," I said. "What have I missed?"
Ferb pointed to a huge stack of books.
"Ah, reading. Anything interesting?" I ask.
Ferb kept pointing at the books.
"Ah, all of them?" I ask curiously.
Ferb puts his hand down and nods.
Why doesn't Ferb talk?" Lily asked.
"Ferb? He is more of a man of action," I explain to the twins.
Ferb cocks his head to the side.
"We've been great so far," I said. I then went into a short explanation of what has happened so far.
A few minutes after that, we heard a "Hello mija."
Everyone turned to see my dad with Mrs. Garcia-Shapiro walk in on the conversation. Mom was waking up from fainting.
"Am I crazy, or is Phineas, Isabella, and two other children I don't know in the living room?" Linda asked.
"The ladder," Ferb says.
"I believe that they call it hologram calling," Candace says.
I nod. "It isn't the latest in technology, but I like it."
"Alright Phineas, so how is your trip going?" Lawrence asked butting in on the conversation so Linda wouldn't faint again.
"Great," I said. "I found out Isabella is in love with me, oh, and these are Lucas and Lily, the friends I told you about shortly before entering Cadiz..."
"Oh right, hello," Lawrence said. Ferb waved.
"Hi," Candace said. "Mom, can I leave, Jeremy is about to come pick me up."
"Honey? Can't it wait? Your brother is sitting down to talk to us for the first time in a week and a half," Linda said.
"Fine," Candace said.
"So what's been happening since we left?" Isabella asks eagerly. I hear a bing sound. I look at my phone and see an email from Ferb had popped up. I quickly read it out loud.
"Not much, Fireside Girls got twenty new patches, I've read fifteen books, Candace has gone on five dates with Jeremy, Mom and Dad have done two antique symposiums, and Isabella's mom hasn't done much that is noteworthy..." I said. "Really?"
Ferb gives a thumbs up.
I looked around, mom and dad were having a lengthy discussion. Isabella and her mom were in a discussion, Lily and Lucas were talking together. I was talking to Ferb, and Candace was probably texting a couple of her friends.
"So what's been going on with the others? Buford, Baljeet?" I ask.
"Same old," Ferb replied.
"Alright Phineas," Linda said. "Your father and I have to head to the antique shop now, bye."
"Alright, bye," I said waving to them before they left visual range.
"You don't mind if I take my leave also do you?" Candace asked.
"Not at all sis," I say waving bye to her as she too left the screen. Mrs. Garcia-Shapiro had left with my parents so all that was left was Ferb who waved bye before ending the call.
"Well that was an unusual call," Isabella noted. "So what do you guys want to do now?"
"Well, there is a chess tournament," Lucas said reading today's schedule. "How well do you know your partner competition,-"
"I like that one," Isabella said. "Phineas, want to enter with me?"
"Sure," I said. There was something in my stomach that I just couldn't figure out. I knew that Isabella loved me, but do I love her back? I don't know. I'll figure it out later.
"WELCOME TO THE 'HOW WELL DO YOU KNOW YOUR PARTNER CONTEST?" The announcer shouted into the microphone. "IN THIS CONTEST YOU WILL BE ASKED THREE QUESTIONS ABOUT YOUR PARTNER! THE COUPLE WHO GET THE MOST RIGHT ANSWERS WIN! IF BOTH PARTNERS GET A QUESTION WRONG, THEY'RE OUT OF THE COMPETITION! IN THE EVENT OF A TIE, THREE NEW QUESTIONS WILL BE ASKED."
"Lets meet our four groups," The other announcer said into the mic. "Lucas and Lily, Isabella and Phineas, Emily and Carter, Katherine and Andy!" Everyone waved. "Now, onto the first question. What is your partners favorite color? Everyone write your answer down on the paper signs we give you. We will start with Lucas and Lily."
"Green," the responded at the same time. They both smiled, held up signs that they wrote their answers on before hand and they were both green.
"Go figure," the announcer said. "They're twins. They would know. Isabella? Phineas?"
