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Now just so everyone knows i just came back from a two week vacation with crappy internet so i couldn't upload any chapters. and i wont be going on any for a long time.
and here's my chapter writing process:
2 days to think of the plot for the next chapter
2-3 days to write the chapter
1 day to add in the details and character emotion.
1-5 day break between chapters
So all in all it should take at the least 6 days to write a chapter
Just so everyone knows :D
since I haven't did this in a while I do not own warriors, every character in this story i made up myself.
and now, finally on to the story!
Chapter 9:
Trotting through the forest, a bright ginger she-cat strode happily through the soft new-leaf grass. As the weather got hotter prey was running around the forest like flies around crow-food. The sun loomed high above the trees and it looked to be almost sunhigh. The clan was thriving dispite the many deaths. Lilyglow gave birth to two healthy kits, Lakekit and Riverkit. Firewing has moved into the nursery, expecting kits in about a moon and a half. Right now, Flamepaw was sent by her mentor to go hunting alone.
"If you hunt alone it will keep you ready for anything" Petalfall's words were still ringing in the ginger apprentices ears.
Flamepaw had already caught two mice and a vole. Her, Darkpaw, and Scarpaw if they ever happen to find him, were just a few days away from their warrior ceremony and Flamepaw couldn't explain her excitement. Over the past couple nights she sat in her nest thinking of warrior names she could possibly have. Flamepaw suddenly stopped as she heard a noise of another cat in the undergrowth. Fully alert she turned around and stood in a battle crouch.
A yowl split the air and a broad shouldered cat sprang from the bushes and tackled Flamepaw. With determination gleaming in her eyes Flamepaw kicked up with all her might and sprang to her feet just as the attacker fell to the ground. Before the cat could get up Flamepaw pounced, dodged the flailing paws from the other cat, and pinned her to the ground with one sheathed paw.
"Great job Flamepaw!" Petalfall exclaimed "Now could you please get off of me!"
As Flamepaw jumped to one side Petalfall quickly stood up and looked at Flamepaw, "Wow, I didn't sense any fear on you. Ever since Scarpaw went missing you've really steped up on your training."
"I guess I, uh, really, um since theres been a lot of deaths in the clan, I uh thought the clan needed more warriors" Flamepaw said nervously hoping Petalfall wouldn't notice the real reason why she was training hard.
"Well alright then, I think your almost ready for your final assesment. You go back to camp, I'll go get the prey you caught." Petalfall meowed padding away with her tail high like she acomplished something big.
Flamepaw sat down for a moment stuck in her own thoughts. Maybe I was overreacting a bit, after all he didn't ask for this when Darkpaw found him. Ever since Scarpaw had come into camp Flamepaw had been angry at him. He and Darkpaw did almost everything together. Flamepaw just wanted everything to go back to what it was in the nursery. No, I wasn't wrong to dislike Scarpaw even if it was his fault or not that he came here, and now that he is gone for good Darkpaw and I can finally be friends again! She stood up happily and trotted torwards the camp.
Squeezing through the thorn entrance, Flamepaw walked over to the fresh-kill pile. She chose a mouse for herself and sat by the other apprentices to eat. There seemed to be many cats in the camp. The elders layed sprawled across the ground tanning themselves in the sun. Almost all the warriors were busy renforcing the camp wall. Whoever was left sat by the fresh-kill pile and ate.
Two cats walked into the camp, one leaning on the other. Flamepaw just about choked on her piece of fresh-kill as she saw who came into camp. It was Darkpaw with a battle damaged Scarpaw. How could this happen? How did Darkpaw find him? Did he fake it? What happened? Many, many questions buzzed through Flamepaw's head like a bunch of angry bees. Through a fit of rage Flamepaw growled to herself and ran out of camp, pushing past Darkpaw and Scarpaw as she did so.
Flamepaw ran torwards the river that divided Lightningclan from Solclan, hoping that Darkpaw would follow her. Oh who am I kidding why would he follow me? He doesn't seem to care about me anymore! Flamepaw sat down near the river looking at the clear water that softly lapped the edge where she was sitting. The sun was going down and a beautiful sunset was shown through the open land of Solclan.
"Flamepaw, are you okay?" a voice sounded behind her.
Flamepaw imedditaly sat up straight and turned around expecting to see Darkpaw's green eyes. Instead she saw the discolored eyes of Fallingpaw, the white and tan apprentice. One of his eyes was orange and one green, when he was a kit cats thought that was incredibly weird. They soon forgot about it when he arrived.
"Yeah, I'm fine Fallingpaw" Flamepaw lied.
"Obviously not! If you weren't how come you came out here as soon as Darkpaw came back with Scarpaw?" He questioned.
"Okay, It's just, ever since Scarpaw came into the camp, Darkpaw and I kept growing apart. Like i'm not his sister anymore." She dropped her head to avoid Fallingpaw seeing her tear up. Flamepaw could never had admit this to anyone, but she felt as if she could talk to Fallingpaw about anything.
The apprentice put his tail around Flamepaw, "Of course you are, look I saw this too, I've noticed that he doesn't pay any attention to you. Listen later today when all this madness goes down I'll talk to him." He reasurred her.
"You'd do that for me?"
"Of course!" He smiled, "Now lets head back to camp. Oh hey I heard that in a few days all three of you will take your final assessment!"
Aww! Fallingpaw to the rescue!
Anyways this wasn't the longest chapter but i thought i'd get one to you guys soon
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This is an Update on the 10th of July:
I'm in a writers block right now so it may be a while until another chapter is uploaded
if you have any suggestions please dont hesitate to ask. Thanks!