Choices

by kelseyluu

a regular guy is trying to find out who the mystery girl is from the party last night, but he can't remember because someone slipped some rum into his drink. now he has to choose from the mysterious female and the one that could ruin his life in meneral t

10. Chapter 10 the punishment, no more!

Note this is going to be in several peoples views. Sorry if I confuse you with it all. Starts out with Drew. It's also going to be were we left off in the last chapter.

okay, today I'm going to do it. I'm going to gain up the courage and ask her out. I'm going to do it. Wait, I can't do it. I can't not until Sae does it, until she does her deceiving, back stabbing, wench-y thing of hers. She's got to get Dominic to break up with her soon and go to Sae, I don't know how much longer I can take until I just kill Dominic and kidnap Emma. This is driving me nuts! Sae do something quick before I do anything stupid. Drew thought as he was cutting the grass in the field. He saw Sae come out of the guest house with a huge smile on her face. She walked over to Dom's house and knocked on the door. Dom answered and she walked in. Oh great, now she's going to get us kicked out. This is not going to end good... He continued to work on the yard.

Note: now it's going to be in the view of Dominic after the chat with Sae, I'm trying to bring up the suspense.

how am I supposed to do this? I can't I love Emma, I can't do that to her. If I don't do it, then I'll hurt her. I can't give into Sae. What am I supposed to do? I can't chose. And I only have until tomorrow at 5. I can't chose. Someone please help me!

Note: sorry, I love leaving cliff hangers! So much fun. But you'll soon find out why Sae is such a wench! Well now it's in the view of Emma, it's not going to be long and this chapter is going to be short cuz I want to get to the good stuff.

I can't believe that Grandpa let my punishment end so early! And tomorrow I get to go to the fair with Dominic! Nothing can go wrong! I wish I could see Dominic right now. I miss the love of my life! I can't wait until tomorrow! It's going to be so romantic and beautiful. I can't wait!

Note: so what do you think? Trust me the next chapter is going to be A LOT better! Well R&R and tell me what you think, if you don't like it I wont do it again, but if you do like it, I might make another chapter like this. But tell me what you think.