"Isabella's favorite color I would have to guess, Pink?" I said jokingly. "Nah, I don't need to guess."
"Phineas's favorite color is orange?" Isabella guessed.
We held up our sings. I looked at Isabella's sign. Pink. "Called it."
Isabella looked at my sign. Orange. "We are good!"
"Hm, why am I not surprised?" The announcer asked nobody in particular? "Emily and Carter?"
"Red?" Emily asked.
"Blue?" Carter asked.
Both held up their signs. Emily wrote sea green, Carter wrote beige.
"Really?" Emily asked. "Beige?"
"What? It's an original color!" Carter defender himself.
The announcer facepalms himself. "Katherine and Andy!"
Katherine thought for a moment. "Peach?"
"Raspberry Red?" Andy asked.
Katherine had written Raspberry red. Andy had written Peachy Yellow.
"What the heck is Peachy Yellow?" The announcer asked. "Never mind, so Emily and Carter both got them wrong, so they are eliminated." Emily and Carter walked off the stage bickering about what the best color is.
"Now for the next question, the first announcer said. "What is your partners catch phrase? Lucas, Lily?"
"You have a catch phrase?" Lucas asked. Lily held up her sign. You have a catch phrase? "Wow, I did not see that coming. Anyway, what's my catch phrase?"
"Ow," Lily smirked.
"Ow is not my catch phrase!" Lucas said frowning.
"Yes it is," Lily responded.
"Prove it," Lucas challenged. Lily smacked him hard on his head. "OW!"
"Gotcha," Lily smirked again.
"Fine," Lucas said holding up his sign which indeed said Ow.
The announcer started laughing. "Wow, alright, Phineas, Isabella you're up!"
"Isabella's catch phrase is What'cha Doin'," I said. "Or in some cases, Hey Phineas, What'cha Doin'."
Isabella held up her sign: What'cha Doin'?, and Hey Phineas, What'cha Doin'?"
"Wow, she has two and Phineas got them perfectly," The announcer said. "So what is Phineas's catch phrase Isabella?"
"I know what we're gonna do today," Isabella said. "He has two, but they both mean the same thing."
I held up my sign: I know what we're gonna do today!
"I just got them backwards, do I still get full credit?" Isabella asks. The announcer nods. "Great, thanks."
"And Katherine and Andy."
Katherine rolls her eyes. "I give." She gets up.
"Me too," Andy answers.
"Wait, before you leave, what are your answers?" The announcer asks.
Andy held up his sign. I give.
Katherine held up her sign. Me too.
"Well, you both can stay in for another round if you want, or you can quit here and now," the announcer offers.
"I'm outta here," Katherine says. Andy nods his head and both walk off the stage.
"Well, I thought that they would stay," the announcer says.
"NOW ONTO THE THIRD QUESTION!" The second announcer announces. "Now that there are only two groups left, if even one person gets their answer wrong, both of them are out! But if both groups lose, then they both play another round. So the question issssssss." The announcer puts his hand in a jar to randomly select his last question. "What is your partners biggest goal at the moment, not a life long goal, but you know, one of those day by day goals? Lucas and Lily, you are up first."
"Baseball player," Lily said. Lucas nodded and held up his sign. Baseball player.
"Lucas?" The announcer asked.
"Music?" Lucas asks. Lily smacks her forehead into the table and holds up her sign. Dancing.
"And they are outta here. So if Phineas and Isabella can get their answers right, then they win, if they don't Lucas and Lily can come back up for the next round."
"I would have to say," Isabella said. I looked into her eyes. "He is trying to make everyone happy by seizing the day."
I held up my sign. Make everyone happy by seizing the day!
"Very good Isabella," I complimented her. She looked like she was day dreaming.
"Phineas?" The announcer asked.
I held up one finger and contemplated it very hard. What is Isabella's biggest goal on a day by day basis? It isn't Fireside Girls and getting all the patches, because that is a long term goal. But what is it? I doubt she does many sports that is her biggest goal. Music, I doubt, she likes it, but I don't think it is her passion, besides, that is a long term goal. Then it hit me.
