Chapter 11:

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Tris' POV

I turn around to see who it is. It's Tobias. I mentally roll my eyes. He is the last person I want to see right now. First, he breaks up with me, then, follows me everywhere.

"What?" I ask.

"What are you doing?" He asks sounding a bit worried. Why would he care, he was the one who did this to me.

"Why do you care? You broke up with me."

"Yeah, but I never wanted to. I thought you would be better off without me. I thought I was protecting you by doing this."

"Yeah, 'protect me'? How are you protecting me? Do you know how much I wondered I did something wrong? So don't even get me started on how you were protecting me."

"Yeah, I was 'protecting' you. I was protecting you by separating you from me. Everything that happened with Eric. Because of me. I never realized how much more danger you were in without me than you were in with me. Tris, I'm so sorry. Will you ever forgive me?"

"Hmmm….. I don't know, I'd have to think about it." I say trying to hide my smile. He looks nervous.

"I'm just joking. Of course I can forgive you! Does this make us back together?" I ask hopeful.

"If you want to." He says and comes over and kisses me. I instantly kiss him back. Our kiss isn't quick and sloppy. It's a long passionate kiss.

"I've been wanting to do that." He says while slightly blushing. I laugh and give him a peck on the cheek and drag him out of the chasm to our apartment.

"Tris, will you go out with me tonight?"

"Of course! So, where are you taking me tonight?"

"It's a surprise." He says with a hint of a smile.

"I hate surprises."

"I know." He says with a smirk.

"Fine, then. What do I need to wear?"

"Ummm…. Nine out of ten."

"Ok, and if I may ask. By when?"

"Be ready by six. Okay?"

"Okay." I say and give him a peck on the cheek and head back to Christina's apartment.

"Hey! Christina! I'm back!" I yell to her through the apartment.

"Hey! I'm in here!" She yells from her bedroom.

"Hey, I'm moving out and back into my place. Four and I are back together. Also, I'm going on a date tonight, will you help me get ready?"

"Of course! Is that even a question?!" I roll my eyes and laugh.

"Ok, thanks. I need to be back by my apartment by 6."

"Then we better start getting ready now!"

"Ok, but I'm NOT wearing a dress."

"Ugh! Fine! I'm not going to argue with you because we will just be wasting time for getting ready. Come on, we only have a couple hours left. Let's go get you ready!" She says excitedly about getting me ready for this date.

"Ok, sit in the chair. I need to pick out your outfit and do your hair and makeup. You'll look gorgeous by the time I'm done with you!" I smirk and she runs into her room.

A few minutes later, I hear Christina squealing in her room. I laugh and she runs into the guest bedroom, where I am, with a black pencil skirt that has a dark gray blouse to match. She brought black heels with black and gray bows at the toe of the heel. I change and I look amazing!

Next, she pulls my hair into a half-ponytail and puts in a black bow and curls the remaining hair. Then, she puts on pink lip gloss, eyeliner, blush, black eye shadow, and mascara.

"Ok, you're all done. Come look in the mirror! You look amazing!"

I'm speechless. I just smile and hug her.

"Thank you so much Christina. It means a lot." I say and leave her apartment.

"Have fun!" I hear Christina yell from her apartment. I just smile to myself and head to our apartment.


When I get there I see Tobias waiting in the living room. He's wearing a black dress shirt and black jeans. I decide to scare him. I sneak up behind him and grab his waist. He jumps a bit and then turns around to face me. He kisses me on the lips, but before I can kiss him back he pulls away.

"You look beautiful." He says while smiling.

I smile back and say, "Thanks, are you ready to go?"

"Yep, let's go."

"So, where are you taking me?"

"Surprise." He says and smirks. I just roll my eyes and look down at my shoes as we descend in the elevator.

We walk in silence. Not a bad silence, but a good silence. Enjoying each other's company. He takes me to our secret place in the Chasm. He kisses the top of my head and I smile.

"I wanted to take you here for a stroll down memory lane. Where we had our first kiss. Now, if you'd follow me." I smile and we walk out of the Chasm and to our next stop. The net.

"This is where I first fell in love with you." I smile and look back down to my shoes, trying to hide the blush creeping up my cheeks. "We've got two more places to go, so follow me." He says takes my hand in his and we walk to our next destination. I'm a little surprised when we walk into the training room. Then I look to the table near the targets and see it has knives set up. I smile and look up at him.

"This, is where I threw knives at you when you took Al's place. This is one of the places I've seen you at your bravest." I can't stop smiling, no matter how much I try. I kiss him and he kisses back. When we break apart he takes some knives and hands some to me. I throw the knife and it hits in the middle. I smile and he does the exact same. "Show off." I say and I take another knife turn around so my back is facing the target and throw it. I turn around to see where it hit. In the middle. "Show off." He says back to me. I smirk and we walk out.

We walk to the trains and jump on. I sit on his lap and he rests his arms around my waist and kisses the top of my head. We stay like this for a couple more minutes until he stands up and pulls me up with him. "Ok, we're here."

We jump off the train hand-in-hand. We continue walking until I see the ferris wheel in the distance. I can't help but smile. I look up at him and see he's looking down at me smiling.

When we reach the ferris wheel I look up at the wheel and notice it's lit up. It's beautiful. I turn around to see Tobias on one knee and holding the little black velvet box with the ring.

"Miss Beatrice Prior, I know I have made many mistakes before but this is one that is far from a mistake. You were a miracle that came into my life and I will love you for the rest of this life and the ones to come. You are the most beautiful, smart, brave, selfless, honest, and caring person I know. Will you make me the luckiest man alive and become my wife?" I am speechless. I can feel the tears coming and all I can say is "Yes."

A/N: Isn't that sweet? I know I loved writing it. Thanks again for reading my story. I wanted to know if any of you wanted them to have kids because I have gotten requests. Just leave a review or PM me. Don't forget to review, favorite, and follow. Ideas are welcome. Thanks for everything!