Me: Hey, guys! I'm so sorry for not uploading for a few days, a storm passed on Saturday and the internet went down. I got it back on Sunday at night but when it was Monday, there wasn't internet! :(
Anyway, I will start with the guest reviews! :)
AFeralFurry: (Chapter 9 review)
Haha, I'm glad it's interesting! :)
Actually, I hadn't thought of it but maybe after I finish this story, I could do it. :) it could be sorta like a spin-off or something. Thank you so much for the idea! :D
AFeralFurry: (Chapter 10 review)
Awesome! I'll be looking forward to it! :D
Hahaha, that is so me! When I started I was awful, I'm still am but this site actually helps a lot with your spelling and stuff. It was because of this site that I was able to do a project for my English class, it was doing a story! XD The writer's block happens to me all the time, I'm currently having writer's block as we speak yet I have a lot of ideas in my head.
Lol! XD Maybe soon, maybe later! XD
Really? Thank you, glad you like it! :)
Haha, no wonder when I posted a chapter, after I posted it your review would appear but hey, now I got both reviews because of the storm so that's a plus for not having internet! :)
Now, Dawn, please do the Disclaimer.
Dawn: ANICA DOES NOT OWN POKEMON!
Me: STORY START!
Paul walked up the stares from the kitchen, he had just eaten lunch and was on his way to his room to talk with 'CoordinatorHikari', or Dawn. He was still stunned that she would've wanted to met up with him, when he did the plan he was not expecting this to happen. Of course she would have wanted to met up with him. Now that he thought more on it, he wondered why he hadn't thought of it. Dawn was a curious girl and if she made a friend she would be eager to met them, especially if it's an internet friend.
He couldn't let her met him, she would know it was him, obviously she would have eyes but still he didn't want to have his cover blown. It was still amusing to talk with her on the computer, he didn't want to lose that, after all he was getting to know her better this way.
Grunting, he went inside his room, closing the door after himself. Turn the computer on and resumed the talk he had had with Dawn.
'Hey, Troublesome. Ready to continue?'
'Hi. Um, sure. I don't see why not. What do we still need?'
'We need more scenes in which we can point out that Shinji and Hikari are falling for each other.'
'Right, well. We can put that Shinji start to get a cold and Hikari gets worried and starts to give him medicine and stuff.'
'Maybe...'
'If you have a better idea, speak up!'
'I was think something along the line of, Hikari falling asleep and Shinji managing to send out one of his Pokémon. While the Pokémon helps him with the rope he hears, Hikari mumbling stuff in her sleep.'
'And Shinji can hear Hikari mumbling his name a lot on her sleep with a smile on her face! Cute! :D'
'Sure. Got any more ideas?'
'Hmm, how about after some time of Shinji having to live with Hikari, she's really bored one day and starts to watch a movie with Shinji(Who is still tied) next to her and half way through she falls asleep on him. :)'
'Yeah. Okay, we still need more thought.'
'What? More? Aww, man! :('
'You're impossible. (-_-")'
Me: So, good? Bad? Constructive criticism appreciate it but no flaming! :)
Dawn: Please Review!
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