"I know what it is," I said smiling.
"Oh, please enlighten us Phineas," The announcer said. Everyone leaned in to hear the answer.
This was the one that decided the game. I had to have chosen the right option. "She wants to make me her boyfriend." Everyone gasps dramatically.
Isabella smiled and fainted.
"Isabella?" I ask. I held up her sign for her. Make Phineas my boyfriend.
"AND THAT ENDS IT!" Both announcers shout at the same time. "Phineas and his fainted partner Isabella win!"
"Isabella?" I ask ignoring the two announcers entirely. "Are you alright?"
"Yeah, I'm alright," Isabella said getting back to her feet.
"Isabella? Would you like to be my girlfriend?" I ask smiling. I had finally figured it out. I did love Isabella back, and it took an entire day of drama to make it happen.
"YES! YES! A THOUSAND TIMES YES!" Isabella squealed before glomping me and giving me the biggest kiss ever. Everyone in the audience cheered for us.
"Sorry to interrupt the moment, but here is your trophy," The first announcer said. Lily went up to him and smacked him hard on the head. "OW!"
"See Lucas, it is his catch phrase also!" Lily said. "And you, don't interrupt a good moment."
The rest of the day went by pretty nicely. Everything had changed once Isabella and I became boyfriend and girlfriend.
I would tell you what we all did, but in the end, I must say. This is Phineas Flynn signing off for the night. My girlfriend and I have a busy night tonight, so I'd rather not keep her waiting too long.
Oh and remember. Carpe Diem!
End Transmission.
SO WHAT DID YOU ALL THINK?
Now to answer some reviews from chapter 9 I think it was?
MidnightMoonshyne
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
That's the best chapter I've read so far my friend! Btw, I love how the first thing Phineas say after getting his memories back is: "Appearantly, Isabella's in love with me..." I'm like LOL classic Phinny!
Yeah, that was fun writing out.
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Grantholomew
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
You obtained +1 reviews!
And awesome job!
Thanks!
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sistergrimm97
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
Idk whether to kick your ass or be flattered. 0_o So i'll just say... Thanks, but could you please put a link to my story too? :) if that's rude than sorry :( LOL but great chapterr! :D
Please don't kick my ass, I'd like it UN-kicked please
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thewolfstar
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
hehehe :P again, more. i loove this.
I know you love this. If you didn't you probably wouldn't be reviewing!
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SteadyEddieNewkumet
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
i must say havingthe songs in the story was kinda annoying
Aw, I liked the songs though!
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StellaMarris
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
My other review to the previous chapter is the same for this one, so yeah. YAY! no songs in this one! But, yeah, basically the samething. So, if you're going to reply, everything applies.
-StellaMarris
Yeah, we've talked about this already. But I did put much more detail in this one!
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Midnight4568
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
96th review! u only need 4 more till u can post ur ultimate chapter! this was a great chapter, btw! it's kind of like a combination of sistergrimm's story and the movie.
Yeah, I know about the combination. I sort of put them together because I was reading sistergrimm's story before I wrote it and I was listening to the movie while typing chapter 9 out.
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transformers fan 53
2011-08-30 . chapter 9
so agnet p erased their memorys then
Yes, the four of them had seen Perry as Agent P, and he knew that the O.W.C.A. wouldn't approve of using another amnesiainator against them. So he had to if he wanted to stay with the Flynn-Fletchers.
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Akuma Sumizome
2011-08-31 . chapter 9
STOP ERASING THEIR MEMORY :(
No! Jk, alright, fine.
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Stinkfly3
2011-09-01 . chapter 9
What are the other locations?
Read Chapter 2, it lists most of the cities that the cruise will travel to.
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Pikatwig
2011-09-01 . chapter 9
Your response to me in chapter 9, the review was typed before you IMed me. But at any rate, Still lovin this story.
ANYWAY! Thanks for still liking it!
Alright, this concludes the end of THE ULTIMATE CHAPTER!
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