DOUBLE DIGITS FOR LE WIN!

I'm guessing during the game The Prince of Dawn, Claudio is around 20 years old or so. In that case, from what I can see, Mustang should be around 17 years old in right now. He's what, thirty in the series? And the Ishval Civil War was thirteen years pre-series. So that really messes up the Hawkeye-apprenticeship. Oh well. It's too bad Prince of Dawn is Japan only. Sigh...

So anyway, I was planning on posting a new story: It's gonna be called Secret Destiny. It's RoyAi, and here's the summary:

One year after the Promised Day, Roy and Riza have started spending more time together. But in a freak accident, Riza dies and Roy makes a bad deal with Truth to save her. The toll? She's cursed with an inner demon, and Roy's gone back one year, and has to face the Promised Day without his lieutenant.

If you think it sounds interesting, tell me now so I can post it sooner than planned. I was originally going to post it after I finished this, but if you really like the way I write and that sounds interesting then I will post it ASAP.

The Dancing Rain Alchemist: She must have a horrible past. I do it to all my characters. Just kidding.

Silence-That-Kills-Me: Don't break your record anytime soon.

Before I forget: Fullmental- I mean Fullmetal Alchemist doesn't belong to me.

Chapter 10(whoo!): The Prince and His Servant

When Reyn entered the office, she stopped short and gazed at all the other occupants with nonchalance.

Corporal Fisher was covered in what seemed to be chocolate.

Private Genzan was squeezing cheese out of his gloves.

Kyra Manson was shaking peanuts from her boots.

Trigham was holding multiple bags of marshmellows.

And Private Hunter was attempting to get rid of a multitude of strawberries.

All the soldiers in the room turned to Reyn.

"No one pranked you, Reyn?" Fisher asked.

"No, sir. No one pranked me." Genzan grunted and tossed his gloves to Reyn.

"Then here!" He growled, "These are yours now!"

Trigham put down his bags of marshmellows and held up a note.

"Who's idea was it to write, 'Here, Trigham, I know you like marshmellows' and not sign it! I spent hours picking all the parts that stuck to my car off! I want to know who did it!"

Fisher, still covered in chocolate, picked up the bags and dumped the contents...

Over an unsuspecting Reyn.

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A couple months had passed with no news of the false colonel.

Fisher signed the last of his paperwork and handed it to Reyn.

"I've been hearing about some problems between Ishval and Amestris. We might get the chance to help them out."

Reyn scoffed. "When you say help them out, you mean weaken Amestris, don't you?"
"Hey, everyone deserves freedom, right?"

"You would be correct."

"See-"

"If people like me did not exist."

Reyn left the room to go deliver the paperwork. When she reached the front desk the clerk snatched the papers and said, "There's a package for you."

The package was a foot long and around two or three inches wide. There was a ribbon tied around it, and the tag read:

From: Lieutenant General Kayal

To: Reyn

Note: I got it!

What could it possibly be?

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Five Hours Earlier

Lieutenant General Kayal was walking through the halls of the complex when she passed Colonel Ratchet, who was whistling and juggling a small pole between his hands.

"Ratchet..." she spoke, "Can I talk with you?"

The colonel caught his pole in his hands and nodded.

"If I remember correctly, that... hm... tube you're holding belongs to Reyn."

Ratchet laughed and said, "I'm sorry, General, but this is a pole."

"Oh, I'm so sorry, Colonel. Here, can you hand me Reyn's pole, please? Is that better?"

"No, It's not better."

Kayal sighed and proceeded to drag the colonel to a random room, in which she wrestled the weapon out of his hands.

"Got it."

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Reyn unsteadily opened the package... To reveal her one and only Gentnok, wrapped neatly in cellophane.

The girl hastily unwrapped the weapon and transformed it into a shield, hitching it onto her back.

On the inside of the box was another note.

See you in Ishval

'Colonel Ratchet'

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