hey guys sorry i have not been updating i just was blocked and i had gotten good ones so yeah ENJOY!
* The walks up to the raped and bad beaten Loren on the dirty ally ground and picked her up worried and takes her to hospital and they take her in imidiately for surgery *
(at Eddie's)
*Eddie was pacing around back and forward worrying hes has called her over and over till something catches his attention at the tv*
Repoter: Pop Princess Loren Tate has been found in the ally by Tyler Rorke beaten and raped and has been taken to the hospital..in critical condition...we will have more on that story later tonight..
*Eddie quickly runs upstairs to his parent's room and opens the door to find his dad reading and his mom watching tv*
Max: Eddie are you okay?
Eddie: no no no Loren is in the hospital Tyler Rorke found her in a dirty ally beaten and raped and she is in very critical condition i need to go dad are you coming?
Max: yeah lets go!
*Max and Eddie left Katy there smirking to herself thinking of what a great job she has done...meanwhile Eddie and Max get there running and got to the front desk*
Receptionist: how may i help you?
Eddie: um were here to see Loren Tate..
Receptionist: room 400
Max: thank you
*they go and see Loren sleeping and all bruised up on her body..a few scratches on her face...ankle wrapped up...bandage around her head..and her arm in a sling..and then they see Tyler crying and looking at her then Eddie gets fully angry*
Eddie: what the hell are you doing here?
Tyler: *voice cracking* i'm here for Loren why else would i be here crying
Eddie: mmhmm how will i trust you?
Tyler: dude she's my little sister...
Eddie: what?...
Max: sweet little Loren is your sister?
Tyler: yes she is..my little sis i was going to tell her but then i heard a groan come from the ally when i was walking by then Loren turned her head slightly and looked at me then knocked out then i picked her up and brought her to my car and drove here..
Eddie: im gonna go out and catch some air...
Tyler: im gonna leave imma talk to her tomorrow see ya Max
Max: bye
*After Tyler walked out Max went over and caressed Loren's cheek*
Max: i'm so sorry this happened to you..i wish i could have did something..even though i just met you..i love you like a daughter already...
*Then while Max caressed her cheek again Loren woke up and looked over and groaned*
Max: Loren you're awake do you need anything?
Loren *horse* i love you too dad..
*Max kissed Loren's head and smiled and Loren smiled back*
Max: want me too get Eddie..he went crazy in the car..
Loren: yes thanks dad..
Max: welcome sweetie
*Max left and a nurse came in and brought the doctor*
Nurse: hi Ms. Tate
Loren: *horse* hi
Nurse: this is your doctor
Loren: ?
: hi Loren-
*Nora runs in and comes in and hugs Loren and Eddie and Max follow her*
Nora: aw honey you're okay!
Loren: *yes mom i'm fine
Nora: okay *Nora kissed her head*
Loren: *horse* baby...
*Nora let Eddie through and he came and kissed and hugged her*
Eddie: hey hun i'm so glad you're okay
*Loren smiled at him and kissed him again and Loren looked at the doctor*
Loren: *horse* you can keep going
: ok.. because of the family just getting here im Loren's doctor..
Nora: wait..your last name is Tate...got a first name?
: Cymphonique..
*Nora got a shock face and so did Loren*
Loren: *horse* sissy?
sissy? uh-oh hmm to ask about things kik me KIK: SWAGMAGER44