I hate you guys. Seriously, WTF? First 8 chapters, get maybe 6 reviews a chapter if im lucky. Three kisses and a promise of smut later, suddenly I get like a bajillion reviews within an hour of posting it. Thats it, I've decided it: The rest of the story is just gonna be non-stop porn. I swear, that seems like all you want from me.
Uhg. Anyways, I made a deal. Here you go. Don't read this in public.
If smut bothers you, the next chapter will be nice and clean for you. Actually, if smut bothers you, stop reading M rated stories and grow a pair. (Tits, balls, w/e. Just a pair of something.)
On a side note. To astro27: Thank you. You made me tear up with that review. Im not joking, it made me so happy to know that someone thinks that much of this story.
And here we go...
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The door closed quietly, Elsa turning the lock. It clicked, and she jostled the doorknob. Satisfied that it wasn't moving, she turned, drinking in the sight of Anna standing behind her.
Anna was still in her wet jeans and tank top, her hair turned dark from the rain and pressed to her forehead, sitting on the floor. The rain-soaked clothing shaped to every curve of the redheads body - and they were plentiful. Elsa ran her eyes up and down her body, tracing up her legs, the swell of her hips, her hourglass figure and ample chest. When her eyes met Anna's, however, she felt a surge of heat like that she had never felt before.
The look in Anna's eyes was, plain and simple, lust. But it was so much more than that. It was need, hunger, love... so much more than simple attraction. Those blues met hers and she felt a longing that went far, far above love and lust, far more than just wanting someone. She felt her knees tremble and she lost her balance, her breath quickening.
Elsa pressed her back to the door, sliding down it slowly to sit on the floor, still staring into those eyes. Anna smirked, leaning forward, crawling on her hands and knees, never breaking eye contact with the blonde as she stalked forward, catlike. Elsa's eyes widened, her pulse beating so loud she was sure people down the hall could have heard it. Anna crawled steadily forward, over Elsa's outstretched legs before sitting on her lap. She leaned forward, tilting her head to the side, her lips getting closer to Elsa's, so close, so, so very close...
Elsa could feel her breath on her lips, warm and sweet as she nervously stared into the eyes in front of her. She closed her eyes slowly, and Anna leaned forward, just barely brushing her lips to Elsa's, but Elsa still felt as if she had been struck by lightning. She gasped, but Anna didn't close the distance, still maintaining that barely-touching kiss. Elsa leaned forward slightly, seeking for more contact, more pleasure, more anything, but Anna just chuckled and leaned back.
Elsa opened her eyes, pouting, and smiled when Anna blushed at her. "Now. What was that about getting out of the wet clothes?" Anna smirked at her, before ducking in for a kiss on the side of Elsa's neck and jumping off her lap quickly.
Anna stood, reaching down for Elsa's hands, and she let the redhead pull her to her feet. Now it was Anna's turn to look at Elsa, and the blonde blushed crimson as she felt the heat of her eyes tracing up and down her body like a searchlight. She looked down at the ground, embarrassed, but then she felt a warm hand against her cheek. She looked up just in time to catch Anna's lips colliding with hers. Her eyes widened again, shocked, but then closed slowly as she pulled the girl close in her arms, heat spiraling out of control in her abdomen as Anna pulled her tight to her body.
She could feel every contour, every inch of skin on Anna's body through the rain-soaked clothes. Her hands roamed down and across the redheads back as Anna did the same to her, pulling each other together as their lips moved like waves on the ocean, crashing together again and again.
Anna's hands found their way to the helm of Elsa's shirt, and she tugged it up, stepping back a half-step. Elsa ended the embrace, raising her arms up as Anna pulled the wet clothing up and over her head, leaving her clad only in her plain white sports bra. Anna gasped, grinning as she ran her hands over Elsa's muscular abdomen and arms, marveling at how solid they were.
Not to be outdone, she reached for the hem of Anna's shirt, removing the offending article, revealing the smooth, pale expanse of skin. She licked her lips, running her eyes over her bared hips and navel, then gasped as Anna grabbed the waistband of her pajama bottoms, yanking them down while simultaneously pushing the blonde onto the bed as she did so, neatly ending with Elsa clad only in her underwear and lying on her back on the top of the bed.
