Oh man you guys review quickly when it comes to trouble and suspense! Man, I still feel bad for Elena, so as a suggestion from our lovely Trixielulamoon323, I will now give you information about Elena, as though no one thought up of an execution for her, I was thinking of something around a circus show where Monokuma pretty much leads some lions to kill her whole jugglers juggle various weapons and throws it at her while the crowd laughs and cheers... Eh at least I'm not that mean!
Anyways, about Elena. She likes baton twirling, singing, elephant riding, animal crackers, popcorn, and loud music. What she hates are slow movers, staying in one spot for too long, and people that are not passionate about what they do. She would like someone like Ishimaru, and she is a Puerto Rican!
Okay, now I'm through with that, let's get on to:
REPLIES TO COMMENTS:
Shadowplayer360: "Yeah, poor Elena. Yeah, I find oversleeping to be a bit too much of an excuse if Monokuma can wake you up with such a loud voice. Monokuma has the best plans, and yeah suspicious evidence."
Starnightking: "I know right it's always the good ones! Gyah, but I did like her a lot... She likes elephants... Makoto will be the best detective in the house!"
A. Zarko: "Ooh, a much more longer review! Toby will be Toby, is what I think I guess. Oh, wow, I'm glad that I didn't provide so much detail. Hmm, I did not like describing the facts either, but if you like it I'm fine with it then. That's actually true... I know regret that I didn't think of that before. Elena has the best reactions of them all. It's highly suspicious, but more people have such secrets they wouldn't want anyone to know. The investigation and trial will be splendid."
Trixielulamoon323: "The classics are the best they say! Yeah I'm sad to see Elena go, she was such a happy and perky person... Eh, she'll probably be in some of the students' mind like Ayano since he kind of had a friendship with her. I love your suggestion!"
TigerMasters: "Makes sense to suspect the late bloomers. It's because one truth prevails! Why Elena was murdered is one of the questions to ask."
HeroNoMore: "I really liked her, and I'm so sorry for killing her! Yeah, it was hard... And now we shall prevail justice on the one who killed her- oh wait I like all the characters... Haha, you still remember all those details, you'll be my observant Watson!"
DratiniX: "Oopsies, my bad..."
LadyGlitchy: "Well, I hope your suspects are wrong so you don't get sad about it... Cause it seems like you like that person whoever you're suspecting."
Awesome D.T: "NOOO don't cry! People wanna live and people wanna die! They don't think alike so... Meh. Oh gosh you're scaring me! Ooh yes it does and yeah Tomoe has a way of scaring the readers. I love Elena and her elephant and circus performances dang it! They are the smartest smart smart ones here... Haha, I do that too though. Yes you could!"
Shyjoker: "I wanted to ride on an elephant so much dang it! Yeah, I guess that's what it meant as well... Hmm cocoa fruit..."
Nagisa4863: "Sheesh I'm gonna cry then! A lot of people did~!"
Charming Crescendo: "I know right?! Yeah, I'm interested in the trial as well as the investigation~! Hahaha, you'll see..."
That1guyeveryonehates: "Everyone has a suspect!"
Now, let's go investigate, shall we? Oh yeah just to say something, during the investigations you should play that Danganronpa ost to make it sound more fun and mysterious to solve the case~
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"Oh my god..." Rina can only gasp as tears began to fill her eyes. "Elena!" She cried, despair in her broken heart. "Elena!" She knew that Elena was now dead, but that wasn't the case. Rina wanted to revive her, she didn't want to see her friend dead in front of her very eyes. "Oh my god why?!"
"A murder has happened!" Monokuma's voice rang through the hallways from the speakers, despite everyone having least than the urge to even listen. "Now, take the time to investigate and solve the murder! Fine the murderer of Elena Luz Grey!"
No one could've cared less. The more important manner was that a classmate was dead and that one of them were the murderer. It was horrifying to even believe that such a thing could happen.
"... Why..." Ayano quietly muttered miserably as he tried to hold himself back from vomiting. The gruesome murder as right before his very eyes, and it wasn't a nice sight at all. It was a cruel method of murdering someone, even in normal standards. "Why murder Elena...?"
