Hey everyone. Sorry I haven't been updating this for a while but I'm not as
inspired to upload for this story. I love it and everything but I'm not
getting a lot of reviews for it.....So REVIEW!!!! Or I'll just delete the
story....
This whole chapter is a flashback....
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Jim~vs~Frankie......
Nails and Jim had upped Jim's rep and were doing well together. Frankie wasn't as happy about it, though. Fewer people were listening to him and Race, and he was in love with Nails. Frankie tried not to be jealous but he couldn't help it.
One day while playing in the yard, all the kids decided they wanted to play ball. Frankie and Race stepped up to be team captains but no one wanted them for captains. Jim and Nail's became the captains and picked through all the kids. All except Frankie and Race. Neither Jim or Nails wanted them on their team. The teams were already even so they shrugged and started playing without them. They didn't think it would matter.
They started playing and having a lot of fun. Frankie and Race stayed off to the side and glowered. Jim was pitching while Nails was at bat, when suddenly something knocked Jim over.
"What da...?," started Jim. "Frankie, what was dat?"
"I'se tired of ya takin' over. It all stops now Jim."
They started circling each other. Finally Jim attacked. Both started throwing punches and soon they were rolling around on the ground. All the kids gathered around and started cheering. Race walked around and took bets on the winner. Nails grabbed him as he was walking by.
"Aren't ya gonna stop dem?"
"Naw, I'se gonna get some money and candy outta dis."
"Ugh! Ya jerk!"
Nails raced forward and dove into it. She got a hold of Frankie and used all her strength to throw him off of Jim.
"Dat's it! All bets off. Ya two bettea stop fightin' NOW or I'll tell da nuns about it. Ya know ya'll get cleanin' duties fer a month fer fightin'."
Both boys cringed at the thought of having cleaning duties for a whole month. They glared and finally walked away from it all.
Jim's nose was bloody and he was going to have a bruise on his cheek but that wasn't bad. Frankie only sported a fat lip along with torn pants.
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Hope you like this chappie even though I don't think it's very good. I could've done better I think but....oh well. Please REVIEW....or I will delete the whole story!!!!!!
~Molly
This whole chapter is a flashback....
~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~***~
Jim~vs~Frankie......
Nails and Jim had upped Jim's rep and were doing well together. Frankie wasn't as happy about it, though. Fewer people were listening to him and Race, and he was in love with Nails. Frankie tried not to be jealous but he couldn't help it.
One day while playing in the yard, all the kids decided they wanted to play ball. Frankie and Race stepped up to be team captains but no one wanted them for captains. Jim and Nail's became the captains and picked through all the kids. All except Frankie and Race. Neither Jim or Nails wanted them on their team. The teams were already even so they shrugged and started playing without them. They didn't think it would matter.
They started playing and having a lot of fun. Frankie and Race stayed off to the side and glowered. Jim was pitching while Nails was at bat, when suddenly something knocked Jim over.
"What da...?," started Jim. "Frankie, what was dat?"
"I'se tired of ya takin' over. It all stops now Jim."
They started circling each other. Finally Jim attacked. Both started throwing punches and soon they were rolling around on the ground. All the kids gathered around and started cheering. Race walked around and took bets on the winner. Nails grabbed him as he was walking by.
"Aren't ya gonna stop dem?"
"Naw, I'se gonna get some money and candy outta dis."
"Ugh! Ya jerk!"
Nails raced forward and dove into it. She got a hold of Frankie and used all her strength to throw him off of Jim.
"Dat's it! All bets off. Ya two bettea stop fightin' NOW or I'll tell da nuns about it. Ya know ya'll get cleanin' duties fer a month fer fightin'."
Both boys cringed at the thought of having cleaning duties for a whole month. They glared and finally walked away from it all.
Jim's nose was bloody and he was going to have a bruise on his cheek but that wasn't bad. Frankie only sported a fat lip along with torn pants.
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Hope you like this chappie even though I don't think it's very good. I could've done better I think but....oh well. Please REVIEW....or I will delete the whole story!!!!!!
~Molly