Ok so sorry about no ages! Here they are
Joshua: 13
Bruce: 11
Samantha: 12
Abigail: 10
Allen: 13
Lance: 13
Celene: 11
Amanda: 12
This Winner: 12
That Winner: 12
Anyway, based on your reviews, I think you guys don't really like Samantha! I made a true brat out of her!
So anyway, let's continue on with the story!
It was business as usual for the factory, but with the golden tickets around! Eight of them have been closed into the history books, but two have yet to be discovered! Nobody knew when the next golden ticket would strike.
After all, two were found on the same day!
Charlie planned parts of the tour already, and it was nearly complete. Just two more tickets left to go.
"I wonder who will find the next golden ticket?" said Charlie to his parents as he went into their bedroom.
"Hopefully it will be someone magical!" said Mrs. Bucket.
"Magical?" questioned Mr. Bucket.
"Nice I mean" Mrs. Bucket said.
"Whatever, let's just see if any golden ticket has been found yet!" said Charlie.
They turned on the TV.
"The ninth golden ticket has been found by 12 year old Devin Lake in Melbourne, Australia!" said an interviewer.
"Let's hope this kid is good!" said Charlie.
"He might, there are only two golden ticket winners left!" said Mrs. Bucket.
"Let's find out" said Charlie.
Devin was wearing a green shirt, and blue jeans with black tennis shoes, had black hair and green eyes. He was 12 years old. His father was wearing the same things, and his mother was ginger with a purple flowered dress with a pink jacket on the top.
"So Devin, how did you find the golden ticket?" asked a reporter.
"I hacked the system!" said Devin.
"CRAP!" said Charlie.
Everyone jumped at the sudden outburst.
"Sorry, I got annoyed there." said Charlie.
"I hate people who are not smart, I wish I am older I guess, it means people would actually listen to what I have to say, instead of ignoring me because I am a kid!" said Devin.
"Oh no" Charlie said.
"Why are people super dumb? Like take a minute to learn something, oh my god" said Devin.
Lance's house
"Oh, he thinks he is soooooo smart!" said Lance.
Back to the interview
"What do you think of the other golden ticket winners?" asked someone.
"Horrible, like Lance wants his family to die!" said Devin.
"I would rather study instead of stick around, so bye!" said Devin.
The interview ended.
"Nope, not allowed to inherit the factory." said Charlie.
"Yep" agreed everyone.
Alexander's mom
Mrs. Murst was still crying about what happened.
She could have stolen others money, but that would just make her sink down to the cruel people's level.
She slowly got up and went to leave, going outside the store. There was an old man sitting there.
"What are you crying about?" asked the old man.
"Well, I went to buy a Wonka Bar to see if I could get a golden ticket, but someone stole my money!" cried Mrs. Murst.
"I have some spare money" said the old man.
"You can use it to buy the Wonka Bars!" said the old man.
"Thank you" said Mrs. Murst.
She went to buy a few Wonka Bars, and then ran to her house.
"I have a surprise for you, Alexander!" said Mrs. Murst.
"What is it?" asked Alexander.
"3 Wonka Bars!" she said.
Mr. Murst sighed in relieve that there were still some left in the store.
"Open them" he said.
"Okay" Alexander said.
He opened the first one.
There was none.
He opened the second one.
There was none.
He opened the third one.
There was none.
There was crushing silence.
Mrs. Murst sighed in disappointment. She then went into her bed and saw another Wonka Bar.
"Alexander!" she screamed.
"I found another one!" said Mrs. Murst.
"Open it!" said Mr. Murst.
He opened it.
There was a golden ticket inside.
How did you like Devin? Rate 1-10!