"We'll survive through this together!" Ayano heard her cry once when he saw her talking to a nervous Rina and Stellar. He shut his eyes. Why?
"That we shall find out once we finger the murderer," Constantine said slowly and bluntly, glancing at Elena's dead body. "Okay." She stiffened herself up. "I'm going to check her body."
"Her b-body?!" Stellar replied in a suprised manner. However, Constantine ignored her and walked over to the dangling corpse.
"Couldn't it have been a suicide?" Nathan suggested, eyeing the corpse suspiciously. "I mean, look, she's in her room and she is dying like any other suicidal person."
"She would never kill herself!" Ayano cried desperately, Nathan shocked from Ayano's tone of voice. Ayano, noticing his radical behavior, sighed deeply and softened, his serious expression still on his face. "She's not the type of person to do that."
"Even if you think that," Makoto started as he walked into the room lazily. He glared at the corpse closely, his detective instincts butting into his lazy and joking soul. "There's still a chance she could've killed herself. If that is true, she herself is the murderer. I highly doubt it as well, though."
There was a buzz coming from the IDs, and Juugo silently took it out and opened it, his mask on now. He never liked letting people see his emotions. "Time of death... 5:46 AM?"
-New Evidence: Monokuma File 001-
Description: "Elena Luz Grey was murdered in her room around 5:46 AM. The reason of her death is caused by strangulation by some kind of long material. Her hands has blood near the tip of her fingers and blood all over her neck."
Takane blinked as he reluctantly glanced at his own ID. "5:46? That's weird..."
"I guess that means we're all suspects," Stellar answered a matter-of-factly, despite the sadness in her tone of voice.
"How can she be killed that early?" CJ asked herself as she put her ID away in her pocket. She sighed, and then began to examine the corpse. "And by the way, what's with the part about blood all over her neck?"
Toby sighed, scratching his head. "I doubt the wire could've caused that, it doesn't seem to be piercing into her or something like that. It's weird, really."
"That's right," Shizu stated. "I myself suspect there's something more to this case then a suicide or a choke and run."
"Did you see anything, Tomoe? Malcolm?" Kazuho asked in pure curiosity. "I do not think the time of death is lying, but, I'm curious if you seen at least something."
"I didn't see anything," Malcolm began. "It's just that Elena's door was already open by the time I came in around the time Tomoe greeted me."
"That's true," Tomoe answered. "I just wanted to go along with someone to the cafeteria, but now I'm not in the mood for a burger... Really. Who the hell could've done such a stupid thing?"
"It's all because of that stupid incentive!" Rina cried as tears were drastically falling from her wet and tired eyes.
"Stop talking!" Constantine cried angrily, she couldn't focus with all the noise around her. Everyone stopped and sighed. Constantine glared suspiciously at the corpse. There was definitely something wrong. First of all, the wire that was hanging Elena... Where did that come from? I didn't see anything that looks like a wire that could've been seen here in her room...
-New Evidence: Wire-
Description: "A long black wire that was tied tightly around Elena's neck. It didn't seem to pierce or cause any injury to Elena, even though her neck was full with blood. Also, the location of the wire is unknown."
"Unknown..." Paul began to speak, looking at his newly received evidence on his ID about the wire. "Does anyone here know where a wire can be found?"
"The Game Room?" CJ suggested. "There's like, hell, a ton of different places with wires everywhere."
"This is gonna be harder than I thought," Constantine sighed in frustration.
"I wonder..." Makoto began, tapping his chin. "Was there anything that can cause that injury on her neck?"
-New Evidence: Bloody Neck-
Description: "Elena is bloodied with crimson blood on her neck. There was a large and long wound that seemed to cause the bleeding."
Makoto glanced around the room, finding nothing but old circus clothes and books, even dropped animal crackers that tattered the floor. Makoto instantly knew that the murder hadn't taken place at the start of this very room. He sighed. "I'm going to check around this area."
"Huh, that would make sense," Constantine said, sounding a bit approving of for once. "Let's scatter about the areas and find more clues."
"I'll stay here with Shizu and Toby," Ayano said with a small smile, glancing around the place as if he was looking for something.
