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Plan J- Romantic boat ride.

(You can probably already guess what might go wrong)

"So what have you planed today?" Mara smiled as she walked down the stairs.

Jerome was standing at the bottom waiting; he admired her beauty as she stood in front of him wearing a knee high white dress with flowers on it.

"You look beautiful" Jerome commented, he couldn't help it, it just slipped out. Mara blushed and hid her smile.

"You don't look too bad yourself" Mara smiled at Jerome, he was wearing blue jeans a white shirt with a black waist coat. His fringe was brushed to the side and he look like he had just stepped out of a modelling magazine.

"So are you ready?" Jerome smiled holding out his arm.

"Ready" Mara said as she linked their arms and let Jerome lead her out the door.

"They are so perfect for each other" Amber sighed as she watched Jara stroll down the path.


Jerome and Mara were walking down the path talking.

"So, what are we doing?" Mara asked.

"You'll see Jaffray" Jerome chuckled.

"Come on, you never tell me" Mara huffed.

"So what makes you think I'll start now?" Jerome asked with a smile.

Mara didn't answer as they continued walking down the path and towards the park.

"Are we going to the park?" She asked as the park came into view.

"Maybe" Jerome hummed.

The park was one of the most beautiful and romantic places in town. Trees and flowers grew everywhere you looked, the grass was well maintained and there was a fantastic play-park for children, when Jerome was little Trudy used to bring him here.

Jerome's plan was to take Mara towards the water centre. There was a large lake at the park and at the water centre you could rent speedboat rides canoes and kayaks.

Jerome had something else in mind.

"Isn't this place beautiful?" Mara asked looking around the park.

"I knew you'd like it" Jerome laughed.

"I love it" Mara said as she walked over to Jerome.

"And you haven't even seen the best part" Jerome said.

"How can it get better?" Mara smiled.

"You'll see" Jerome sang.

Jerome walked into the centre while Mara watched everyone have fun on the lake.

"This way ma lady" Jerome said from behind Mara.

"Where are we going now?" Mara laughed at how silly Jerome was being.

"Could you try not to ask so many questions?" Jerome joked as he walked into a small garage beside the water centre.

Jerome walked up to a counter and handed the man a piece of paper.

The man went into the back and return with two life jackets. Jerome put his one before helping Mara's with hers.

"We're going on a boat?" Mara smiled.

"Not just any boat" Jerome chuckled.

"I never been on a boat before" Mara admitted.

"Really? I used to go on them all the time as a kid" Jerome smiled at the memory of Trudy taking him on his first boat ride.

"Well this is my first time" Mara smiled down at her feet.

"Don't worry, I'll keep you safe, and I won't push you in" Jerome said as they walked down the small pier.

"What a gentleman" Mara said sarcastically.

Jerome stopped at the pedalo boats.

"Which one do you want to ride on?" Jerome asked.

There were different boats, there was the simple yellow and blue boats or you could have a choice of a dragon pedalo or a swan.

"The swan"

"I might have known and here was me getting excited to ride on the dragon" Jerome sniggered.

A woman came along and helped Jerome and Mara into the swan pedalo.

"See isn't this fun?" Jerome said as they peddled out into the lake.

"Yes" Mara smiled.

A medium size engine boat would drive around in the water to make sure everyone was staying safe.

Jerome and Mara had been in the boat just talking for twenty minutes now.

"I really like spending time with you Jerome"

"Me too"

"You're so funny you always make me laugh"

"You mean like this" Jerome said as he began to tickle Mara "You thought I forgot you're ticklish?" Jerome smirked.

"No stop!" Mara laughed as she hit Jerome trying to make him stop.

Jerome did stop, he just stopped and smile at Mara.

Mara smirked as she thought about how to get him back.

Mara dug her fingers into Jerome's sides and found out that he was even more ticklish then her.

"N-no s-stop stop! Please p-please!" Jerome laughed.

Jerome was moving closure to the edge to get away from Mara.

"Please stop! I s-surrender I SURRENDER!" Jerome screamed. As Jerome did that Mara stopped tickling him, but it was too late Jerome lost his balance and toppled into the water.

"JEROME!" Mara screamed as she moved to the edge.

Jerome life jacket made him rise to the surface a few seconds later.

"Hi Mara, care to j-join me" Jerome shivered. Jerome tried to climb into the boat but couldn't. Even with Mara's help he just kept slipping.

The rescue boat made its way over to Jerome and Mara.

"The life guards pulled Jerome from the water and wrapped him in a towel; before helping Mara into the boat.

"Jerome, are you ok?" Mara asked as she cupped her hands around his cold face.

"Yea, of course" Jerome coughed "I just hope I don't get sick again."

"I'm so sorry" Mara apologized as the rescuers took Mara and Jerome back to shore while they pulled their boat behind them.

When the boat pulled up they took Mara and Jerome into a room in the water centre to get dried off and for a 'talk' on water safety.

The manager of the water sports centre arranged for a police car to take Jerome and Mara home safely.


Everyone was at the table getting ready for dinner when the police car stopped in front of the house.

"Aw cool a police car!" Alfie shouted as he ran up to the window.

"What's it doing here?" Nina asked.

Nina's question was answered when the police officer stepped out and opened the back door of the car.

Jerome stepped out with a blanket over his shoulders and his cloths still semi wet. Mara followed behind him as the officer led them up the stairs.

"OH MY GOSH!" Eddie laughed "Jerome got arrested!"

"Then why wasn't he wearing handcuffs?" Patricia asked.

There was a knock at the door and Victor made his way to the bottom of the stairs to answer it.

When he opened the door Jerome and Mara where standing side by side with the police officer behind them.

In all the years Victor had worked in Anubis; he had never seen this, Victor was speechless and didn't know what to say or do.

"Little accident at the lake today" The policeman spoke "Don't worry, they're not in trouble with the law, Just giving them a left home" The man chuckled as he walked to his car.

Jerome and Mara stepped inside.

"Children" Victor muttered to himself as he walked back upstairs to his office.

Jerome and Mara looked at each other before bursting out in laughter.

"I think I need to get changed" Jerome said as their laughter died down.

"I think your right" Mara laughed.

Jerome waddled down the hall to his room, Mara laughed as she remember the picnic that had been ruined by the rain and Jerome walking like a duck to his room.

"What?" Jerome asked with a smile as he turned to see Mara laughing.

"Déjà vu" Mara laughed as she walked up the stairs.

Jerome continued walking and laughed as he heard water squish in his shoes.

Just before Jerome opened his door; Nina and Amber came up to him.

"How'd it go?" Nina asked.

"Where'd you go?" Amber asked right after Nina.

"What happened to you?" Amber and Nina both said at the same time.

"The plan failed, but it was actually really fun" Jerome smiled "We went to the lake for a boat ride and I fell in" Jerome explained before opening the door to his room.

As Jerome closed the door Nina and Amber walked back to the table.

"Do you think he has got some kind of curse on him that prevents him from asking Mara out?" Nina joked.

"I'm sure Jara will be together...in the end" Amber smiled "Oh like Romeo and Juliet!" Amber cheered.

"They both died" Nina said raising an eyebrow.

"Well I'm amazed Jerome isn't dead already" Amber said as she skipped to the table and sat beside Alfie.

Nina smiled as she sat with Fabian she looked at Amber and herself before an idea came to her.

Nina had a plan to get Jara together. They would be Jeromeo and Maraliet.


Ok guys, I already have the next few chapters planned out but if you have any date Ideas or ways for the date to be ruined, please write them in your review.

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