How crapped up was the last chapter?
Is Kel ruining the story?
UGH!
That is why I'm updating right now, 'cause that chapter seriously, really sucked and it left most of the people clueless.
ANYWAY. Keep on reviewing! I hope you enjoy the story!
Also, I just read some reviews. Kel is forgotten, because she is back in time, so she was never born. ugh! This is getting SO CONFUSING! I might as well call this insane fanfic LOST!
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Kel disappeared.
Jon looked worried, Alanna shrugged, striding over to him. "What's wrong?"
"Its nothing. Don't worry." Jon waved her away.
~
Kel felt herself falling down a giant vortex.
Into a room.
There a only a mirror that furnished the room. On the mirror, was a word. TORTALL.
Kel peered in the mirror.
She saw Numair trying to break up a fight in the classroom. Merric was seated with Joren, smirking exactly like him.
A little first year sat with fresh bruises on his face, his arm in a sling. He cowered whenever anybody tried to speak to him.
The scene changed.
King Jonathan was arguing with Queen Thayet about something.
The Queen glowered at him, slapped his face, and then stormed off.
The mirror flickered again.
The same first year was being beaten up, Merric and Quinden cheered as Joren punched the boy in the nose.
Kel gaped. What the.?
"That, is Tortall without you, Keladry." A voice said from behind her.
It was the Great Mother Goddess.
"But. I thought."
"I made a grievous mistake, one that I did not realize could happen." The Goddess sighed. "It was the 2nd time I've interfered with mortals. The first time, was with a female warrior long ago, long before your time."
A face of a girl brandishing a sword appeared in the air.
Kel recognised her immediately. Zelda, the symbol of Chaos.
"Uusoae picked her up immediately after I discarded of her. She turned her into a creature of Chaos."
Kel bowed her head. "What will become of me?"
"I can't shift you back into your own time until. next year, my daughter, then I will correct everything that you've cause and put it back to rights."
"But."
"Do you wish to have some friends with you?"
"That may help."
"Wish granted." The Goddess waved her hand. "Go back to Alanna's time, you could teach her much, but she'll end up forgetting it all, anyway."
Kel tried to smile, but failed. "Um, Thankyou, Great Mother."
Kel vanished again.
~
N : OK, I'll drag, Neal, Dom, Daine, Numair and Cleon. and Owen!
That was your request!
~
Kel found herself in her own room, suddenly there was a knock on her door.
Neal barrelled in, followed by Cleon, Dom, Daine, Numair and Owen.
"Where are we, and who is this?" Owen complained. "We were eating DINNER."
Kel's jaw dropped. They had FORGOTTEN her?
"Hey, what's your name?" Dom asked, in full flirt mode.
Kel glowered at him. "What is going on here?"
"That's what I want to know!" Daine grumbled. "We were having a perfectly NICE dinner in. what was that restaurant called again?"
"Emerald Diner, sweet."
"Emerald Diner, then, before Numair could pay the bill, we vanished!"
Neal's expression looked smitten. Kel sighed. Without her there, Neal had not met Yuki yet, maybe not even Uline. He was still 100% fully smitten by Daine.
"I'm Keladry, I was Sir Raoul's Squire."
"Sir Raoul doesn't have a squire!" Dom inserted in. "Where are we?"
"You're in the time of King Roald and Queen Lianne."
"Roald's KING?" Cleon said disbelievingly.
"Not ROALD, you idiot. King Jonathan's FATHER."
"We're in Lady Alanna's time?" Neal asked excitedly.
Just then, a tiny plop occurred, and a tiny blue dragonet appeared.
"Kit!" Daine held out her arms. The dragon jumped into them, and scolded her thoroughly.
Suddenly, a wave of white light occurred, then realization dawned on their faces. "Kel! What on earth?" Dom looked at her. "Where are we?"
"Lady Alanna's time. When she was a squire, I believe."
"Ha! You are saying WE'RE going to believe that!" Cleon chuckled, then he looked at Kel, swallowing. "You look different."
"Why?"
"You look-" he flushed. "PRETTIER."
"Thanks! It's my Shang Sparrow look. I'm tutoring Alanna!"
