Should I rewrite some of the chapters for this? I've been looking back on this recently and think some of the chapters need a bit of work, but unless people want me to, I might as well leave it be... And do any of yo want to see some of Beatris's home life? I'd definitely be willing to explore that a bit Kore in-depth. Mostly I just want to write more about Beatris, but if people don't care, I won't, because I've already written quite a bit of her... comments, questions, and concerns below, please!