Super Luigi Sunshine! Part 10; Wraith's Wrath!
Shine 6/7: Ghostly Anger!


A/N: Retype so it fits better with my new writing style.


^Day 4, 10:27 Am - Bianco Hills^
Kari had watched the battle, if only Mario or Luigi trusted her… guess it's time to act! The young girl jumped off the hill and landed unharmed at the bottom, when Petey died he had not only exploded but left fragments of himself scattered around the village, if Kari could gather at least one those fragments she may be able to resurrect him.
"Hey you there? How did you drop down like that?" A Pianta asked rushing to Kari, she held her palm up and a beam of red fired out of it like a laser, the beam burnt through the Piantas head, killing it instantly.
"No one must know I'm here," Kari whispered and floated slightly across the ground towards a large leaf, it was Petey's. She held it up to her face and smiled, "You're lucky Pete, you've got another chance!" Kari says and warped away with a slight flash.

^An hour later - Corona Mountain | Bowser's Base^
At the Corona base Bowser Junior was enraged, he hadn't had time to find Peach and Petey was already blown to pieces!
"LUIGI! Why are your minions so weak?" Bowser Junior asked the green man, who was also annoyed at Petey's demise.
"He wasn't that weak or effected by water until he got mutated, so I shouldn't be blamed!" Luigi snapped.
"Papa wouldn't have agreed to this if he knew you were just going to fail!" Bowser Junior says annoyed.
"Don't worry, Petey was the weakest of all the mutants I collected! Except the Cataquacks," Luigi says.
"Well beat him!" Bowser Junior says annoyed.
"We will get Peach! Trust me!" Luigi says.
"Trust you? Now that's a laugh!" A sneering voice says and Kamek flew over to the two, "You lot fight like babies, blaming each other for failure! If I were to have a hand in this I'll be able to help, but alas I'm to be… subtly non-existent," Kamek sneered, his eyes covered by his illusive glasses.
"You have a plan Kamek?" Luigi asked and Kamek smirked wirily.
"It isn't nice but yes!" Kamek whispered, Kamek had been barred access to Bowser Junior by Bowser and barred from Luigi and the mission, but so far Bowser didn't know about Bastian or the others so Kamek thought why not.
"I'm back!" A ghostly roar… roared. The three villains then looked at the metal wall that the voice came from, a transparent Petey flew through it, his form colourless besides red fiery eyes.
"A ghost!" Luigi says and aimed his nonexistent Poltergust 3000 at Petey, quickly realising how weird he looked he moved his hands into a normal position.
"I AM HERE FOR REVENGE!" Petey yelled scaring both Bowser Junior and Luigi.
"Why us!? We didn't do anything to you!?" Luigi asked scared.
"Not to you lot, against Mario!" Petey roared loudly.
"How do you plan on doing that? And how are you alive?" Kamek asked.
"Who are you?" Petey asked and floated over to Kamek, the Magikoopa just warped away.
"So uh… Petey…" Bowser Junior gulped worriedly, "How do you plan on getting revenge?" Bowser Junior fearful of what his answer might be.
"Give me a Shine and you'll see!" Petey stated holding out his ghostly leaf (hand).
"Wasn't the next Shine supposed to go to Hellcourse two?" Luigi asked.
"They have an order?" Bowser Junior asked confused.
"Anyway..." Luigi says looking at a list he pulled from his pocket and changing something with a pencil, "Hellcourse two can be removed for you, so what is your tactic now Petey?" Luigi asked. (Who can imagine Luigi sitting on a spinning chair, with Bowser Junior on one next to him, with large screens behind them while Luigi looks down at a sheet of paper with a pencil in his hand while a ghost of Petey watches? No? Well too bad!)
"I'll either use my new powers or frighten him to death!" Petey says pumping both of his large leafy hands into the air.
"O…kay, how did you acquire said powers?" Luigi asked.
"Cars I think!" Petey states and both Bowser Junior and Luigi look up at the huge idiot.
"Cars?" Bowser Junior asked.
"Yep! That pretty blonde one!" Petey says happily.
"A pretty blonde car… WHAT!?" Luigi asked.
"She found me and promised me powers and revenge if I did something, I can't remember what she wanted me to do so I'll just skip doing it," Petey says shrugging.
"Wait… so it was a person now?" Bowser Junior asked.
"What made you think cars wasn't?" Petey asked making Bowser Junior slam his head into his lap frustrated.
"Well, to get your Shine find Iggy, he should be at Station Defrost," Luigi says writing something down on his list… "Go on now," Luigi added once he noticed Petey didn't leave.
"Where is Station Defrost?" Petey asked.
"Basically the Pinna Base, but the vault sector's inner core, you should have no trouble flying there," Luigi says.
"You have the Shines in a vault?" Bowser Junior asked.
"Most of them, some are already placed or scattered apart," Luigi says while Petey flew off.
"Who's this cars he was speaking of?" Bowser Junior asked.
"My guess is that girl," Luigi says…