Just then, someone knocked on her door.
Kel opened it, Jon stood there. "You have company?" His voice was disbelieving.
"Yeah. Guys, this is Prince Jonathan."
Daine was the first to curtsy. "Your Highness."
"You're the Prince? What happened to Roald?" Cleon asked in a small voice.
"My father?"
"Your son."
"I'm married?"
Kel elbowed Cleon.
"These are my time slip members. they all come from my time! This is Neal of Queenscove, Domitan of Masobolle (forgive me if this is wrong) Daine. of Snowsdale. and Numair. He's a sorcerer, and Cleon." (I have no idea WHAT Cleon comes from! I can't find my copy of Squire!)
"You just disappeared, now you're here!" Jon looked fairly confused.
"I went to pick up my friends." Kel didn't think that anyone would be amused if she said she spoke to the Goddess.
"Then what can we say your friends to be?" Jon sighed, "we can't all say they're Shangs."
When they worked out all their disguises, Jon told Kel that there was a duel scheduled between Alex and Alanna. "You have to see it!"
"Can we come too?"
Kel shrugged. "Let's go then."
~
UGH! This is becoming VERY CONFUSING!
~
Alanna was shocked to see more people coming with Kel and Jon.
"Who are these people?" She demanded angrily.
"Numair and Daine are from Carthak, and the rest are from Shang." Jon cast them a mean glare.
"What is going on?"
"I'm um, coaching, um, Alan-" Numair got elbowed by the pretty girl next to him. "-here magic! And the others here are.. Helping!"
"You are?" Alanna blinked.
"I hired them. I thought you would be interested. They're Kel's friends."
"Are we having this duel or not?" Alex demanded. "Great, you got Alan a new set of teachers. Can we get going now?"
"Sure." Alanna started to rise, taking up her sword.
Faithful yowled an encouragement.
They faced each other. Alanna bit her lip.
"Guard." Alex whispered.
Alanna brought up her sword, making a butterfly sweep.
Then the metal clanged down. Alex didn't stop. His sword darted in and out, weaving around, always trying to find a weakness.
Alanna attacked as well, but Alex's constant attacking made her have to do more defence than anything else has.
Alex found an opening, she tried to jump back, and back the tip of Alex's sword nicked her arm.
Blood stained the dull metal.
"You've won!" Alanna lowered her sword.
But Alex seemed to think otherwise. He kept on attacking.
"Alex?"
Kel jumped in, grabbing the flat of the sword easily. "Game over. You've won. Congratulations. I think you guys have played best dueller enough. Alan, let's go. I want to review your stance with you."
She practically dragged Alanna away.
The rest of the coterie followed her, casting strange looks at Alex.
~
Ugh! Major writer's block. I've written 3 different stories so far, so I think I should take a bit of a rest now.
Keep reading and review! :) Wev
This next part is just thanking all my reviewers. thanx!
Thankyou to.
Lady of Lilacs: Your reviews are always reassuring to read :)
Angel of the Storms: Thanks! I won't leave it there. Promise *gives very solemn look*
Read 24/7 and more: (L.O.L) Poor INNOCENT readers? Hardly! *winks*
Forget-me-not: I know, I thought it a bit confusing myself. I really appreciate you reviewing all the time :)
Keita: I think I went a bit crazy. Yesterday, my friends were plastering "Return back to the mental hospital" signs on everybody. I'm a mental hospital runaway ^_~
Zella: Me too! I keep on looking for those sorts of fics.but they never seem to be there!
Demented-dreamer: Jon's PRIGISH?
White lily: Dom is here!
White Wolf: Thanks! I know! *Smiles conceitedly* just joking!
Those were the recent reviewers, but thanks also to lara, 1234 (Kel's ruining the story? WHAT?) Vilranda, Lady Wild Rose, kittydat_weirdo, WildMage, Nikita, Lady of Rogue, Rae, Lady Marie, Von (smirks. You evil child!) ShangRose, lisini (losing what?)Valencia22, hihi (von and ish), little_fire_cracker_goes_BOOM
That was 3rd page reviewers.
Thanks for reviewing people!
Also. I know this story is getting pretty weird. That's why its called Confusion!