As the students got out of the room, Ayano sighed, checking around the room for something worthful as evidence. "Where is that?" He asked himself, rummaging around the tables that had messed up papers around the place. Hg dig through them thoroughly, and immediately he gasped. "Found it!" It was a single letter. Ayano smiled, knowing that Elena had actually did what she proclaimed she was trying to do; a journal entry to recall her past life, sort of like her secret blog.
-New Evidence: Letter-
Description: "A letter that Elena made around 5:30 AM. It said, "I've been asked to follow this student into the infirmary. I'm suprised that student actually knows something I didn't! Sheesh, am I that dumb? I have to tell Ayano, Aika and Rina about this tomorrow!" And the letter ends there."
"The infirmary?" Ayano ultimately felt a strange feeling strum his heart strings. He knew that the infirmary was the utmost definate place to go to to solve Elena's murder.
"Where are you going?" Shizu asked, grabbing ahold of Ayano's wrist.
Ayano yelped slightly. "The infirmary where Malcolm is."
"Huh? Sure... Okay then. Go ahead." Shizu glanced at Ayano in confusion, waving goodbye to him. And so, Ayano stepped foot out of the room and into the infirmary.
"Huh? What brings you here? I thought you were at Elena's room," Malcolm stated, suprisingly confused as to why Ayano was at the infirmary now.
"Well... Take a look at this," Ayano muttered, handing the letter to Malcolm. Malcolm suspiciously glanced at Ayano, then sighed and began to read the letter word by word. Reluctantly, he bit his lips in disdain.
"So the murder might've took place here," Malcolm quietly stated, handing the letter back to Ayano. He checked the area, now much more suspicious than before. "But... There doesn't seem to be anything."
Ayano nodded slowly, examining the area. He then glanced at one of the cabinets and tried to open it. He frowned, the cab it not budging an inch at all. "Was this always locked?" Malcolm blinked at Ayano, and then nodded. Ayano figured that searching every place is what makes a detective a good one, Ayano heard from Makoto before. Ayano then recalled the key he kept in his pocket and quickly took it out. He quietly inserted the key into the lock, and it made a click sound, opening. "It worked..."
There was nothing inside the cabinet except for antidotes and medical utensils. Nothing else seemed out of place, but Ayano can't help but stare awkwardly at one of the utensils. It seemed...shinier than usual. The other utensils were bland and dusty, coming from such a school, but the one utensil in the very left side was really shiny and spot clean.
-New Evidence: Medical Utensil-
Description: "A blade-like utensil that is used to cut the skin open during surgery. Unlike the rest of the utensils, this one in particular is very shiny, not bland and dusty as the rest of them."
Ayano gasped. "Ow! I struck my finger..." Malcolm sighed as he glanced at him, going to the cabinet. The cabinet was locked, Malcolm then smirked in delight, playing with his hands on a metal pin he got from his pockets. He then inserted the pin into the keyhole, and as easily as it looks, the cabinet opened. Malcolm quickly grabbed a small bandaid and handed it to a thankful Ayano. "T-thanks..." Ayano gently placed the bandaid on his right index finger and sighed. "You opened that cabinet so easily... I wish I can do that..."
"It's as easy as it looks," Malcolm stated, a bit shocked by Ayano's words of pure dedication. Malcolm sighed. "So, you found something yet?"
Ayano shook his head. "Not really... Just this blade utensil that seemed out of the ordinary from these other utensils."
Malcolm sighed. "Maybe there's nothing else here."
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[Elena's Room–Dormitories]
Shizu sighed as she examined the body. "Nothing seemed to be suspicious except the overt blood around her neck. There's a large wound over the left side of her neck. The wire couldn't have caused it. For one, it isn't tied that tightly around her neck. Two, I would be sure that she would be struggling, so she'd be grabbing ahold of the wires to loosen the grip."
Toby smiled at Shizu, walking over to Elena's dangling corpse. "But... What if she wasn't struggling and was actually asleep? As a writer, there's many possibilities, Shizu."
"How can she be asleep?" Shizu asked. "Hey, this may be weird...but..." She sighed, a faint blush across her face. "I'm not tall enough, and there isn't any chair so..."
