I am sorry to imfrom all of the readers that this story will not be countuineing. I have no idea what to add in the story, and it is not going how I planed it to. I will be leaving this story up even though I will be rewriting it. The rewrite will be more darker, just like the 2003 version I was planing to write. Once again I am sorry to all of you who where injoying it so far, I just don't have the motivation to countinue this. But I will rewrite it. It will be darker Than ITEIANO(In The End I am no one). I am open to names for the story. write them in the coments section.
Short conclusion to my story.
Shadow stared up, her eyes glazed in fear. The man above her laughed, before he brought down the gauntlent strapped to his hand. Slashing quickly across the girls chest, the man laughed again before turning away, leaving her on the roof. As he left, he heard a small voice, hinted with a faint japenese acent ask.
"Why?" Looking back at the girl he felt a small stir of regret, but he quickly pushed it away. She had betrayed him, she deserved this. As he left, a shadow detached itself from the rooftop and raced towards the young girl. As the shadow kneed in the growing pool of blood, he picked up the girl in his arms. Gazing down at the small pale face framed by sily black hair, he felt his blood run cold. The shadow, now clearly seen to be a turtle, whispered softly hoping to wake the girl in his arms. As her eyes slowly opened, the turtle saw they where glazed in pain and sadness.
"I'm sorry, Raph." Was all she could get out, before she feel limp in the turtle's arms. Tears freely flowed down his face, staining his red mask. Raphael felt the girl's body begain to grow cold. Howling in greif, the turtle clucthed the now cold body close to his chest. Morning for Shadow, a friend he should have never made.
Once again this is the conclusion to In The End, I am no one. And I have abondonded this story, the most I will do is do a short follow up to this scene if you beg hard. And below is the summary for the rewrite.
Summay: A young girl, no older than five, ran towards the closed manhole cover. Pulling with all her strength, the manhole didn't even budge. Gasping she spun around, searching for another way out. A armoured covered hand flashed out of the darkness, claping firmly onto the little girl's mouth, cutting off her screams. As she was was pulled into the shadows, five words where spoken, five words that sent shivers down the childs spine. "Say good bye, Little One" And those words where the last thing she heard that night.
So please give me a name for the rewrite. AND don't kill me yet! I know I made Shadow die, and revealed her gender. BUT, the rewrite will hopefully(HOPEFULLY) be good, AND you still don't know her real name.
So Chow.