With a smirk, Anna straddled Elsa's hips, looking down at the girl with a mischievous glint in her eyes. Elsa looked at the vision before her, raising her hands to place them on Anna's waist, marvelling at the smooth skin under her war-calloused palms. Anna shivered, then leaned down, planting a kiss in the hollow of Elsa's throat, where her collarbone met the slope of her neck.
The reaction was instantaneous. Elsa arched her back, bucking Anna like a bull at a rodeo. Anna was shocked for a moment, nearly thrown off the bed, but then grinned as she braced herself down, looking at the girl with malignant intent. She bent forward again, this time quickly biting Elsa in the same spot she had kissed before.
She could feel the heat rising up through the body below her, and she smirked down at the blonde yet again. Elsa was panting, squirming beneath her, her face a vibrant red. She rubbed her thighs together, the heat becoming unbearable.
"A...Anna, please..." Anna smiled down at the girl, biting her lip seductively. It seemed that Elsa was the exact opposite of herself when in bed.
"Please... What?" Anna said, still smirking down at her.
"Please... I don't hnnng" She groaned as Anna suddenly cupped her sports-bra clad left breast in her hand, rubbing it lightly with her fingers. "Anna oh!" Turns out Ms. Badass is submissive when the clothes come off.
She moved her other hand as well, lightly carressing Elsa's right breast. Anna cocked her head to the side as she felt something hard and metallic under her palm, then grinned down.
"Is that what I think it is?" Anna asked, and Elsa turned her head to the side, nodding slightly and biting her index finger between her teeth to prevent a moan from escaping. "So. You pierced your nipple."
Elsa looked up at her, blushing furiously at the redheaded goddess who was playing her like a harp. "It was mostly to piss off the bitch of a gym teacher in middle school. I kept it when I realized how -oh shit! - how useful it could b-b-be ohgodAnnaplease." Annas grin split from ear to ear as she grasped the pierced breast with one hand, then gently tugged the ring with her thumb and middle finger.
"Oh please oh please oh pleeease Annapleaseannapleaseanna..." It became a mantra to Elsa, and a game to Anna. How long could she tease the blonde like this? Eventually, she decided to give the girl a break, leaning back to admire her handiwork. Elsa was panting rapidly, her chest heaving in great sighs as she stared up at the ceiling, hands entangled in the sheets on the bed.
Anna leaned forward again, kissing her way down the girls body - starting above her left eyebrow, right on the top of her scar, then down the side of her face. She stopped for a quick break - well, detour - at her lips, before continuing down over her chin and down her neck, over her shoulder and up the swell of her breasts. Elsa's eyes were wide, and she was breathless as Anna toyed with her like a cat with a mouse. Anna knew she had her trapped now.
All she could do was what Anna wanted.
Anna proved this by stopping her kisses as her lips met cloth. She sat up, frowning, and Elsa mewled disappointedly. Anna met her eyes, face serious. "We have a problem, Elsa." Elsa looked at her, suddenly nervous. "Your bra is still on, and I can't unhook it. And I have to get up to take it off." Elsa looked at her, then rolled her eyes.
The blonde muttered something about lazy, never wants to move when in bed as she sat up. Anna climbed down off the bed, kneeling in front of Elsa as the blonde settled to the edge of the bed, slowly taking the tight bra off.
Anna wrinkled her nose as the bra was thrown at her, landing on her face. Elsa tittered for a moment, then gasped as Anna tossed her hair, sending the clothing to the floor. Anna looked up at the blondes wide blue eyes, smiling up at her with that hungry look yet again. Then her gaze shifted lower.
Elsa's breasts were milky white, a tan line evident from where the sports bra had been previously. She shifted uncomfortably under Anna's attention, and the redhead smiled as her nipples stiffened under her gaze. Then her eyes were drawn to a twinkle of silver.
The ring was a simple one, just a small metal loop that was only a centimeter in diameter. She slowly leaned forward, her eyes flitting up to catch Elsas she she opened her mouth slightly. The blonde was expectant, her hands gripping the edge of the bed tightly as her breathing reached a new peak yet again. Anna slowly closed her canines on down on the ring, then pulled her head back slightly.
Elsa moaned loudly, winding her hands in the tangle of Annas red hair. "Oh shit, easy on that one. Gentle, please." Anna grinned up at her from around the ring, before leaning forward to suckle on Elsa's breast, flicking the ring with her tongue.
