Sorry I was off for so long. I've been way busy. :) And I would like to point out a few things.
I like reviews.
I DON'T like flames, constructive criticism, however helpful you think it might be, it really brings me down.
Here's your next chapter of Onestar's Regrets. Enjoy and review!
I dipped my paw into the pool, rolling around the water, pulling out a dry paw. This water didn't even get your paw wet! I splashed at the water, frustrated and bored "Can this thing show me anything intresting?" I yowled to the stary sky. It had so many stars, it looked like a day sky. "Please?"
I stirred the water, willing something worth watching to come forth. Ha ha! My genius worked! I felt excitement bubble up inside as I watched ThunderClan return to their territory. The silky, midnight blue water lapped at the edges of StarClan's frosty, but warm, grass.
Oh, wait. This wasns't that intresting. They were just walking and walking...
"Wait! That one cat blinked!" I growled in deep sarcasm. Yes, Poppyfrost blinked and took a drink of water from the stream, making a face at a taste she didn't like. 'Could it have been the rabbit?' I thought. No. Just the open air.
Boredom kept flaring within me, until Poppyfrost fell and began to retch.
"Poppyfrost!" Screeched a gray she-cat. Cinderheart. The name popped into my head. Cinderpelt's reincarnation. A perk of StarClan I guess. Knowing which cat is this, which cat is that...
Cinderheart bounded over to her sister. Jayfeather pressed an ear to her and mewed, "She just isn't feeling well. Probably the heat of the battle made her queasy."
I pounded the water with my paw. Stupid, stupid, stupid! That rabbit! Why didn't I just... If Poppyfrost put that rabbit in the medicine den, and if the rabbit was what had made her sick, then it could infect all the remaining herbs in Kestrelflight's herb storage! I hit my head against a rock. Stuid, stupid, stupid!
"Uh, Onetstar?" Came a puzzled and amused voice. I frowned and looked up. Gorsepaw was standing there, ready to burst out purring in amusement.
"Don't . Even. Go. There." I spit.