Is Kel ruining the story?
UGH!
That is why I'm updating right now, 'cause that chapter seriously, really sucked and it left most of the people clueless.
ANYWAY. Keep on reviewing! I hope you enjoy the story!
Also, I just read some reviews. Kel is forgotten, because she is back in time, so she was never born. ugh! This is getting SO CONFUSING! I might as well call this insane fanfic LOST!
~
Kel disappeared.
Jon looked worried, Alanna shrugged, striding over to him. "What's wrong?"
"Its nothing. Don't worry." Jon waved her away.
~
Kel felt herself falling down a giant vortex.
Into a room.
There a only a mirror that furnished the room. On the mirror, was a word. TORTALL.
Kel peered in the mirror.
She saw Numair trying to break up a fight in the classroom. Merric was seated with Joren, smirking exactly like him.
A little first year sat with fresh bruises on his face, his arm in a sling. He cowered whenever anybody tried to speak to him.
The scene changed.
King Jonathan was arguing with Queen Thayet about something.
The Queen glowered at him, slapped his face, and then stormed off.
The mirror flickered again.
The same first year was being beaten up, Merric and Quinden cheered as Joren punched the boy in the nose.
Kel gaped. What the.?
"That, is Tortall without you, Keladry." A voice said from behind her.
It was the Great Mother Goddess.
"But. I thought."
"I made a grievous mistake, one that I did not realize could happen." The Goddess sighed. "It was the 2nd time I've interfered with mortals. The first time, was with a female warrior long ago, long before your time."
A face of a girl brandishing a sword appeared in the air.
Kel recognised her immediately. Zelda, the symbol of Chaos.
"Uusoae picked her up immediately after I discarded of her. She turned her into a creature of Chaos."
Kel bowed her head. "What will become of me?"
"I can't shift you back into your own time until. next year, my daughter, then I will correct everything that you've cause and put it back to rights."
"But."
"Do you wish to have some friends with you?"
"That may help."
"Wish granted." The Goddess waved her hand. "Go back to Alanna's time, you could teach her much, but she'll end up forgetting it all, anyway."
Kel tried to smile, but failed. "Um, Thankyou, Great Mother."
Kel vanished again.
~
N : OK, I'll drag, Neal, Dom, Daine, Numair and Cleon. and Owen!
That was your request!
~
Kel found herself in her own room, suddenly there was a knock on her door.
Neal barrelled in, followed by Cleon, Dom, Daine, Numair and Owen.
"Where are we, and who is this?" Owen complained. "We were eating DINNER."
Kel's jaw dropped. They had FORGOTTEN her?
"Hey, what's your name?" Dom asked, in full flirt mode.
Kel glowered at him. "What is going on here?"
"That's what I want to know!" Daine grumbled. "We were having a perfectly NICE dinner in. what was that restaurant called again?"
"Emerald Diner, sweet."
"Emerald Diner, then, before Numair could pay the bill, we vanished!"
Neal's expression looked smitten. Kel sighed. Without her there, Neal had not met Yuki yet, maybe not even Uline. He was still 100% fully smitten by Daine.
"I'm Keladry, I was Sir Raoul's Squire."
"Sir Raoul doesn't have a squire!" Dom inserted in. "Where are we?"
"You're in the time of King Roald and Queen Lianne."
"Roald's KING?" Cleon said disbelievingly.
"Not ROALD, you idiot. King Jonathan's FATHER."
"We're in Lady Alanna's time?" Neal asked excitedly.
Just then, a tiny plop occurred, and a tiny blue dragonet appeared.
"Kit!" Daine held out her arms. The dragon jumped into them, and scolded her thoroughly.
Suddenly, a wave of white light occurred, then realization dawned on their faces. "Kel! What on earth?" Dom looked at her. "Where are we?"
"Lady Alanna's time. When she was a squire, I believe."
"Ha! You are saying WE'RE going to believe that!" Cleon chuckled, then he looked at Kel, swallowing. "You look different."
"Why?"
"You look-" he flushed. "PRETTIER."
"Thanks! It's my Shang Sparrow look. I'm tutoring Alanna!"
Just then, someone knocked on her door.