Kari was lying in the air ventilation shaft above the room the villains were talking in, annoyed at how little respect Luigi and Bowser Junior had for the one responsible for the Brush's functionality. She placed a hand on the metal and burnt a small hole into it, she removed her hand and looked through the hole. Luigi was under her and was changing the names of all the Hellcourses to one number lower, it also revealed other details apart from the Shine Names, it had the planned location, action, defence and detailed looking diagrams. Kari smiled and made note of some of the Shines, those she could 'edit' the plans of, Kari then scurried off towards an exit, her mind filled with plans of getting revenge against both Mario and Luigi; steal some Shines from Luigi and make hard tasks for Mario with them!

^Lunch Time - Delfino Plaza^
Mario had been resting for a bit before walking over to the Grand Pianta Statue Portal, luckily it was still there. Sighing he prepared himself for whatever evil lay ahead, he slowly walked through the goopy portal and appeared on the white path on the hill at Bianco Hills. (Bianco actually means White in… Italian?)
"I'm surprised how much information that Mr. Shades has about the Shines so far," Emile says robotically to Mario.
"You're a robot, you can't have emotions!" Mario says to the pump while he looked around for Mr. Shades.
"I am a pump, actually I am a Flash Liquidising Ultra-Dousing Device created by Elvin Gadd at Gadd Science-" FLUDD starts but Mario sighed, FLUDD then stopped knowing it had lost the plumbers attention. "So Mario, my scans revealed you are a plumber, shouldn't you be used to cleaning up messes?" FLUDD asked while Mario climbed a tree looking for Mr. Shades.
"What's the matter? Scared!" A Pianta yells at Mario, Mario then looked down at him.
"Pardon?" Mario asked.
"What's the mat-" The Pianta started.
"NOT THAT! What did you-ah mean?" Mario asked hopping down, he landed unharmed next to the Green Skinned Pianta.
"Well, a ghost has been supposedly seen around here and two Piantas have died, one had a hole through their face the other from having a panic-induced Heart Failure," The Pianta says.
"You know that how?" Mario asked.
"I dunno, Dr. Ner said so," The Pianta says and a loud shriek boomed, hurting both the living creatures ears.
"MARIO!" A loud booming voice screamed and Petey slammed down near the three, when he landed he left no dint like he would usually have.
"You again! Don't you ever give up!" Mario asked pointing at Petey.
"AHHH! THE GHOST!" The Green Pianta screamed and jumped off the cliff and rolled down towards Ricco Harbour.
"I will destroy you!" Petey roared and a huge fireball flared to life in both of his transparent leafy hands. Mario sprayed at the fireballs but his water went through them, doing obviously no damage to them.
"Watch out Mario," Emile says as Petey threw one, Mario dived aside as the fireball flew at the ground. It passed through and continued on down the mountain.
"Oh yeah, I can't interact in this form…" Petey says and clapped his leafy hands together while yelling "Materialise!" After saying that he became opaque and his one remaining fireball generated heat, making Mario sweat even from a few metres away. "BURN!" Petey yelled throwing the fire from his flammable leafy hands, the fireball hurdled through the air and Mario dived out of the way, the fireball smashed through the wooden fence blocking off the drop to the harbour and also lit the joining bits of fence alight.
"Why do you hate me?" Mario asked hiding behind a tree.
"Master isn't happy when I lost! So I took drugs along with my flying pills, that made me a bit wonky in the head for a bit, but I tried to kill you so master would like me but failed again! And now Cars has granted me another chance at winning! SO NOW I MUST PROVE MYSELF!" Petey yelled whacking the air with his left hand/leaf, it created a whirlwind that blew towards the tree Mario hid behind, uprooting it and flinging Mario into the white wall painfully.
"You have good reasons but I need to get the Shines!" Mario says about to run from Petey, he stopped when Petey started to Laugh.
"Like this one here?" Petey asked as a Shine Sprite bulged from his scarred stomach, it then quickly sunk back down. "You must know by now," Petey rasped through what to him was slanted eyes, "I can't lose a third time! As they say! THIRD TIME LUCKY!" Petey roared and Mario sighed, he had to fight Petey yet again, this would probably only anger him further. Mario aimed at Petey as he laughed and fired a stream of water at his mouth, Petey quickly clapped and yelled "Dematerialise!" After doing so he became ghostlike again, making the water pass through him.