Elsa raised her head to the ceiling, pulling Anna closer to her. "Oh shit oh shit oh shit Anna pleeeeeeeeeeeeee..." Her moans faded into an expulsion of breath, shuddering as she flexed her toes into the carpet. "Oh fuuuck fuck fuck fuckfuckfuck!" Anna remembered reading something about how one in 20 women could come to orgasm just from breast stimulation. It seemed that Elsa was one of those lucky 5%. But that was something to explore for another day.
Anna bit down lightly, then pulled back from her lover. Elsa whimpered. "Please Anna, don't do this to me. I'm so close..." Anna smirked up at her.
"I have other goals for tonight, hun. Take off the rest." Elsa blinked at her, then slowly went to remove her now-soaked panties. Anna stopped her, however. "Let me do it." Elsa stopped, blinking down at her, then gasped as Anna moved her face to the crux between her legs. Anna stopped, her face just inches from the core of Elsa's heat. She inhaled briefly, savoring the scent, then planted a quick butterfly kiss on the center of the wet spot. She grasped the waistband of the garment with her teeth, pulling down with her head. Elsa straightened her legs, aiding with the removal. Anna stopped pulling with her teeth when the panties went past Elsa's knees, letting them drop to the ground and revealing her in all her naked glory. Well, almost all.
"The bracelets too. I want you completely naked." Elsa shivered at the word choice, but nodded her head no. Anna looked at her curiously, then nodded in understanding. "Oh! Oh. Elsa, please, theres no reason to be scared. I wont think less of you." Elsa bit her lip, then slowly removed the dozens of bracelets that covered her arms from wrist to elbow.
Every bracelet revealed a different scar.
Ann grabbed Elsa's hands, pulling them to her, then turned her arms over. She looked at each scar, most of them nearly faded save the one on her left wrist, which was wide and jagged. She raised Elsa's arms up, then kissed every scar.
"They're a part of you, Elsa. I know that you went through rough times before this, but I could never think less of you for these, and anyone who does judge you by your scars doesn't know how strong you really are. I love them because they are part of you. Because -" Anna bit her lip, turning to the side, then took a deep breath. "I love them. Because I love you."
Elsa stared at her in shock, then pulled her hands back, wiping tears that formed in her eyes. "I... I love you too, Anna. So much. So, so, so much." Anna smiled at her, then leaned up to kiss her. When the kiss turned from a simply pressing of lips to an exploration of each others mouths, Anna pulled back.
"Now. No more talking, unless its you screaming my name." Elsa laughed at that, then blushed as Anna pulled back to examine her love in her full glory.
Elsa was, in a word, fit. Not just simply toned by athletics, as many young girls were. Her legs were lithe and muscular, the result of long, hard years of relentless training. Her ass was truly a work of art, perfectly round and - as Anna found when her questing hands worked their way down later in the night - perfectly taunt. She's gotta be like, part Brazillian or something. Her abdomen - god, the girl had abs of steel. She had more defined muscles than most boys she had seen shirtless. Not more muscular, however. Elsa worked hard to stay on the fine line between lithe and powerful, knowing that she had speed to her advantage and needed to keep it that way.
Anna ran her hands up the girls arms, shivering at the absolute tightness of the muscle beneath the skin. Elsa gripped the sheets as Anna climbed on top of her, pressing her bra-clad breasts to Elsa's bare ones. Anna felt the muscles of her arms ripple beneath the skin, panther-like, and she had to hold back from attacking the girl right there. I'm on a mission, though. Maeve told me Merida did this once and it was amazing.
Anna planted a kiss right on Elsa's forehead, then worked her way slowly down her face with feather-light kisses. She spared no inch of skin, kissing both of Elsa's eyelids and even her ears - something that made Elsa squirm the second she touched them. Innnnteresting. Anna thought, filing the information away for future notice.
She kissed down her shoulders, down her left arm and then back up, sparing a quick tug to the ring on her way over to the right arm. Elsa moaned loudly at this, starting to squirm from side to side underneath her. "Plea... Please..." Elsa whimpered out, trying to pull Anna's head to her chest. Anna just dodged nimbly, grabbing Elsa's hands and pinning them down under her own, stopping the blondes half-hearted attempts to free herself.
Anna finished her kissing of the right arm, before encountering Elsa's right breast, which she hadn't had a chance to have a proper introduction to. Elsa whispered something out feebly, and Anna craned her neck. "Cum again?"
