Chuunin exam Chuunin exam

A/N:

Hello! I'm really sorry that I haven't undated in a couple of days! Sorry! Thank you guys so much for the reviews. I'm so glad that you thought the sister things was fine! Man, you don't wanna know how nervous I was about that one! Today the battle between Hinata and Sakura! Well this is my first time writing about a battle, so please give me some feedback when you have read this chapter, I really need it! Here goes nothing!

Chapter 10

'fighting Sakura, the girl Naruto always liked best, but I won't resent her for that, she couldn't do anything about that… I need to watch out for her immense strength, and I heard she trained under Tsunade-sama herself, that means she can probably heal herself very well, I don't want to lose this battle, and I don't want to disappoint anyone again… I'm sure I can win, I CAN do it, I'll show them that I'm not the weak girl anymore, I will become Chuunin, I will show everyone that I'm not just a useless Hyuuga, I'll show my father, (and I'll show my sister) I will WIN' Hinata thought, a bit nervous about her battle. She really wants to win this.

'So Hinata vs. Sakura… I hope she doesn't get hurt. And that she will show everyone that she has changed a lot more than she thinks she did' Shino thought.

'Hinata… you can win this I'm sure you can, you can show everyone here that you really have improved' Kiba thought

'Show me what you can do' Hitomi thought

"Good luck Hinata" Kiba whispered in her ear, pulling her closer to him "I'm sure you will win" Hinata blushed a bit.

'Hinata… last time against Neji-kun, she really showed something, it's weird though, I've known her all my live, but I have no clue who she is… always quiet, and having normal grades, I never noticed her. But she does seem vulnerable, like I was… but I will win this battle. I owe it to Tsunade-sensei, and I …

I owe it to Sasuke… I won't lose!' Sakura thought.

"Will Haruno Sakura and Hyuuga Hinata please step forward?"

"l-let's do o-our best" Hinata whispered.

"Yeah, let's do that, but I'm warning you Hinata-chan, I won't hold back, I need to finish this as early as I can" Sakura replied

They both got in too fighting position.

'I don't want her to use Byacugan, well anyway if I can avoid it'

But when Sakura was thinking that, Hinata had already formed the signs and activated her Byacugan.

'Wow she is almost as fast as Kakashi-sensei with her hands'

Hinata looked at Sakura, her Chakra system… all of her Tenketsus. Sakura was very good at controlling her chakra that is what she had heard.

Then suddenly Sakura attacked.

'So fast'

Sakura's movements were really quick; Hinata had trouble avoiding the punches. She was concentrating so hard to avoid Sakura; she completely forgot everything around her. The only thing she could see was Sakura. Right, left, stomach. Kick left. High punch. With her Byacugan Hinata could see the movements. But sadly…

BANG Hinata fell on the ground with a horrible pain in her left arm. Everything came back. She saw every one looking at her. Seeing Ino-chan looking away, Kiba looking shocked, Hinata looked at her arm… seeing her shoulder dislocated. She stood up

'Ok Hinata calm down, it hurts… I need to put my shoulder back before Sakura starts attacking again' Hinata thought.

She put her hand on her left shoulder and pulled... something cracked, Hinata gasped.

'Aiaiai, that's better'

Sakura attacked again. Again she was really quick, this time Hinata fought back. Jyuuken. She started moving at the same speed as Sakura.

'Damn she is quick, but if she even barely touches me, I'll have a problem. I need to finish this!'

"This is a new one" Sakura said and smiled.

'I've been practicing on this for a long time. I'm sorry Hinata-chan. I'm gonna win this battle'

'I better not wait to see what attack this is. I think it's time for…"

Both Sakura and Hinata started to quickly form signs. They went on for more then a minute.

"It turned in a battle of speed" Neji said

"Neji?" Tenten asked

"Whose side are you on?"

"I am on Sakura, she looks so beautiful from here" lee said

"Whose side are you on, Tenten?" Neji replied

"I don't know. I don't know Sakura-chan, that well. I think Hinata-chan. Since she is you cousin, and she really convinced me during your battle"

Neji looked away; he didn't like to remember that battle.

"Hitomi?"

"Do you know what attack they are going to use" Rini asked. Looking at Hitomi, who was looking at the two girls?"

"I have no clue" she whispered.

Back at Hinata and Sakura.

Then they both stopped

"Second dance of the lily ren" (it means water lily)

"Rain of the blossom"

They both said at the same time

"Talk about flower power" Kankuro said, and Temari started laughing.

Sakura ran with great speed to Hinata. She expected Hinata to try to avoid her, but she stood still, having her eyes closed and she slowly pulled her hands off each other, two wooden sticks, glowing with chakra showed. Hinata had one in each hand.

Sakura on the other hand had about a hundred kunai in her hands. She stopped running, jumped in the air and threw the kunai at Hinata. But not all of these kunai were aimed at Hinata

"WATCH OUT" Kiba yelled

Hinata looked around her on several kunai were explosive tags.

"Second round!" Sakura yelled

Hinata couldn't avoid these kunai and she couldn't make them change course, because she would set off the explosive tags.

Sakura thought of anything. It was a perfect trap. Except, Hinata jumped towards Sakura using her 'sticks' to avoid the kunai Sakura threw at her.

"What are you doing this will set of an extreme explosion" Sakura said.

"I wasn't done with my attack yet" Hinata replied.