"That looks abusible," Mario observed as he back-flipped up onto the white wall.
"It is! One problem is I can't attack like this, or do anything really," Petey says in a non-angry tone.
"You can quite obviously talk," Mario says shrugging.
"Yeah," Petey says sighing before remembering he hated Mario and wanted him dead. "Materialise!" Petey yelled clapping, he then spits balls of electricity at Mario, who wasn't expecting such an attack and as such got hit by about 75% of them. Mario fell off the wall sizzling and his hair spiked under his cap.
"Alright Petey! Time to go!" Mario yelled while Petey laughed, he sprayed at him and Petey dematerialised, he then flew off towards the large windmill village.
"There he goes again," Emile says with a sound probably designed to be a sigh. Mario slid down the wet path and jumped over the log and river once he reached it. "Any plans on how to beat him?" Emile asked.
"I'll find-ah way!" Mario says running into the largish village.
"Hey Mario! Have you came to save us from the ghost!?" A Pianta asked through an open window of one of the houses.
"Yes!" Mario shouts and saw the Pianta bulge and bubble, their form then made a sizzling sound and morphed into Petey, smashing the walls around him. "You won't be able to save this village! I can change my form to anything!" Petey yelled and spat a large ball of electricity at Mario through the now missing wall of the house. Mario jumped aside while spraying a stream of water at Petey, it hit Petey with no effect. "Puny water can't harm me! I am no longer double mutated!" Petey roared and his large eyes flashed red, seconds later two beams of red flared out at Mario. Mario was able to dodge but mentally cringed as he saw the beams burn several metres deep into the hard ground where he once stood.
"That seems powerful!" Mario states and Petey nodded before doing the same attack, it missed Mario on purpose this time and burnt through a wooden pole holding a small fan attached to a high platform. (Like from the actually game) "YOU MISSED!" Mario jests and sprayed another stream of water at Petey.
"Mario look out!" Emile says loudly, Mario just ignored the pump and continued spraying at Petey. Petey quickly dematerialised and flew off to another spot, Mario was about to chase but saw a shadow quickly moving across him. He turned around and saw a large pole falling towards him. Mario quickly threw some fireballs and burnt a hole big enough to make the pole fall differently. "Maybe you should listen to your pump," FLUDD says robotically.
"Quiet!" Mario muttered and looked around for Petey, after not seeing him Mario decided to actually search for him. "Petey! If you want revenge then fight me! Don't hide!" Mario yelled while running around the village. The ground then rumbled and a large tank slowly moved around a house and aimed at Mario.
"DIE!" The tank yelled sounding like Petey, shortly after an explosive shell blasted out from the nozzle of the cannon and hit a building behind Mario. The explosion destroyed the house and blasted Mario face first into the ground in front of the tank, which slowly began to roll towards Mario.
"Dammit Petey!" Mario yelled standing up while pulling a small marble from his pocket.
"You may hate me but I HATE YOU MORE!" The tank yelled and fired at Mario, missing because the cannon couldn't aim low enough. (A random house was destroyed because of that) Mario quickly ran backwards (while facing the tank) and crushed the small glass marble in his hand, it released the Power Star inside of it and a rainbow-ing aura formed around Mario, also making his eyes flash the many colours of the rainbow. Mario then formed a glowing (more then normal) fireball in his right hand and threw it at the Tank, it hit and exploded on contact. The blast caused the tank to be blown back and also scream in pain. "I HATE YOU!" Petey yelled as the tank bubbled and sizzled, it then morphed into Petey, who quickly dematerialised himself and flew off.
"What's wrong Petey? Can't fight me anymore?" Mario yelled and walked slowly forward, keeping careful watch of a surprise attack.
"Why haven't you used whatever it is you are using before?" Emile asked.