Kel opened it, Jon stood there. "You have company?" His voice was disbelieving.
"Yeah. Guys, this is Prince Jonathan."
Daine was the first to curtsy. "Your Highness."
"You're the Prince? What happened to Roald?" Cleon asked in a small voice.
"My father?"
"Your son."
"I'm married?"
Kel elbowed Cleon.
"These are my time slip members. they all come from my time! This is Neal of Queenscove, Domitan of Masobolle (forgive me if this is wrong) Daine. of Snowsdale. and Numair. He's a sorcerer, and Cleon." (I have no idea WHAT Cleon comes from! I can't find my copy of Squire!)
"You just disappeared, now you're here!" Jon looked fairly confused.
"I went to pick up my friends." Kel didn't think that anyone would be amused if she said she spoke to the Goddess.
"Then what can we say your friends to be?" Jon sighed, "we can't all say they're Shangs."
When they worked out all their disguises, Jon told Kel that there was a duel scheduled between Alex and Alanna. "You have to see it!"
"Can we come too?"
Kel shrugged. "Let's go then."
~
UGH! This is becoming VERY CONFUSING!
~
Alanna was shocked to see more people coming with Kel and Jon.
"Who are these people?" She demanded angrily.
"Numair and Daine are from Carthak, and the rest are from Shang." Jon cast them a mean glare.
"What is going on?"
"I'm um, coaching, um, Alan-" Numair got elbowed by the pretty girl next to him. "-here magic! And the others here are.. Helping!"
"You are?" Alanna blinked.
"I hired them. I thought you would be interested. They're Kel's friends."
"Are we having this duel or not?" Alex demanded. "Great, you got Alan a new set of teachers. Can we get going now?"
"Sure." Alanna started to rise, taking up her sword.
Faithful yowled an encouragement.
They faced each other. Alanna bit her lip.
"Guard." Alex whispered.
Alanna brought up her sword, making a butterfly sweep.
Then the metal clanged down. Alex didn't stop. His sword darted in and out, weaving around, always trying to find a weakness.
Alanna attacked as well, but Alex's constant attacking made her have to do more defence than anything else has.
Alex found an opening, she tried to jump back, and back the tip of Alex's sword nicked her arm.
Blood stained the dull metal.
"You've won!" Alanna lowered her sword.
But Alex seemed to think otherwise. He kept on attacking.
"Alex?"
Kel jumped in, grabbing the flat of the sword easily. "Game over. You've won. Congratulations. I think you guys have played best dueller enough. Alan, let's go. I want to review your stance with you."
She practically dragged Alanna away.
The rest of the coterie followed her, casting strange looks at Alex.
~
Ugh! Major writer's block. I've written 3 different stories so far, so I think I should take a bit of a rest now.
Keep reading and review! :) Wev
This next part is just thanking all my reviewers. thanx!
Thankyou to.
Lady of Lilacs: Your reviews are always reassuring to read :)
Angel of the Storms: Thanks! I won't leave it there. Promise *gives very solemn look*
Read 24/7 and more: (L.O.L) Poor INNOCENT readers? Hardly! *winks*
Forget-me-not: I know, I thought it a bit confusing myself. I really appreciate you reviewing all the time :)
Keita: I think I went a bit crazy. Yesterday, my friends were plastering "Return back to the mental hospital" signs on everybody. I'm a mental hospital runaway ^_~
Zella: Me too! I keep on looking for those sorts of fics.but they never seem to be there!
Demented-dreamer: Jon's PRIGISH?
White lily: Dom is here!
White Wolf: Thanks! I know! *Smiles conceitedly* just joking!
Those were the recent reviewers, but thanks also to lara, 1234 (Kel's ruining the story? WHAT?) Vilranda, Lady Wild Rose, kittydat_weirdo, WildMage, Nikita, Lady of Rogue, Rae, Lady Marie, Von (smirks. You evil child!) ShangRose, lisini (losing what?)Valencia22, hihi (von and ish), little_fire_cracker_goes_BOOM
That was 3rd page reviewers.
Thanks for reviewing people!
Also. I know this story is getting pretty weird. That's why its called Confusion!