A/N: Gonna switch this chapter up a little. It's in Bella's point of view for now, but I'll be switching to Edward's pretty soon.
October 24, 1918
"I'm ready," I said, taking in a deep breath. I looked away as Carlisle put the needles into my arm. "You'll change Edward afterwards right?"
"Yes," He said, "This painkiller should keep the venom from burning." I nodded. I couldn't believe I was actually going to do this; I always thought Vampires were myths. How wrong I was. I closed my eyes tight, and suddenly fire ripped through both my wrists. I clenched my teeth together, keeping myself from yelling out. "I'm sorry." He said, before another slash of pain spread through my neck.
The venom burned like my whole body was engulfed in flames. I did all I could not to show pain. There was so much pain; but if I opened my mouth, I knew I would have surely screamed. "I'll be back when it's over," Carlisle said; his voice sounded far away. "I must check up on Edward."
I heard him, but I refused to respond. I had to keep strong and face this. I wanted this, and if Edward and I could live together forever, a little pain would be worth it.
I suddenly thought about everyone. They were innocent humans; what if we couldn't control our thirst like Carlisle could? We'd have to figure something out. I didn't want to kill anyone; I guess I hadn't exactly thought about it at the time. I remembered the pain I was feeling; the burning, knife cutting pain surging through me. It couldn't last that long could it? I kept my mind on Edward. He was worse within the matter of hours. He had already sprained a rib from coughing, and his lungs were failing from the loss of oxygen.
Fire shot up my throat, irritating it until it felt like I couldn't breathe anymore. My head was spinning, I could feel my heart slowing down, and the air was leaving my lungs. My first instinct was to keep breathing in, but that only provoked the burning in my throat more. A chill ran through my veins; a war of fire and ice taking over my body. So far fire was winning.
I had to get through this…for Edward.
XxxxX
October 27, 1918
After three long days of quietly suffering the venom, I was finally immortal. My throat burned even worse now than it did before. I was thirsty. I ignored the feeling and stood up; looking around carefully. I could see everything! A spider in the top corner of the room was making its delicate web. I could hear the footsteps rushing around outside the office. I had to find Carlisle.
I came across Edward's room. He was even worse, but I could hear his heart slowing down; Carlisle had already done it. When though? "Carlisle?"
"Yes?" He asked, coming out of another room.
"When did you change him?" I asked.
"A few hours ago. He still has about two more days until it's fully spread." Carlisle explained, "He asked for you right before I changed him."
"He did?" I asked, "He knew I was missing, didn't he?"
"Yes," He nodded, "I didn't tell him yet."
"So he assumes I'm still human?" I said. Carlisle nodded again.
"Just like these doctor's assume he's dying."
"Can I see him?"
"Yes." I didn't realize how fast I was; I was my Edward's side within milliseconds. I almost placed my hand over his, to show him I was here, but I didn't know my own strength; I didn't want to hurt him. I would wait for him.
XxxxX
October 29, 1918
I listened to Edward's strangled gasps; the venom still hadn't spread to his heart yet. He was in a lot of pain. I couldn't take it I couldn't listen to him suffer. It was too horrible to see him writhe in pain.
I stood and walked over to him and whispered in his ear, "I'll come back for you, Edward. I promise." I left the hospital room, in search for blood. I needed Edward to get better.
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Edward's POV:
I let out a sharp gasp; the pain was unbearable. It burned my throat and paralyzed my body. I could feel my veins turning to ice, my heart was slowing down, and my breaths were getting shorter. Another ripple of pain surged through me, and I yelled out in pain. It was too intense; what was I becoming?
All I could see was blackness, and the blood draining from my eyelids. A voice came to my mind; "I'll come back for you, Edward." Bella; I needed her. Where was she going? Did she even say that? Or was my mind making things up now?
"Bel-," I gasped out, "Bella!" I said through clenched teeth.
Pain. Pain and silver bladed knives. That was all I could feel; the pain ripped through me viciously. "Bella!" I called out again. Nothing. There were no sounds, except for the ice coating my insides. "Bella!"
A loud crash sounded by my head; I knocked something over. "Bella!" I had to keep trying; she wouldn't leave without explaining. She had to be here…
XxxxX
October 30, 1918
The clocked ticked over and over; the pain was gone. I opened my eyes.
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A/N: Yes, a little Breaking Dawn part 1 ending. (All credit to Stephenie Meyer of course!) Now for the surprise: There's going to be a sequel! Who's excited for it?
I hope it doesn't really feel like I rushed into it. It probably does, but that might be because I'm the worst critic of work. I hope you liked it, and I hope you guys read the sequel!
I already had 6 chapters written for the sequel, so I'll post the first two for you guys either later tonight, or tomorrow; which do you guys prefer?
Review maybe? I love reading your comments, they're all so nice and you guys seem like you really enjoy the story, which keeps me writing for you all! So thank you so much for being really super cool and nice.