"I haven't got much of them and they leave me very weak afterwards," Mario says calmly and didn't notice the dark shadow that appeared under him. Shortly after the shadow appeared a gigantic Banzai Bill slammed into Mario's head. The impact made a large explosion that pushed the Banzai Bill away while also removing the rainbow aura from Mario. "HEY!" Mario yelled and looked up as Petey materialised from a Banzai Bill. Petey then used his wings (arms) to stay up high while he spat down some electric balls at Mario. Mario jumped aside dodging the fast moving orbs while he checked how full FLUDD was, FLUDD was about 80% full. While checking a large orb hit Mario and sent jolts of electricity threw him, Mario then fell to his knees clenching his teeth in pain. He looked up and saw Petey body slamming down towards him. Mario rolled aside just in time and watched Petey dematerialise himself before slamming into the ground, because of that he passed right through the ground unharmed. "One day I'll find who made this beast, they won't be having a good day on said day!" Mario mumbled only loud enough for FLUDD and himself to hear.
"That is if you live to find them," FLUDD says while Mario looked around trying to see Petey, he spotted him facing a mountain side. Mario quickly ran over but stopped when he heard Petey talking…
"I'm getting low on energy, do you have a way for me to restore it?" Petey asked the transparent image of Kari's head that was on the smooth-ish rock face.
"You'll have to collect coins if you need to restore your energy, don't worry, in Delfino it rains coins sometimes and most of them stay behind after it rains," Kari says all static-y and glitch-y, the image then fades away and Petey turned around to look for coins, he gasped in surprise when he saw Mario in front of him with his pump aimed right at him.
"Goodbye Petey!" Mario growled and sprayed into Petey's opened mouth, the water poured down his throat and made Petey gag some up.
"I'm not effected by water anymore!" Petey growled and whacked an arm forward, it made a whirlwind that flew across the ground at Mario. Mario threw some fireballs at it and they were flung off in random directions, the whirlwind then touched Mario and he flew backwards into a house, cracking the hard wood on contact. Petey then flew off towards the large windmill because he saw some coins on it.
"Don't even think about it!" Mario yelled and switched to the hover nozzle, he jumped up off the indent he made and landed on the house's roof, he jumped forward and used the hover nozzle to reach the high white wall, after this he jumped up and grabbed Petey's right leg and hanged on tight.
"AHH! LET GO!" Petey screamed and was tempted to dematerialise himself, problem was he'll have to stop flying to do so. (However, he wasn't smart enough to realise he would be able to fly in his ghost form without using his wings) Mario then made a fireball in his right hand as he held it against Petey's leafy leg, the leg then caught fire which soon leaped up his leg and started to attack his whole body.
"Bye Petey!" Mario slyly says letting go and gracefully landing down into the water below (the water that surrounds the Windmill hill) as Petey burnt apart. Landing with a splash Mario quickly rose to the surface and watched as parts of Petey burnt away and even witnessed his left arm burn apart from the main body and fall down into the water.
"MAKE IT STOP!" Petey screamed falling down onto the path up the Windmill hill, it was there that he withered away to ashes, the only thing combating the blaze being Petey tears of pain. After he was dead (again) Mario swam over to shore and made his way up to Petey's scorched remains, inside the ashes shined a Shine Sprite.
"How uncivilised," Mario mumbled as he took the shine from the burnt ashes (aren't all ashes burnt anyway?) and let it warp him away to the Shine Tower, why it didn't warp anyone else when they touched it still unknown to Mario…


Old A/N: Sorry the chapter was short and for the long update time, but I'll like to thank guest users: Guest and NoneKnowMe for supporting this story (and me) with your nice reviews, if you two had actual accounts I could PM/make more of a thanks to you. I hope you two enjoy the story and… Feix/Fiex's comments don't really phase me, mostly since he/she still said it was a good story…

New A/N: Despite Fiex/Feix falling ill on his threats I have removed both of the list chapters, if you never saw them then sorry. But the shine name is what my list showed anyway so you won't be too disadvantaged. All that you won't know is what the later ones are called. (Until you see them)
Next chapter will not be an edited one but instead a newly made one! Yay... I guess... I really need to stop misusing Eclipses now...