IN A REVIEW, SOMEONE MENTIONED THE STORY NOT MOVING ALONG. I'M SORRY FOR THAT, BUT I NEED IDEAS. SECONDLY, LAST CHAPTER, I THINK I MOVED IT ALONG A BIT. I MEAN, I'M REVEALING WHY THEY'RE THERE AND STUFF.
DON'T OWN IT.
No, no, no, no, Deeks thought. This is really bad.
"You're plan's not going to work." Deeks declared.
"Funny, because I beg to differ." Marcus said.
"So let me get this straight." Deeks said after a moment. "Your theory is that Kensi seeing me in pain will break her."
"Pretty much." Marcus shrugged.
"Oh." Deeks said.
"See, I know that Kensi can handle the pain. It is more of a pride thing, though. And you can handle the pain. But Kensi is the one who has the information. I need her to spill. Seeing you in pain should do the trick. She won't want to lose your trust, the special relationship that you have." Marcus explained.
"Then what was all of the other stuff?" Deeks asked, referring to the previous torture sessions.
"A warm up." Marcus said, smiling maliciously.
Back at OPS, Callen was going mad. Literally.
"Sam!" He yelled.
"Relax, G, I brought your donuts. Find anything?" Sam asked, placing a huge box of donuts on G's desk.
"No. God, what could they want from Kensi and Deeks? Deeks is, in a word, useless, he's just a cop. No sensitive information. And Kensi knows things, but it would be stupid to take her. I just can't find a connection between the goons and Kensi and Deeks." Callen said.
"Unless they think that Deeks is NCIS." Sam said, popping the last bite of a jelly donut with sprinkles on it into his mouth.
"Nah, these guys are good. There's no way you take a Federal Agent and a liaison without checking up on them for a good amount of time." Callen said.
"Yeah, but said liaison had just gotten shot. He was also on morphine, so he couldn't have been thinking clearly." Sam said.
"Point. Now that you mention it, Kens was worried about us, and we all know how she gets when she's worried." G said.
"So neither of them were thinking clearly. They must've checked up on the big time, G. Family is the only thing that gets Kensi that flustered, enough to make a huge mistake. They shot Deeks to get Kensi not thinking clearly." Sam said.
"But why take Deeks?" Callen asked.
"They presumably want information from her, right?" Sam said.
"I'm pretty sure that's the reason people are taken and tortured." Was Callen's reply.
"And they'd have to know that seeing family in pain hurts her…" Sam trailed off.
"This isn't good." Callen said.
"Yeah, but what could she possibly know?" Sam asked, confused.
"I think it's time to see Hetty." Callen declared.
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