While hitting the kunai away, she crossed her weapons, twisted them between her fingers. Then grabbed them. But then suddenly the exploding tags went off, and worse of all, Hinata and Sakura began to fall down

"damn't, they should've gone off earlier than this" Sakura said and she looked at Hinata, expecting fear.

Hinata smiled

"I told you I wasn't ready"

"Oh no"

Hinata began using her sticks attacking Sakura while falling down. Sakura expected a blow, when she was hit, but she started to bleed

"What the…" it felt like she was being cut, in stead of receiving blows

"Neji, the weapons are simple put what she is doing is brilliant, using her chakra to sharpen the edges"

"No Tenten, this is more than that"

They both fell down in the exploding area.

"Damn it" Kiba yelled

"The battle isn't over yet"

"She will be hurt though…"

The exploding stopped when the smoke cleared both Sakura en Hinata were lying on the ground

"haha poor Hinata-chan. Sakura will heal herself and will be as good as new, and Hinata-chan will still be hurt" Ino told Chouji

Sakura looked at Hinata who was trying to sit up.

'Great I'll heal myself now' and her hand started to glow, and she moved over her body.

"All better" and she smiled ready to continue

Hinata stood up looked at her burned skin.

"Still not done" she whispered but she was in pain, and her attack didn't work as well as it should have. Sakura was just too quick…

Sakura attacking again, hitting Hinata over and over and over. Hinata was slowed down because of her injuries.

"Hinata…" Kiba whispered

Then Hinata fell down. With a really loud cracking sound. She felt her wrist snapping. She tried to catch Sakura's attack, but the blow was to powerful and her hand flipped back.

"That's enough! Hinata, start countering now!" Kiba yelled at her.

Hinata stood up her right hand hanging down.

'Right, I need to win, even without my hand I can do this, I need to do this'

"This girl's power is amazing" Nariko said

"Hmm… I don't expect her to lose though" Hitomi answered.

"Yeah, but still. It's amazing"

"But she loses a lot of chakra attacking this way, and she healed herself, that takes up some chakra too, Hinata on the other hand, has still plenty of chakra left"

"But she had her Byacugan, and that cool stick attack, Ren so that takes up chakra too, right"

"Let's see what happens, but I think that there is more to that ren then we know"

Rini on the other hand wasn't looking at the battle, but she was looking at a boy, a boy, who was standing next to a blond, and a red head.

"There is a girl staring at you Kankuro" Temari said

"Yeah, a blond I know, she is kinda cute"

"Hmnff" she replied

Then suddenly Sakura collapsed.

Damn't she hit me' and she healed herself again.

Hinata was attacking with one hand, 'Sakura who is faster stronger, and probably smarter then me… no way I won't lose no way'

Hinata's look changed.

"there it is" Neji said"she is finally in offensive"

Hitomi smiled

But her team mates knew that this wasn't just offensive, this was confidence. An emotion even they didn't see a lot.

Hinata attacked with new power with only her left hand, which still hurt because of the shoulder, but she didn't care, 'I will win'

"Jyuuken-po Hakke 64-sho" and Hinata attacked Sakura with only her left hand, closing every Tenketsus so that Sakura couldn't use chakra anymore.

Sakura tried to avoid her, but she was too quick.

After the 64 blows Hinata stopped. Sakura attacked but not with the same power as she did. Her chakra control was why Sakura was the best. Without it, she wasn't …

"Ren" Hinata said

"What … but you already tried that?"

"I was not ready yet Sakura-chan. I'm sorry, it was a good fight" she whispered, "but my weapons weren't as useless as you thought." And both of the sticks came out of Hinata's hands. She crossed them

"Activate"

"What?" and Sakura fell down unable to move.

"The winner is Hyuuga Hinata!"

"Wait, what happened?" Rini asked

"The girl had some Jutsu in the weapon, when she scratched the other girl the jutsu got in to the pink girl. She wanted to activate the jutsu then, but she fell down. When she just now activated the jutsu, apparently the Pink girl lost consciousness." Nariko replied

"She needed to stop the other girl's chakra flow before activate the jutsu, that was the plan from the beginning." Hitomi added.

Kiba jumped down and hugged Hinata, making her blush

"Great job Hinata, man, you got us worried, let's go heal your wounds now!"

"Thanks Kiba, but I want to see the next battle; I can heal my wounds myself"

"Ok, hey mr medial person, can you heal her on the spot please!" Kiba asked.

"No I'm sorry, we can't do that"

"Uhmm Hinata?"

But Hinata walked to Sakura

"S-are you a-all right Sakura-chan"

"Sure, I'm fine, great fight Hinata-chan, good luck in the exam, and I'll cheer on you!"

"t-thank you"

"Hinata!"

"S-sorry Kiba"

Kiba grinned.

"You need to go to the healing room, but they said you it won't take to long"

"Thank you Kiba"

They looked at the board since there were two new names

"Gaara vs. Taro" please step forward

"Oh oh, he looks strong" Taro said with a shaking voice.

"Oww I wanted to fight him, he looks really weak" Kankuro said

"Play nice Gaara" Temari said

A/N

A long chapter to make up for the lost days, I hope it was any good, please note that everyone who wins the preliminary, won't line up the way as they are now, (so if Gaara would win this next battle, it doesn't mean that Hinata Vs Gaara will be the first fight in the real battles)

Please tell me if you liked this chapter, and if you have some tips for me, please tell me! Your help is really appreciated !

Love,

MizuMizu