A.N. Hey I know it's been forever since I updated but, my Microsoft word is sort of broken so if there's any spelling mistakes my apologies. Anyway, heres the story!

Me: Hey Fang, guess what?
Fang: Oh jeez. What?
Me: I'm not going to torture you today.
Fang: REALLY?
Me: Yes, really.
Fang: YES –
Me: IM not going to torture you, but guess who is.
Fang: Ohmigod…
Me: Say hello to the one and only… IGGY!
Fang: Pfft Iggy can't hurt me.
Iggy: *Tackles Fang to the floor.*
Fang: Man, I thought we were friends.
Iggy: We are but Natalie has my lock picking kit *says in sad voice*
Fang: Natalie why do you like to hurt me?
Me: Hmmm…. Because you're so emotionless and it's funny! :D Anyway *throws lock picking kit at Iggy's head with full force* I'm done here.
Disclaimer: I don't own Max Ride JP does blah blah blah you know the story.

(Max's POV)

We got out of the car, all crippled and what not. Fang was still smirking at me, and right there I wanted so badly to punch him.

"Ok so where do we want to go first?" Nudge said. Wow, that was short for Nudge. Hmm maybe being crippled for 20 minutes straight shut her up.

I was so wrong.

Actually I was at the verge of tears.

You would be too, if you had to walk around and a very crowded, hot, loud place with Nudge babbling away about Orlando Bloom for 15 minutes.

"How about we go to the water park?" Said Gazzy.

But then I thought of something. If I was in my bathing suit they would be able to see my wings… aw crap.

Why didn't I think of that sooner?

"How about we go on rides first because if we get wet it will be no fun, to just sit there all soaked and stuff." I quickly put in.

I bit my lip hoping that they would buy it. Gazzy seemed to think for a second.

"Ok!" He said.

Time Skip

So far I've managed to avoid the water, but it was getting hot out and we were getting sweaty.

"How about we do the tunnel of love it's only gonna be here for another week and I really want to go!" Angel suddenly said.

Normally I would have said no, but in my situation I guess I would have to agree.

I shuddered at the thought of my willingly going into the tunnel of love. What has the world come to?

I nodded and everyone looked at me like I had 4 heads.

"What I can't have a sensitive side?" Everyone including me burst out into a laughing fit.

"Oh, that's a good one." Iggy said, while pretending at wipe away a tear.

"Ok I'll go with Nudge, Iggy with Gazzy and Fang with Max! Any questions? No? Ok let's go!" Angel said in a stern voice.

Curse you cruel, cruel fate! Fang and I exchanged glances. His was a teasing glance. Mine was a glair.

"What it's not my fault the kid has her mind set." He said at we stepped in the pink heart shaped boat.

Then the lights dimmed and we were off.

The silence was awkward until I broke it. "Soo..."

I just made it so much more awkward than it had to be. *Sigh*

"Why do you hate me?" Fang asked looking straight ahead, with no emotion on his face.

"I-I don't hate you. I mean at first I did but you really aren't that bad of a guy. I've seen the way you skip things, like parties and things like that, to spend time with the kids, or babysit. It's just at first you came off as a jerk."

"Really?" he said quietly.

"Yeah, I actually like you as a friend now." Maybe even more.

No bad Max! I mentally slapped myself.

Then he looked me in the eyes. His ink black eyes seemed to have a certain light golden light to them.

"Just friends?" He asked.

"U-um…yeah. I mean I really like you, maybe a little bit too much-"

He leaned closer and I could tell what he was going to do. But he was going to slow so I met him half way and smashed my lips to his.

He immediately started to kiss back. I felt electrical shocks, good ones, going up and down my spine.

Eventually I brought my hands to his neck, and then I twisted my fingers in his silky black hair, and pulled him closer.

He put his hands on my hips and scooted me onto his lap and it became a make out session. But then, all too soon we came out of the tunnel, but we didn't stop kissing.

Gazzy muttered and "Ew" and when the girls said aww I could almost hear the smiles in their voices.

Iggy just said "Nice job, bro."

Perv.

After about 1 minute the guy told us to get out of the boat.

Both Fang and I had disheveled hair and clothes and we were both grinning like idiots.

We turned to the others only to see… The girls with smiles that were massive, Iggy smiling in his perverted way and Gazzy looking like he wanted to puke.

Then Iggy said, "If you two are finished trying to swallow each other, let's go to the water park!"

Oh, no.

(Fangs POV)

Max had a look of horror on her face but she quickly hid it. Then she turned to me and smiled.

I gave her a full smile and put my arm around her shoulders. Then we all headed to the water park.

Time Skip

Max decided not to go in the water, for whatever reason and we all tried to get her in but it was no use. Just as we were about to go home, Gazzy and Iggy pulled out their water guns that they had been hiding.

"Hey Maaaxx!" Gazzy said in a mischievous tone.

"Yeah?"

As soon as she turned around Gazzy and Iggy soaked her from head to toe.

We all started laughing. But then it died when we noticed something on her back.

"Max…What's that?" I said in a cautious tone.

"Uh…" She said looking horrified.

There were to wings coming out of her back in between her shoulder blades.

What the…?

(Maxs POV)

Oh god. They stopped laughing and they started to notice my wings.

"Max…What's that?" Fang said in a whisper.

"Uh…" I had no idea what to say.

Should I run, or should I explain to them? I really liked these guys but every time someone found out they always flipped and tried to tell the News stations.

"Can you guys come with me?" They all nodded and I started to run to a deserted part of the park.

I could feel them all staring at my wings.

I should just take off now but I loved them like family and Fang made my enhanced heart skip a beat.

I we finally got far enough. So I stopped and faced them.

"Well as you have noticed I have, um, wings" well this isn't awkward.

"When I was still in the womb I was experimented on. They grafted bird DNA into me…. Hence the wings. They did terrible things to me and I lived in a cage for a good part of my life."

They looked pretty shocked but I went on.

"Eventually I escaped and that's why I'm kind of a tough cookie."

Then Angel piped up "Can you fly?"

"Yeah…" I said awkwardly.

"Max, why didn't you tell us?" Nudge said.

"Well, every time I told someone they flipped out and tried to tell the News but I was gone by then, and I really like you guys" I looked at Fang for a split second. No one but him noticed and he smiled at me.

"And I don't exactly want to leave." I said miserably.

"Let me guess you're going to tell, right?"

There was a chorus of

"No"

"No way"

And "Never"

I peeked up through my wavy hair. "Really?"

Fang looked at me with an emotion that I couldn't place.

"Max, we would never do anything to hurt you and personally I think it's…. Amazing." He said.

"Well, that wasn't as bad as I expected." I chirped.

The others walked or and me and Fang talked and kissed for a while, until it was time to go home.

That wasn't half as bad as I expected it to be. They accepted my wings, I had fun, and Fang and I are officially boyfriend and girlfriend. Not bad, not bad at all.

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-fallen angel vamp 17