Decided I should add a Ch 10 as soon as I could, so here it is.
To the people who have been asking, this wont, and never will be a Lemon. I don't write lemons. Chapter 8 might have been a bit like a Lemon, but Chapter 8 was supposed to be the end. Now that I'm continuing it, it looks a little odd in its place. I am considering a rewrite of Chapter 8.
Just to let everyone know, there are a few changes now to the whole style of writing. A whole chapter and possibly only fragments of Chapters will always be in "Point of View". These will be Italicized and have their own line to indicate that. The thoughts of the character in point of view are also italicized; this is similar to how it was for the past chapters.
I have also added a Chapter Preview and a Review response Section.
Hope you all enjoy!
Narrative Point of View
As Taichi approached his apartment, he could hear the TV playing from his living room. He inserted the key, and opened the door, entering a refreshingly cool room. His mother seemed to be frying some food, as his dad watched a sports channel on the couch nearby.
"Taichi? Where were you all this time?"
"Eh…I was at Sora's Flower Shop"
"I see"
His mother flashed a smile at him as he got a soda from the fridge. Hikari looked through the small opening on their room door. Taichi didn't seem to notice, his mother stopped him short before he walked away from the small kitchen area.
"Your friend….Yamato I think? He called awhile ago. Something about a camping trip?"
Taichi nodded and read the small memo that his mother had written. Hikari's left eye followed him as he walked and dialed the telephone. She opened the door all the way, greeting Taichi with a smile and a hug.
"Your home Taichi!"
Taichi smiled and lifted his index finger and pointed it to her in an erect position.
"One sec, trying to get a hold of Yamato"
Hikari nodded and leaned her body on one leg, with her hands behind her back, giving a loving smile. She walked back into their room, looking outside of the glass sliding doors that led to their balcony area.
The phone ringed a few times, before one of Yamato's friends finally answered.
"Yo?"
"Is Yamato there?"
"One Sec"
Taichi could hear some musical equipment playing in the background as Yamato's friend was walking.
"Taichi?"
"Ah, Yamato. You needed to talk to me?"
"Yeah, my dad has the next weekend off, he is taking us to a small campground not too far from here. I was wondering if we could all go together"
Taichi looked at the calendar to the left that was on the fridge and looked at the week ahead.
"Hold on"
"Mom? Are we still going to Aunt Terry's next weekend?"
"Of course! You still want to go don't you?"
"Well, Yamato is going camping next weekend. He invited me to go too"
Hikari appointed her attention to Taichi's conversation with their mother as they talked. Taichi's mother looked back at Taichi, disappointed.
"Terry will be sad if you don't go"
Their father finally looked back, after eavesdropping on the conversation.
"I don't know, your Sis is kind of fruity, she doesn't even like Taichi"
"So your really going to let him go on the trip!"
Taichi's father looked at him with a confident smile.
"Go on your trip son."
Taichi looked towards his father on the couch as he gave a response.
"Are you sure?"
Yamato patiently waited on the phone as Taichi talked with his family. Her mother shrugged and continued cooking, talking while finishing the food.
"Well if it's that important, then let him go. She won't be very happy with your decision"
"Prolly happier without him…"
Taichi's father mumbled as she finished. She glared back at him for a moment before smiling at Taichi and nodding. Hikari looked over her shoulder as Taichi confirmed his decision with Yamato on the phone, hanging it up shortly after.
"Are you guys going Camping?"
"Next Weekend"
Hikari looked a little anxious to ask Taichi, but held it in. Taichi smiled and opened his soda, which he had seemed to leave on the table during the whole conversation.
Later that evening, awhile after dinner…
Hikari Point of View
Taichi was standing on the balcony that branched off of Hikari's and his room. Hikari was in the living room, watching TV with her father, while her mother was getting ready for bed. Hikari hugged her father good night as her entered his room, closing the door behind him.
As Hikari entered their room, she could see Taichi on the balcony.
Oniichan…
Taichi let out a sigh as he looked down at the city lights that surrounded his apartment building. He could feel Hikari hug him from behind, resting her head on his back as she held her hands interlocked over his stomach.
"I remember…when I used to hold you like this…Before you would leave somewhere for a long time"
A warm breeze blew as Hikari spoke.
"So…you're really leaving next weekend?"
"Yeah…"
Taichi could feel Hikari's grip grow tighter around his stomach as he answered.
"I'll miss you…"
Please don't leave…
Taichi turned around, facing Hikari. Hikari blushed at first, then pulling herself to Taichi's chest, hiding her face. Taichi rested his chain on her forehead as the wind lightly blew.
"Do you want to go?"
Hikari's face lit up as he talked.
"Really? You…want me to go with you?"
Hikari began to blush brightly and looked up at Taichi. He smiled at her, blushing a little himself.
He is blushing…Taichi…
"I'll talk to mom and dad…If you really want to go"
Hikari nodded, and stood on her Tiptoes, elevating herself to a little under Taichi's height. She smiled back at him, moving her hands around his neck. Taichi blushed a little more now as she got near him. They both closed their eyes as she moved closer to his face.
"Oniichan…"
Hikari whispered before her lips brushed against his. Taichi opened his eyes, seeing Hikari's beautiful red eyes shining from the lights. He smiled lightly, as he gazed into her eyes, with her gazing into his. The moment was right; there wasn't a need for talking. It was a stand still moment, in which it was not to be disturbed, but to be left alone.
Hikari rebalanced herself on her feet, dropping her arms down to their regular position. Taichi smiled once more and felt her cheek with his left hand. Hikari blushed once again, smiling again back to him afterwards.
"You better get to bed, we have school tomorrow"
Hikari walked back into their room, as Taichi looked up once more at the stars, before going in himself.
Well, it took awhile to write this chapter, just like the last few ones. I haven't had much inspiration to write lately. However I managed to get it done. It's a bit discouraging to write Taikari, knowing that most of the time that they are usually flamed. I truly appreciate everyone's positive reviews on this story. Hopefully this story will be stretched out a bit and will become one of the better Taikari's.
In The Next Chapter…
The day of the trip comes, and jealousy strikes between Sora and Hikari, while Takeru begins feel a high tension towards Taichi. Adding Chapter 11 Soon!
Review Responses
Unknown08 – Thanks! I am not necessarily a Taikari supporter, however Taikari's are fun to write, since they are forbidden and have a lot flexibility as far as a story goes.
Drew (Anonymous) – Yes, that is slowly but surely happening. I'm not too sure where I will go with it, but everyone finding out will definitely make the story more interesting.
Lacy (Anonymous) – I agree in some extent. As I have said before, I don't condone incest outside of the Taikari relationship. Thanks for your support!
Little Devil – No problem. Koumiloccness is just an annoying person who doesn't have anything better to do with his time. Don't worry about him.