"Not so... Not so gently. More... Milder." Anna grinned, before taking Elsa's unloved nipple between her teeth and biting down. Not hard, but enough to cause discomfort if you didn't like that sort of thing.
Or, in Elsa's case, extreme pleasure.
The girl rocked beneath her body, not even able to moan as she tossed from side to side of the bed. Anna released the breast almost immediately, and Elsa moaned loudly. "You... Bitch." Anna chuckled, a deep, throaty sound, and continued her trail of kisses.
She kissed down the expanse of muscular, unblemished skin, stopping briefly to flick her tongue into Elsa's navel, making the girl giggle. She continued kissing, planting a kiss on both of the girls hips before pausing right above Elsa's pelvic region. Elsa was soaking onto the bedsheets at this point, utterly spent and nearly out of her wits from Anna's constant torture.
Anna briefly contemplated continuing the trail of kisses down her legs, but decided that the blonde had had enough at this point, and went for her ultimate objective. She spread the girls legs wide, grabbing her by the hips before leaning in to plant a soft kiss right above the soft pink mound. Elsa jerked, and Anna smiled, looking close.
"No hair?" She asked, and Elsa panted back.
"Had... Lazer hair... removal. Never have to... shave."
"Lucky rich snob." Anna muttered, then gave her victim another kiss, only lower this time. Elsa jerked again, sitting up slightly, and wound her hands in Anna's hair. The chanting continued.
"Anna Please Anna Please annnnnnnnaaaa..." Elsa muttered, groaning as Anna fulfilled her wish, pressing forward to her core. She flicked her tongue lightly around her outer lips, before pressing it quickly into the waiting hole. Elsa groaned loudly, pulling Anna back in. Anna happily obliged her, licking away as Elsa bucked and moaned, held only in place by Anna's firm hands on her hips.
Finally, Elsa started to jerk erratically, signalling her coming climax. Anna pulled out, then quickly pressed a single finger in before Elsa could begin her protest. She used her other hand to lightly rub back Elsa's hood, revealing the engorged clit. She smiled, Elsa's moans turning to whimpers as Anna pressed another finger in, sliding them in and out. Elsa started breathing faster and faster, Anna's pumping increasing with the rate of Elsa's coming climax. Just as Elsa was about to reach her crescendo, Anna leaned in, sucking her clit into her mouth.
Elsa saw stars as she came, the most satisfying orgasm of her life. Her eyes rolled back into her head, her back arched, her toes curled into the bed and she nearly tore the sheets as she twisted her hands in them. She couldn't even moan any longer, riding the waves of an orgasm so strong that she couldn't even breathe. Anna continued moving her fingers and flicking her clit with her tongue, extending her to higher and longer levels of pleasure.
Finally, Elsa stopped straining against the bed, collapsing down in a heap of worn-out pleasure. Her arms and legs were sore for straining them for nearly two minutes, and she panted quickly in and out, the most tired she had been in years.
Anna crawled up next to her, smiling as she licked her hand clean. Elsa looked up at her, then leaned forward to kiss her. She could taste herself on Anna's lips, and when she pulled back she was panting again.
"If you don't mind waiting... a bit... I can... return the favor." She managed to gasp out between breaths. Anna just shook her head.
"Sleep, Elsa. Your turn in the morning."
"But, its not fair to -"
"Elsa. I love you. Sleep."
And so they did.
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OKAY, INVENTORS OF ENGLISH SLANG. WHY ARE THERE NO ROMANTIC TERMS FOR VAGINAS. LIKE WTF. WHY.
There are so many words for penises that dont sound so... edgey. But like there are only three words for the female genitalia that don't end up sounding like curses. Seriously.
The beginning of the next chapter will have some smut as well. Should be up soon. If this story gets a ton of reviews overnight, it should be up like... maybe 5 pm, eastern. If not, well... I can hold out longer than you can :D
Anyways. I Love you all so much, and thank you for all the kind and wonderful reviews. Its a shame that I had to hold a chapter over your head to get them. Please, please, please. Review. I spend hours upon hours of time, stealing away spare time from school and chores and work and whatnot to plot out and write these chapter for you.
You just gotta smash out like, ten words or whatever, and it makes my day. Hell, it makes my whole week. Please review it. For me. And if not for me, do it for you, because it makes me wanna update faster.
Love Y'all!
-Arac.