"You want me to carry you up?" Toby asked as if he was in shock.
Shizu nodded. Man, she wished CJ was here. CJ wouldn't mind being held by Toby, she was such a confident and all-serious-for-investigation-and-no-play character that Shizu secretly admired. "Yes. I'm sorry if it was a sudden question."
"Huh? Oh, no, no!" Toby shook his head violently, waving his hands around in the process. "It's all for the investigation, like CJ said, we can't dilly dally on anything!" He quickly carried Shizu up with his hands, holding her as if she were sitting on a couch. Shizu quietly thanked him as she looked at the top of the ceiling.
"Sorry..." Shizu quietly muttered to Elena. She began to sniff at Elena's mouth and face. "Chloroform."
-New Evidence: Chloroform-
Description: "Elena's mouth seemed to smell of chloroform."
"R-really?" Toby said in utter disbelief, even if he had that certain possibility in the back of his head. "Wow... That's..."
"Tsk. So she was put to sleep," Shizu stated grimly, clicking her tongue as Toby gently put her down to her feet. "Then where's the cloth, napkin, or something that was soaked with chloroform? She couldn't have just inhaled it for no particular reason at all."
"Who knows." Toby shrugged. "This doesn't connect everything together. Where did the killer get that long strip of wire? Who is the killer? What is with her wound on her neck? And why kill Elena of all people?"
"Don't ask that many questions, please. You're sounding like those people who secretly love these murder cases." Shizu held her head in frustration, with Toby awkwardly laughing. She deeply sighed, taking another look at the place. There was a makeup kit that was halfway opened on top of Elena's yellow sheets for her linen bed. "What's that makeup kit doing on her bed?"
Toby tilted his head. "Huh? Oh, that." He shrugged as Shizu began to open it. "I noticed that a while ago near the bottom of Elena, and it was just annoyingly out of place I had to put it at least somewhere."
"Is that so..."
-New Evidence: Makeup Kit-
"Elena's makeup kit that was found beneath her hanging body. There seemed to be something missing, but what...?"
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[Laboratory]
Makoto sighed, alongside Tiki who was giving a small frown as she glanced through the tubes and cylinders with liquids in them. Makoto instantly knew these chemicals were Paradichlorobenzene, Digoxin, VX, Batrachotoxin, and other dangerous chemicals. Well, he always knew about anything dangerous, as he is a well-known detective. "That's weird..." Tiki started, glancing at a smiling Makoto who was examining the area. "There used to be a cylinder that contained chloroform here."
"Really? Man, I thought that was weird."
-New Evidence: Tiki's Testimony-
Description: "Tiki stated that there used to be a cylinder that contained chloroform. Now it's no longer seen in sight."
Makoto scratched his head. "I'll check on Shizu-chan and To-to for a second. I have a feeling that Elena's death was not easy to see with your own eyes. You need to have suspects and theories."
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[Incinerator Room]
Takane sighed. "It's so easy to just throw all of the evidence away."
"Well, I guess we can go hop into the trash slot!" Nathan joked lightheartedly. Takane groaned in disbelief. "You can burn all the evidence in the incinerator."
"No, I don't think you can open the trash slot that easily," Juugo bluntly replied with a yawn. Takane glared at him in suspicion, saying, "What makes you think so?" Juugo sighed as he opened the green button next to the giant incinerator.
Rumble rumble rumble
"Woah! It's so loud here!" Nathan cried out loud, despite Takane and Juugo silently ignoring his comments and remarks.
A few moments later, the incinerator room began to quiet down and the trash slot magically opened. Juugo sighed. "It's really simple to throw the evidence in the trash slot, but you have to open the incinerator to do so. It's highly impossible to have done such as thing as throw away the evidence. Even from my room I can hear the rumbling sounds of the incinerator a few days ago when Monokuma said that he was going to take out the trash."
-New Evidence: Juugo's Testimony-
Description: "The trash slot can't be opened unless you turn on the incinerator, which makes a rather noisy sound that even you can hear from the computer and phone screen."
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This is getting longer than I thought, so I'll have this in two parts!
