Chapter 11, the 2 other admirals, and the leader

Okay! Go! Feraligator!" "Go! Venasaur!" "Ice punch!" It used energy ball after avoiding it. It completely knocked it clean

out. "Wah!" "Go! Alakazam!" He screamed. "Fire punch. It hit, but did nothing. It used tackle. It knocked it out. "Gah!

Gengar! Go!" It used energy ball. It was a one hit knock out. "Grr, Go! Staraptor!" He yelled. "Arial ace!" It used sludge

bomb for a one hit knock out. "No! Grr... Maractus! You're up!" It used sludge bomb, and knocked it out. "No! Ugh, Go! My

newest teammate! Luxray!" "Rain dance!" "Huh?" I said as it was raining. "Thunder!" "Energy ball!" The two collided, and

canceled out. "Huh!?" "One more time!" It hit. It also knocked it out. "Huh?" "Yeah, great!" I cheered. The rain then

faded, showing a rainbow. "Look at that... Return, please." "Vena!" It replied happily. I healed my Pokémon, and went to

Snowpoint city. "Wah!" Candice screamed. "Huh?" I entered the gym. "My Pokémon." Candice was sad. "Hah, you're a

pathetic excuse for a gym leader." A man said. He was about 5 foot 7, black hair, and seemingly always has a creepy smile

on his face. "Hey! Creepy clown!" I taunted. "Who dares call me a creepy clown!" "The same guy who dares call rex

pinhead, clown face!" "You!" "Yeah! You want a fight, i'll give you one that will wipe the smile off you're face!" "I accept

you're challenge, but I am Shadow! Terra's admin second in command!" "Then you'll be more fun to battle than pinhead."

"Likely, he was demoted to admin number three."Go! Zorork! "Go! Pidgeot!" "Swift!" It hit, but did nothing. "Humph. Fury

swipes." It hit. Pidgeot barley remained standing. "My ace, it can't be beat!" He said to his Pokémon. "We will see about

that! Go!" It used swift, with more effect. "Fury swipes. Ace was defeated. "No!" "Go! Volcano!" "Use Night slash." It

critical hit. "Heat wave!" It did. "Hah, you're just slightly more annoying than her. Night slash." It knocked Volcano out.

"No!" I screamed. "Swampert, go!" I yelled. "Earthquake!" It did, and hit. "Night slash." It critical hit, and knocked it out.

"My last one! Venasaur! Lets show him true power!" I screamed. "Energy ball!" It did. It was now very weak. "Huh!

What!?" "Go!" I screamed. "Night gaze." "Energy ball!" I would admit, being trapped in the corner was fun. Venasaur

stopped the energy ball suddenly. "Oh. I win." "Huh?! Night Gaze! What are you doing!?" It then collapsed. "No!" He

yelled. He handed me money, and left, screaming out in anger. "Hmph, impressive, but futile." A girl said. "I am Chelse!

The highest up of the Admins! "Let me heal you're Pokémon." Candice said. She did. "Hey, I'm here too!" Jack said,

entering the room. "I have four Pokémon, I'm not afraid to take on twelve." "Go! Volcarona and Heatmore!" "Go!

volcarona!" "Go! Feraligator!" "Psychic!" It hit them. "Double heat wave!" Feraligator didn't survive, and neither did

Volcarona. "No!" "Hah!" "Go! Dratini!" "Go! Alakazam!" "Fire punch on Alakazam, Flamethrower on Dratini." "No!" I

screamed. "No!" He screamed. Ala-kazam..." His pokemon fainted. "No..." "Dratini..." Dratini somehow endured the attack.

"Twister!" It did, and hit. "Hah. That did nothing!" "Both of you use flamethrower on dratini." She ordered. It was knocked

out. "Grr..." I growled. "Ace! Show them strength!" I yelled. "Go! Staraptor!" "Double heat wave." "No!" I yelled. "Swift!" I

ordered. "You use swift also!" They hit, making heat wave stop before it started. "Grr... Flame charge!" She ordered. "Avoid

it!" I yelled, and ace flew up and out of harms way. "Flame thrower!" Swift! Go!" I yelled. It hit both and pushed it back

hitting them. "What!?" "Go! Swift once more! Go!" I was angry at her for hurting my Pokémon. I explained earlier why.

"Go! You use swift also!" "They combined swifts knocked them out. "What!?" She was confused. "Grr... My last two... Go!

Quilava and Charizard!" "Swift!" We yelled. They were knocked out instantly. "My stupid weak Pokémon lost!" She yelled.

Then I went into a blind rage. I calmed down enough to see the carnage. I gotta say, it was nasty, extremely gross, and

involved more than one broken bone on her. "Uh... Someone remind me to never EVER call my Pokémon weak in front of

him. Ever." I just laughed and laughed. I took her quilava away from her. She didn't need it if she thought it was "weak".

"Well, I lost to shadow, and you beat him, so I guess I'll give you the badge." Candice said. "Well, let's go." "Okay." I

healed up my Pokémon, and that guy appeared. "Hey, it's you." "I must say, I did not expect you to beat them. I must

also say that you will not win." "Okay, even if I don't, I'll still have fun!" "Go! Golem!" "Go! Venasaur!" "Earthquake!"

Venasaur used energy ball. It stopped the earthquake, and knocked it out. "What?!" "Grr... Go! Dugtrio!" Venasaur used

energy ball. "Huh! Go! Golduck!" Again, it used energy ball for a quick knock out. "Grr, Go Probopass!" Venasaur used

energy ball. It knocked it out. "Graaaah! Go! The greatest Pokémon! Mamoswine! You won't beat him. No, you will not!"

He was angry. "Go! Venasaur! Lets do this!" I screamed as it used energy ball. It knocked it out. "What!? Nooo!" He

screamed.. "He most certainly has dirt for a brain." I thought "Way to go!" I screamed. He pulled out his wallet, gave me

money, turned, and sucker punched me. I knew who he was then. He was their leader. I took out their leader. It didn't

knock me out, but it knocked me down. "Grrr." "Out of the way, foolish Pokémon. I opened the other eye to see him

getting tackled, and sent flying. "Ha ha hah!" I laughed. "You okay?" I asked. "Ven!" He replied. Lets go to the last gym,

then." I said, and put it back in its poke ball. "Here I come, Volkner!" I said.

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Yes, Feraligator is spelled like that, but the ten character limit wouldn't allow it. It's Feraligatr because of that. I fixed the

spacing, it should be better now.