Previously:
Suddenly a balloon hit me hard and I tripped backwards, screaming only for effect. Amy rolled her eyes. SHE was the one who had hit me. I went underwater and heard Amy and Sinead laughing. I managed to resurface and Amy and Sinead, still laughing, high fived. I glared at them. Oh, sweet revenge, I'm calling for you. They will be sorry. I promise. And that is NOT a threat.
Chapter twelve:
Dan Pov: I got even madder when Amy and Sinead just couldn't stop laughing. "Look...his...face!..." Sinead gasped. "I...know, it's...hilarious.." Amy said.
I realized I was breathing heavy and tried to stop. If I was gonna do this, I'd need to do it right.
I smiled at them. Confused, and having finally stopped laughing, Sinead asked, "Uh, you aren't mad?" I shook my head. "No way. It was only a water balloon."
Sinead and Amy frowned then both turned away, shrugging. I heard them start talking about their swimsuits as they started to swim many feet away.
Amy Pov:
I frowned. That wasn't like Dan. Shrugging, Sinead and I both swam away. "Hey, I like your swimsuit color, " Sinead told me. I smiled brightly. "Thanks, I like yours too!"
We continued this until we were about ten feet away. I called Natalie over. Looking very annoyed, she swam over. "What?" "Don't you think Dan was a little..unlike himself?" Sinead asked.
After thinking a bit, Natalie nodded. "Yeah. He didn't seem mad when Amy threw the water balloon."
Amy nodded. "Now doesn't that seem a little weird to you?" she asked. Natalie nodded again. "We need to be on our guard-" "And make sure he doesn't do anything. If he does, I'll kill him, though!" Natalie interrupted.
Amy smiled. "Definitely," she said. "Well, let's go dry off and plan!" Natalie said. "I wanna stay in the water!" Amy and Sinead said. They started arguing. "Land!" "Water!" "Land!" "WATER!" "UGGHHH!" (that was Natalie).
Okay, sorry it's short. SSR, please respond to my PM. Cherries, thanks! I like your idea, I'll do something like that!
Miss Know It All, yes, I know. I WILL go back and fix the mistakes, I promise you, but I do NOT have time right now. I'm leaving with my family for the store, then going to my grandmas. I'm sorry. But I need to fix MY mistakes/grammar? What about you? You don't have...look, I'm going to shut up, before I get into an online fight and lose a reader/reviewer, but the point is, I'll fix them.
Anyway, Miss Know It All, thank you so much! By transitions, can you explain? Oh, an are you a FanFictioner? I mean, are you Insane Miss Know It All, but not logged it? Just wondering...
And in case anyone's wondering, I'm trying to slow the story down a bit, because I know it went too fast, with the whole "Ian- hurt- Amy- Oh- look- Ian- apologized- their- together- AmIan- is- happening!" thing. I'm sorry about that:(
BFF With Books, thanks, I'm updating, and I LOVE YOUR NAME! And in response to chapter nine's reviews:
Lokie Lover: HAHA! Yeah, well, I'm sorry!:) I can't help it! For the love of Divergents? Have you read Divergent? If so, I have my story Four! Pansy cakes? Lol. Wow.:) You paid attention to...what was it, Insurgent when Tobias mentioned that?
39Obsession, I think I replied, but, OMZ, THANK YOU SOO MUCH, YOU ARE AWESOME! HAHA, THANKS, LOL.
